The Supernatural Returns, and I Become an Evil Spirit

I started to get tired of seeing the woman who killed the protagonist still there.

The heroine is too stupid, I suggest Aunt Mei be the heroine

Although the heroine has killed the hero and looks like a monster, what did you say? After all, she is a girl~😰😰😰

1. It's a bit nonsense. 2. There is no conditioning, and half of what you say is always followed by that. 3. I have read all chapters from the beginning to now. The heroine really has something wrong with her head. Either forget this or forget that. Knowing that there is a ghost but still moving forward is really a bit silly for forcing me to write! ! ! (This is the most poisonous point) 4. The male protagonist and the female protagonist have the same problem. The writing is a bit silly, a bit stiff, and it is forced to be written to flatter women. Every time I see the heroine or a young woman like the heroine, it is written in an angry way, which makes me feel uncomfortable while reading it. (Fourth, I have a personal opinion. You said you hurt me to death, and I am right to be angry with you. But I can't be angry with everyone. After all, you did not write about the characteristics of the ghost in the premise. You wrote ghosts based on human thoughts. You did not say anything about what is written in other novels. །Thinking less ། hates people who kill themselves or people of the same age །) You write about the protagonist or other ghosts throughout the novel. They are all self-aware. Even those dark shadows are there, and sometimes I felt like the main character was a bit neurotic. 5. The heroine's family is too chaotic, and she is not an ordinary third party. I know that the author wants to innovate and have some fun, but to be honest, it is really not suitable for the subject of this novel. Your novel made me read a bit too much. If the protagonist is a little crazy, it will be okay, but it is because he is not crazy, and he is a bit of a virgin. 6. Whether it is the name of your novel or the introduction, it strongly disagrees with the content of your novel. When I first read the title of the novel, I thought it would be something like ghosts and gods. Looking at the introduction. I thought it was something like the summoning of evil spirits, and I was reading the content of the novel. Indescribable. 7. I think some parts of the content are relatively smooth, worthy of mentioning, and worthy of praise, but the overall content and world view are not clearly expressed. (The above are all my personal opinions. I didn't sleep all night and just read this novel. To be honest, I was in the mood to read it, but also felt that I didn't want to read it. It's too nonsense and the progress is too slow, especially the heroine. Sometimes it's really annoying and nothing else.)

I feel better starting from the third chapter

When there is a strong force to conquer those messy things, this strong force has the qualification to make rules. Jiang He's ability feels like he will become the protector of this world.

The development of this plot always feels difficult. Xiao Min feels that she has no vigilance at all. She is also a big mouth. Not only does she say everything, but she always criticizes others, for fear that others will not know that she has a problem.

Emmm, let me test everyone First question Who is the protagonist Second question Is this a female video?

I suggest the author change the introduction and then the plot. Delete all female characters that will appear in more than three chapters in a row. In the domestic environment, if you write traditional anthropomorphic ghosts, it is easy to overturn. If you don't overturn, it will not make you popular. This is determined by market rules. It's the same no matter how you write. If you look at other people's writings about weirdness, they all avoid the human nature of the supernatural. On the one hand, Wei doesn't speak and doesn't communicate with anyone. On the one hand, it dehumanizes those who control the power of evil. For example, their personalities will change drastically, and most of them will become cruel and violent. Even if they haven't reached this level, they will be forced step by step as the life span is continuously shortened by the mysterious force, and in the end they will gradually go crazy and become cold-blooded and depressed. You have to understand that ghosts are not ghosts. In the supernatural web articles that can be written in modern times, there is no underworld, let alone the merits of gods! All tricks are extremely malicious to people. Even if it isn't, it's just hypocritical and cruel. Even if it is really parasitic on the human body, it will use all means to kill the host all the time. Not to mention anyone else... Not anyone, mind you, I said anyone! It won't coexist with anyone, not even trying. If you bring the protagonist into a strange vision, it will naturally be difficult to write. If you look too human, your book won't sell well, and you might even get banned. Not human? It's harder for you to write. Because you don't know how to describe Wei's thinking, let alone advance the plot. The previous author of the supernatural web article created the system of controlling strange people. Do you think that's funny? That is necessary to avoid logical contradictions in writing. Even the previous web article also set up that even the protagonist's humanity will eventually be wiped out by the strange rules, which means that the original owner is dead. If you want to write about pure mystery, even if you have human consciousness, you have to face it. Instead of writing about women and copying urban harem stallion routines, it is better to dig deeper into the strange settings and add, subtract and modify from places that are not covered in ordinary supernatural texts. For example: Gui's supernatural power is strong and weak, why? Why must Gui kill Ren? For example: Wei's supernatural power is actually not unlimited. The existence of ghosts will consume their strength, and they must kill to survive. The thing that can best replenish strength is living people, and only lives at the level of living people can strengthen and upgrade Gui. Killing cattle and sheep is just to survive. With this setting, the protagonist is no exception. In other words, it is set that the protagonist must also kill Ren from time to time, otherwise he will die completely. The protagonist has human consciousness, do you think we should set him to try not to kill Ren? You are wrong. This is a poisonous point. What if you go against the grain and set the protagonist's intelligence to be higher than other tricks, and his thinking to be more complex, so he consumes more energy? Not only can he not reduce it, he must kill a few more every month. Maybe it will attract a group of readers immediately. For another example, why must there be rules for killing Ren? It turns out that the environment in which they live prevents them from acting in violation of the rules of killing benevolence. Previous supernatural articles wrote about how people find the rules of ghosts, how to use their own supernatural powers or props to fight against ghosts, and how to imprison ghosts. You do the opposite: be familiar with your own supernatural abilities, cover up and mislead others, so that others cannot guess the protagonist's movement restrictions and killing methods. Of course, human exorcists cannot be fools, otherwise the plot will not move and the book will collapse if pushed too hard. However, it does not mean that you should set a certain level and then level up. That's cliché and inferior. But: Human beings target the protagonist, and after several failures, they use their brains, and they also think. They also cover up their abilities and perform their own images and characters. To mislead the protagonist. The confrontation between the two sides has become a matter of collecting information and clues from each other, deducing and guessing the other party's abilities and behavioral tendencies, and then testing each other and reasoning layer by layer. Continuous reversal during the period. For example, plot example: After observing for many times, the protagonist finally takes action and kills an exorcist in uniform. Result: Protagonist: Oops, I am an ordinary person, but I have no power. I fell into a trap! Another person next to him rushed up waving a containment tool: Actually, the exorcist here this time is me. I asked a mortal to pretend to be me, deliberately leaving my charm on him, and used my abilities around him several times to confuse your sight, and you were fooled. I have measured clearly many times. Once you kill Ren, you must stop for at least 15 seconds, but I can kill you in 7 seconds. You lose. The protagonist shifted instantly after a few seconds, and killed the exorcist with a backhand shot: Haha, but I lied to you for the 15 seconds of stasis. In fact, I will only freeze for 5 seconds! I won! Fortunately, I pretended to be a pig and ate the tiger... Ah~ kill this one, this is a slave! It's not a strange power level! I've fallen into the trap again. An old lady walked out among the civilians: Your ability is teleportation. You can teleport others as well as yourself. The maximum range is 10 meters at a time. You cannot move for 5 seconds after teleporting. I have seen through you! Protagonist: So what if you know? You mortal... What? ! Such a rhyme! Are you the real exorcist? ! I admit that you do have some brains and you actually figured out my abilities and limitations, but so what? All the equipment you brought this time cannot detain me within 5 seconds, unless... Old lady: Then are you going to kill me? Your next sentence will be "How is this possible?!" The protagonist teleports, but finds that his range of activities is disturbed within 5 square meters and cannot leave. He is shocked: How is this possible? ! There is no gold resistance circle nearby, how can you restrict me? Old lady: You have completely lost. Let me tell you the truth. My ability is hypnotic hallucination. The limitation is that I can only hypnotize up to three people at a time. I first implanted the thinking of two civilians as exorcists and some supernatural knowledge, so that their acting would be realistic. Sending the black leather shoes, a supernatural prop, to the second dead person and letting him activate his ability will mislead you into thinking that this time the exorcist's ability is to step on the target's shadow and immobilize the target. So you took away the light on the ceiling before teleporting over, thinking it was safe. The protagonist rushes to say: You also hypnotized a child and asked him to recognize you as his grandmother, so as to confuse the public and prevent me from suspecting that you are an exorcist! But... Where exactly is the gold resistor? The old lady grinned with a crazy expression, more like a trickster than the protagonist: Who told you that I hypnotized him? He is my grandson, but he doesn't know that I am an exorcist. Not only does he not know, but his parents and brothers also don't know! He really thought I took him to the amusement park today. The person I hypnotized was either him or you! You think there is no gold resistor here, but I didn't let you see it! In front of the protagonist's eyes, ghost-hunting equipment collapsed out of thin air and surrounded the room. The protagonist trembles and asks: I stole the bolts of the Ferris wheel before. It is really going to collapse, and your grandson is on top! You personally sent him to sit on it! You were just crying next to me~ Is this all an act? ! The old lady looked ferocious: Yes, he will die, so what? ! He is just a mortal, a despicable thing like an insect. He will die if he dies. It is his honor to die for me. My binding method cannot be broken through, and now Huan Menggui will come back to kill me in half a year at most. When I imprison you, I will use your ability to find a master in exchange for the second half of the method, and extend your life by another sixty years. The protagonist shakes his head: Beast... Beast~ You have no humanity, you are more cunning than me! The old lady screamed: You are just a trickster who has good luck and contaminates people's thinking and memory. What qualifications do you have to talk to me about human nature? ! Haha, what kind of son, what kind of grandson, what kind of relatives and friends? ! I was admitted to a nursing home because I pretended to have foot pain. Did they see me once a year? It's all fake! Only my own strength is real! You saw that I am an old lady and an old woman and you decided that I was useless and looked down on me, didn't you? This is the root of your failure! I've had enough, why is the whole world staring at young people? Even if you look at old people, are you just looking at old men who hold power? ! I have been young and beautiful, and I have contributed to the country and my family. What is the result? ! My appearance and figure are gone, my knowledge is out of date, my children have grown up, and they just kicked me aside! Hehehe~ Well~ Hahaha... I don't need any sons or grandchildren, or any filial daughter-in-law. Only the weak pray for these. I am the strong one who binds ghosts and gods! I just want to throw tiles now! Throwing tiles means longevity. Throwing tiles allows me to get whatever I want. Throwing tiles means everything! ! ! I just want to step on the trash like you who look down on me, step by step, step by step, to reach the highest level! I want to be an immortal ghost and god! Be obedient and turn it into a resource for my advancement. Protagonist: Actually, before I chose to hunt in this building, I bribed the construction workers to secretly poke a hole in the floor of each room and then filled it with new floor tiles, in order to destroy the possible gold foil on the ground. The protagonist disappeared instantly, but he didn't dare to kill the old lady again because he didn't know if there were any traps in the room where the old lady was. The old lady is crazy: You can't escape, teleportation! I will catch you and turn you into a magical weapon, from which you will never be freed! You run away~ Hee hee hee~ It will be a matter of time sooner or later if you run away again~

At first glance, I thought it was an invincible novel, but when I read it, it seemed like a fantasy book. However, when I read it, it felt like an urban suspense book.