Building a Sacred Sect from Scratch

In my humble opinion, since the Hidden World Sect at least has the sect's background and can recruit some strong elders, the elders and deacons and hair care workers are all outsiders, so what kind of Hidden World Sect is that?

The author even got the positioning of the book wrong. The title of your book is a development flow, but you wrote it as a personal show-off flow for the protagonist.

When I first read the title of the book, I thought it was about sect development. After reading a few chapters, it turned out that the protagonist was personally recommended by Invincible.

I was deceived by the title of the book,,, bad review, bad review

How to say it. The story develops too fast, and the description of many key things is too vague and too rushed. The content of the novel puts the cart before the horse, and the disciple sect has become a vassal. Instead, a large amount of ink is devoted to describing the upgrade of the protagonist. Eight chapters out of ten are at the same level. There is almost no communication between the disciples and the protagonist, it is just a lottery ticket. I have put so much effort into designing so many sect constructions, but the process is just passed by in one stroke, and there is no picture at all in my mind. Watching the sect flow is nothing more than the pleasure of infrastructure construction. Watching the sect expand step by step and watching the disciples grow up step by step gives you the joy of a good harvest. But now this part of the content has been omitted, and it has become the protagonist's legendary road, and it has become the protagonist's combat power bonus. In addition, it just isn't exciting enough. One of the great things about Zongmen style is how advanced the sect's infrastructure is, which makes outsiders' jaws drop. As a result, no one can even enter your house. Except for the gate guard array, other things are not shown at all. There are even very few scenes of disciples using the infrastructure. The same goes for disciples. They reported the name of a dish, but in the end they didn't even have a rough idea of ​​interpersonal relationships. I hope to increase the description of this part and increase the sense of existence of the Zongmen style setting. If I wanted to see the protagonist become invincible, I wouldn't watch Zongmen-ryu and just watch Side-pushing.

Like some forbidden dungeon or secret realm dungeon, the setting is very high, but there is no corresponding performance. I don't know what the point is if I clear the level in minutes.

Happy New Year, this book is good, it just needs to be updated.

I just don't understand why the green and white rewards are necessary. After all, they haven't appeared a few times so far.

If you want to write about fantasy, write it well. If you write about martial arts, you will make me vomit.

Is it a studio article? It's not refined but all negative comments have been deleted 🙂