The Wizard: Becoming a Nightmare and Invading All Realms

Now that we have food, what about the water the human body needs?

There is no wizard flavor, and I cannot see the intellectual paranoia, research, and exploration of truth that belong to wizards. It's a fantasy novel in the skin of a wizard, and the protagonist is just Goldfinger's slave. The protagonist of the wizard novel does not engage in research, and everything is deduced by Goldfinger. There is nothing to say.

If it's not a necessary setting, I still think you shouldn't make some messy things.

Saying that terrestrial creatures and resources are rich and coveted? No, buddy, are you okay?

Super Dimensional Wizard is water, but it has a really strong wizard flavor. It should have three thousand chapters now, and there are too many side plots. The author can learn from it, but don't imitate others.

I simply divided the location area first, and will add modifications later.

Chapter 14, entering a dormitory building, the protagonist has a golden finger and has been tricked. Are there any living people in this freshman dormitory? 🤔

I didn't even remember the protagonist's name after watching it 😭

Killing your own people is a pointless internal drain on resources. Used for wool

The protagonist with a blank mind has become a wizard... The plot is weak

Are you sure what you are writing is about wizards and not weird stories?

I thought it was pretty good at first, but it turned out that I had to replace the chip.

I changed the skin chip and read ten chapters. I will talk about the negative points, because for me, I really can't stand it anymore. Almost the person in charge of a kingdom is the big knight, and the person who sends him to kill is the big knight. In the end, a pirate or any other soldier is a big knight🤥

It seems that all wizard novels will end up becoming blood warlocks😴

Why don't you just change it to a fanfic about the sorcerer? It would be easier to write.

Please end the trial plot as soon as possible. I really have no interest in the trial, it's super boring. The few wizarding novels I have read recently are all arranged with trial plots after entering the wizarding force 😅

The Witcher: Starting from Becoming a Nightmare/Starting from Becoming a Nightmare to Attack (Invasion or Invasion) All Realms 🙂 The title of this book should be quite straightforward, and it should be more attractive than the current one😂 Do you think it is better to use the former one or the latter one? If you use the latter one, which word is better🧐

I guess I gave up because it wasn't on the shelves.

The hook is getting bigger and bigger, the chip is not enough, and more cultivation is needed.