Extraordinary Profession: I Level the Ground with Artillery

These days, who writes a book with a sister in it? Books that don't involve killing off the protagonist's sister to prove their point generally don't get any readers! Hurry up and kill off the protagonist's sister, and I guarantee a ton of readers will come.

It's clear this is a novice author; there's still a lot of room for improvement in plot and writing style. With more reading and research, the future looks promising.

Speechless. When I saw the first page, the first line of the system actually called out the baby's name. I was stunned. It was the first time I'd ever seen something so amazing.

A railgun is utterly useless against supersonic speeds; it's completely useless. Close-range engagement would result in instant annihilation.

Great power must come from within; otherwise, you'll be betrayed and killed sooner or later. I really don't understand why anyone would write about this genre.

Did the author read "My Cannon Bombardment in the Extraordinary World"?

The latest chapter is obviously wrong. The job quests after specializing in light and dark materials should have one, and one should be eliminated. How could they be allowed to exist?

This is at a normal beginner level; please pay more attention to typos.

They both appeared in my daily reading list on the same day... How about you two have a fight? (Stirring things up. Jpg) The excerpts weren't side-by-side, making it difficult to take a screenshot; this was taken from a search.

If my skills aren't up to par, can't I just write a normal plot? The way you described the parents' deaths is quite unique, and you even planted a foreshadowing of the killer. I can only say I'm about to lose it.