Mystery: Priestess

Speaking of which, could the original owner of the protagonist's body just want to change into a male body and take the path of a witch?

As for the heroine No. 1, I just want to say that she is really a time traveler. The more I look at it, the more she looks like a tool man. The specific ingredients are the male tool man assembled from Adam's writing and sent to the real heroine, the female witch, to become her concern and anchor, which can be used to tie and control her. Not to mention the witch who came to backstab Chike, it also gave collaborator Kuroyoru an agent who could directly interfere with the original protagonist group, and also served as a tool for backstabbing the sage. Otherwise, it would be impossible to explain that a sacred object like the goddess is enough for you to indulge in random madness. As for the second heroine, just looking at it reminds me of last year's unfinished book Witches and Disasters. Personally, I have read Chapter 127 so far, and depending on the development, I still follow the original plot, but now I feel that the two female protagonists are split and redundant. The split is mainly based on the fact that although the number one heroine entered the Tarot Club at the beginning, her role is not only to steal a few lines of the original character The lewd lines did not have any effect. On the contrary, after Tingen, she turned to peeping like Amon and instigating divisions and poaching against the members. In addition to being a purely selfish person, her behavior was like a good dog in the dark night who is so rich that I lick her. The actions and trajectory of the second heroine, the Crazy Witch, are more like a time-traveler who has cheated. She has a lot of knowledge and equipment and is not short of money. Those time-travelers who know the starting point of the plot can only be so cheated. The battle will be won and absolutely crushed, except for the God of Tingen who was killed and retreated by the plot. In his free time, he can also disguise his identity as an undercover Witch Church to pay attention to his relatives, and provide all kinds of information to the Tarot Club without any desire until he starts to go crazy. It can be said that if things continue like this, these two people will be useless to the Tarot Society and may face being stabbed in the back or being maliciously dragged into some bad things.

Definitely not getting married! Originally, I wanted to add it to the introduction, but the background review failed... I can't change the introduction for 7 days... Sigh One or a hundred depends on how far I can write under the starting point rules [face covering Continue to read, click on the latest chapter. The new book seedlings need everyone's love.

After reading a little bit, the writing is quite good. Here, I want to ask, is it a hundred marriage orders? Here, I would like to give the author some suggestions. In most of the Lord of Mysteries fanfics I read, Klein is particularly licked and almost becomes his nanny. This should be avoided. In addition, it is recommended that the protagonist should not be a good person. After all, the world view is there. The stronger you are, the more alienated you will be.

Tessa (suspected to be the original Claire, who made a deal with a female witch because of her desire for the extraordinary) There is no doubt that the one she likes (should be considered a liking?) Is Tai. Currently, it seems that during the reincarnation ceremony, Jiang's arrival caused the ceremony to fail; perhaps Jiang was Tai, but his previous memories were suppressed; or perhaps the ceremony was half successful, and Tai's soul passed successfully, causing the body to be occupied by Jiang. No matter what, the heroine will definitely have an entanglement with Tessa (it's already written on the character card) Suggestions: 1. If the heroine plans to reconcile with Tessa, please don't accept her so easily. At least give Tessa a set of imprisonment services, punish her severely, and let this bad woman get the punishment she deserves. 2. If the heroine does not intend to reconcile with Tessa, then capture and seal Tessa. In front of her, the heroine and others (can be Miss Justice 😁) will post crazy stickers. If nothing happens, just show off in front of Tessa, so that Tessa can't get what she wants! Asking for it but not getting it.

It's annoying to see returning to Earth. Why does every time traveler have to return to Earth?

Put some pictures

I just want to ask Old Neil if it is necessary to save him. Is there any point in dying just for the sake of saving? . .

At present, it is the path of the general, and then it is suspected that the gift of the hidden sage (can the general use the eye of voyeur?), Part of the authority of Yuanbao, the residual ability of the assassin instigator, the favor of the goddess of the night and the holy object

First, the protagonist has never read the original work. He has to solve Old Neil's problem alone within three days of joining. Don't I understand that he is really so emotional? There is also a foreshadowing in the early stage (the two girls are said to be preparing to save Old Neil later), saying that the protagonist can report to his superiors early if he is kind (isn't the protagonist a favored person by God?), Which is a bit strange. The second one is that the protagonist climbed up to the Source Castle on his own to party. Xiao Ke didn't show any reaction at all (it's said that he is cowardly or reckless, he has to have some reaction. How come he didn't react at all, and Xiao Ke also guessed whether the protagonist was the priestess). This is a bit general. Maybe the author has his own ideas, but I don't have too many questions. Third, the protagonist knows that Emperor Russell is a time traveler. And no one in the world can understand Chinese, but Xiao Ke acts like he does. The protagonist himself doubts whether Xiao Ke understands it. Why didn't he test it? The protagonist obviously always wanted to go back in the early stage, and he is still a occult baby (doesn't know anything). Logically speaking, he doesn't have so many precautions, so he should test it (for example, say vague Chinese when he is with Xiao Ke). The fourth one, Tesha is the heroine,,,,,,, I'm not sure if the protagonist knew about Tesha's ceremony. But as far as exploring the memory is concerned, if there is no indication, then it must be unknowing. The witch who helped Tessa also said that Tessa was the only one who succeeded (it seems that the mortality rate is not small). The protagonist was executed by Tesha in a ritual with a high death rate. Can she still be the heroine? She almost killed the protagonist and herself (although we know that the protagonist traveled through time, the original owner must be dead). Before it was released, it was written that the protagonist and the heroine were a bit ambiguous (it felt a bit). It feels like I'm watching a female video (although she scolds me, hits me and hurts me, but he loves me 🙂, that's the feeling). The above is my opinion. I don't know what the opinions of the brothers who have seen it on the shelves are, and what the subsequent plot will be like. If it is good, I will come back and watch it. Finally, I was prepared to have my comments deleted and banned. If the author deletes the comment and bans it, I will not attack him personally, so think more about how to write a book and don't engage in unnecessary dialogue.

I don't quite understand why you chose to be a sage. First of all, you set up a plot in which a man is transformed into a woman through a reincarnation ceremony after time travel, and the protagonist himself has self-identification as a male. If you follow your inner thoughts, you should follow the hunter path to become a man in Sequence 4.        ， But the so-called spirituality is very exclusive to the diviner path, or you don't want the protagonist to occupy the Source Castle. According to the reincarnation ceremony, the original owner is Tai, who has been marked and contaminated by the hidden sage during the ceremony. Then can it be concluded that the rejection and desire for diviners originate from the pollution of the Hidden Sage, which makes them repelled, and the experience of falling into the Source Castle makes them instinctively long for the Origin Castle or the extraordinary sequence of the Gou San Family. And choose a generalist? How do you want to go the sequential route? Based on the extraordinary laws of adjacent pathways, people who are marked and contaminated by concealment become generalists, and they are under the command of the night. Do you want to get the next steam girl to come out, or do you want her to jump through pathways and be promoted to sequence 0 hermit? Based on the reader's perspective, either you are a time traveler, or on the basis of the stability of the old bacon of Source Castle, taking the path of becoming a hermit as a generalist is more palatable than your current choice. You will filter out a group of readers. Those who want to change their gender either want to have a taste of witches, or they want to see how to struggle to Sequence 4 and become a hunter. You can directly become a generalist... Even if they are natives and old bacon, we readers still hope to see a protagonist who is at least Sequence 0 level, not a salty fish who can only shout 666 after the initial barrier collapses. Do you need to be so entangled in your design? To be honest, I personally hope that Claire will become a hunter. It's not necessary to turn back into a man, but your front row is all about regaining the male body, and you also know that Tai is already a witch. Are you forcing yourself to suffer from obsessive-compulsive disorder? So your approach and character are not pleasing to the eye, and you have screened out a large number of readers. I am an old mystery fan reader. I have spent at least more than a thousand reading fan fiction. I have at least 60 fan books on the bookshelf. You have successfully screened me out! In fact, I haven't read this book for at least half a year. After I added it to my bookshelf, I read the first three chapters, and then I decided to read the others. At that time, I probably read the new Black Emperor. When I ran out of books to read, I looked back and saw that I couldn't even see VIP. . . An old reader's wish made me say such a long list. In fact, I can read many fans, even I, who is a witch, have seen sequence three. But I have to take my time with this book of yours. I'll try it again that day when I'm in a book shortage. Goodbye, comrade author!

The protagonist of the fanfic is very toxic if he doesn't know the plot. He has already read the fanfic and has to watch Klein again to show off.

Author, if you think so, everyone just doesn't want the protagonist to be kept in the dark. The reader has a God's perspective and knows some things that the protagonist does not know. When reading the text again, it feels strange. Everyone likes to be the Riddler, but they don't want to be riddled by the Riddler. Everyone likes to see the protagonist show off, but they don't want to see others show off in front of the protagonist. This is a bit like a double standard, I can do it, but you can't. I'm okay. The protagonist has already begun to test the Fool. I believe he will know about it later. As long as you are not kept in the dark all the time, or there is no progress in testing the fool (it is best to know a little information at every gathering or after a while) I can accept it. As for Sharon, I would like to give you some advice: don't let the protagonist be deceived for too long. It means that the protagonist only knows about it later in the story. It is best to let the protagonist know in the early and middle stages of the story, and the latest in the middle of the story. Also, the protagonist cannot easily forgive Tessa. This can be regarded as a story about chasing his wife in the crematorium. After all, Tessa is deceiving the protagonist (referring to Sharon). No matter what she does for the protagonist as Sharon, she can't hide this. If Tessa, as Sharon, saves the protagonist's life, the protagonist will be grateful to Sharon. Personally, I don't really like this kind of plot, it's quite a bit like stand-in literature. I previously swapped bodies without permission, and then sexually transformed the protagonist's body without the protagonist's permission. These can be regarded as the "crimes" Tessa committed against the protagonist. If you want to be forgiven, it is best for Tessa to come in person, in her own face. As Sharon, one of the main tasks is companionship. The rest should be left to Tessa herself. Whether Tessa sacrifices her life to save the protagonist regardless of danger, or Tessa accepts the protagonist's punishment, these can allow the protagonist to forgive Tessa to a certain extent, and time can resolve the rest. A bad woman who gets punished is a good bad woman.

Why does Tessa have more likes than the main character? Do you like bad women that much?

It seems so awkward that the protagonist keeps using his name before time travel.

It's well written, but can you change the Chinese name into an English name or something? It seems a bit weird.

The protagonist's business with Klein is a success. 80% Of the materials are collected on a long-term basis, and he is given a share of the profits. Logically speaking, just collect 80% of the materials for a long time.

No one said anything? The protagonist, a generalist, recited the Chinese honorary name directly without the consent of the original owner Klein, and he also vaguely has the authority of Source Castle to see the contents of other people's embodied diaries. (Note: The original work clearly states that Roselle failed to respond when trying the ritual)

There are very few MD Mystery fanfics that focus on assassins or female protagonists and can finish them.

Why eunuch, I hate you

Alas, I read it again. It's actually really good. Why did I stop updating it?