Cultivation of Immortality: Accumulate and Make Progress, Starting from the Beginning of the Year

In-laws, where are the in-laws? Why didn't I see them 🤫

Rubbish book, don't click on it.

The protagonist is just a good-for-nothing good-for-nothing.

After reading Chapter 21 carefully, I seem to have discovered the reason why the author is so disappointed. There is too much chicken soup and I can't stand it anymore.

This kind of book, as long as the nanny flow is invisible, don't follow unnecessary trends, a bunch of younger sisters and younger brothers, and then throw in some self-righteous chicken soup for nothing, basically half of the world is gone. The world of this society is based on selfishness of human nature. You still act like a white lotus, but you don't believe it yourself.

After seeing 37 photos, I couldn't stand it. Are you cultivating immortality or practicing martial arts? Why can't your younger brother and sister practice together? Been around for more than 30 years. I don't even know the environment.

I hope the protagonist won't be written as a virgin bitch, I don't like eunuch stories!

The protagonist is too depressing, and it took so long to do any real harm to an early low-level villain, the village chief. His strength was absolutely suppressed, and his shoulder was only injured. Instead, my younger siblings were abused again. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I became. It seemed that there were a lot of arrangements, but in fact it was difficult to even understand basic thoughts. Discourage!

This author is a pure novice and writes articles that describe too many inner activities. It is normal for readers not to like it. Just imagine the protagonist's living environment and the author's setting of cultivating immortality. These are things that are impossible for normal people, but they are always described in the minds of the general public. It is strange that readers will buy into it. Mature authors will definitely describe the characters' inner thoughts, but those are used to extend and expand. To supplement the plot, for example, a character is angry inside, causing his face to look ugly. When people related to this character see this face, they immediately perform other extended behaviors. These extensions are the words written by the author, and there are not so many fancy and inconsequential inner activities of the author. To sum up, I came to the conclusion that this book can encourage the author by giving recommendation votes. The starting currency is still free. It would be embarrassing for me to pay to read it, but it is definitely not as bad as the book review said.

Logically speaking, there are nine levels of Qi training, divided into the early, middle and late stages. The first level of Qi training is at the same level as the second and third levels of Qi training. There is no qualitative change in energy, only a quantitative difference. And the protagonist has a level of Qi training, and has the "Silver Needle Technique" that has been strengthened by the panel. Under a sneak attack... You shouldn't be timid. As a result, a time traveler who has lived for such a long time is actually so honest and always insists on taking the right path. It's terrible. The protagonist tells himself at every turn: "I must become stronger!" What about foundation building, golden elixir... Inexplicably, he said it several times. The most important thing is that the protagonist cried, tears streaming down like beads... And he cried four or five times inexplicably "feeling". (That's what I saw) Oh my God! Can we be "principled externally, cold-blooded, murderous; internally principled, calm, calm and calm"? Don't feel too much. Those who don't know may think this is writing a composition. Concerning these issues, many readers may not be able to read on, so please be careful.

First of all, the author is most likely a college student, not even a college student. When writing a novel, as far as the first three chapters are concerned, is it necessary to be so precise with numbers? It's too inconsistent. Secondly, the hydrology is too obvious, so I like to use idioms and make big arguments at every turn. Also, if you want to write a righteous novel, I really recommend that you increase the talent of the protagonist. Otherwise, I can't imagine how an ordinary person can succeed. Another point is that the novel is too stiff😅😅

The protagonist is still too naive. He doesn't even kill people like the village chief and his family. They have bullied the protagonist over and over again and almost died. And killing is better than using one's own resources to make up for the sins. Can these resources allow the protagonist to reach the fifth level of Qi Refining in advance or run away with the caravan escorts and the like? And it is clear that the inner city cultivating family has committed all kinds of sins before. Even if you haven't read the fancy novels, you have heard of things like being rich.

Some statistics are meaningless and have big loopholes. How about counting only one in a hundred in a village, towns, counties, counties, prefectures, etc. After all, people go to higher places, just like the proportion of millionaires, tens of millions, and billionaires in modern times. There are many big cities, but many of them are from small places. It is unreasonable for the three adults in the family to live such a difficult life. Should they all die, including the elder and the younger? I don't know after only reading a few chapters. As for some of the remarks about taking the right path and not stealing, I can only think of it as an advanced stage of mental illness.

Garbage, dog licking, poison warlock.

You just swore to become an immortal and become an ancestor for nothing. You can't stand it. You have no talent and no resources. If you don't cheat, who are you? Your heart is as high as the sky, and your life is as thin as paper.

When I open the introduction, I see the proficiency panel. I'm so speechless.

Not bad. The writing style needs to be improved and could be simplified.

What kind of temper does the protagonist have? He's just crazy. I would have known better and read the comments before clicking in.

Come on, I hope the author can continue to maintain a positive style, it is very interesting. Let me remind you that there is too much chicken soup, and the layout of Shuangdian is not good enough. The system article should be about working hard quietly and then breaking out, rather than talking about too much chicken soup.

The chapter names are pretty good, but it's a pity that the writing is a bit weak. It would be pretty good if it could be crafted more carefully.

Xiandao, you are rushing to rebel, alas

It's only been a few chapters and I'm already impatient, two female characters have been labeled

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The village chief is not dead, which is very upsetting.

Is the one named Qin the heroine? Why does the protagonist have to help someone who is innocent by chance, and why does he fall in love with an oiran inexplicably?

Why are there so many bad reviews? I'm going to try poison.

Just like the title, readers can tell you what you feel is not good, there is no need to cross it out. 😥😥😥 As long as there are no curses, no personal attacks, and no violations, all comments are good. Of course, it would be better if it helps increase subscriptions. It has been nearly four years since I wrote the book, and I have written at least six million words, but I am still struggling. I am indeed mediocre, even useless. I have no resources or connections, and no master will come to guide me for free. I can only read the guides of editors and masters myself, read, research, and write. Dear readers, I really want to make progress🥺🥺🥺. I really want to write a novel that everyone will like to read. You can tell us any good suggestions and ideas you have. Don't worry, I'm not the kind of person who doesn't have my own opinion. I'll be led astray when others say it, so don't worry about disturbing me. I will make adjustments according to my own situation and strive to improve the quality of the novel. Welcome all readers to visit us for guidance. 😍😍😍 Finally, it's okay to give opinions, but don't attack me personally. For example, the writing is just a mess, a running account, the writing is too bad, the plot is old-fashioned, and the setting is full of loopholes. If this is the case, I will get jade syndrome, woo woo woo. 😢😢😢

The protagonist's younger siblings can naturally live to old age and die

Wang Ping's character in the first volume is an honest man. In the second volume and beyond, there is no Virgin who is decisive in killing, and there is a trace of kindness remaining under the devil.