Traveling Through the Troubled World of Monsters, I Can Increase My Attributes

It's too tiring, there are too many things that shouldn't be written, many of them have nothing to do with the protagonist, and they have no meaning in advancing the plot! It's like reading a history book, but it's not as concise as a book. There are only a few lines of text in one chapter. If you want to write like this, write multiple protagonists. If there is only one protagonist, you shouldn't always focus on other places. The background introduction you want can be reported by the protagonist's subordinates or the protagonist can inquire about it himself. Your writing method is really tiring. The story is only a few days old, and there is no core attraction. I write here and there, and I can't grasp the center and read it! If you want to continue writing, I hope you will focus on the protagonist, rely on the scenery on the road, and the stories of the people around the protagonist: Seeing the big from the small! Outlining the frame of the world, this way of writing is interesting, the readers are not tired, and the plot has not changed. I hope you will think about it.

Insert wards, insert wards, wait for further development😆😆

It feels like the author wanted to write an article with many Taneda-style elements, but this kind of literary style may be a little acclimated to fantasy. I think the writing is quite good, but most readers in the fantasy area prefer to watch the protagonist's personal fights and killings, and are not very accepting of slow-paced farming stories. If it were in the fantasy and history area, it would probably have a lot of readers.

This is another author who doesn't know how to grasp the rhythm. It took him a long time to write the Battle of the Capital, but the protagonist just didn't arrive! The emperor is dead, and the protagonist is still on his way here on horseback! I was really speechless!

Readers can also discuss the plot and characters as much as they want, and accept their criticism and pointers. There is no fan limit, as long as there are no personal attacks. I may not necessarily like the comments from readers, but I will definitely read them. If there are typos and other problems, you can also point them out in the paragraph comments. The first volume is coming to an end. Some people may have doubts about the plot direction. The author will answer it after reading the comments.

Okay, come on, come on, come on

Fantasy needs a million words to get started, right?

How many times a day is it updated? Is it updated at night?

Now that I've finished writing the big background, it's time to write about small tasks and events. Let's look at some more weird and bizarre stories.

I stumbled across Chapter 23 and I didn't want to read it. It's a weird novel. The writing is okay, but what on earth are you writing about? Even historical novels are not that outrageous. I write a little bit here and a little bit there. The protagonist's golden finger feels useless. It's just the icing on the cake. It has a strong ability to persuade people to quit.

The author's introduction states that he wants to write a heroic view of history. I wonder if the author can write a protagonist who leads mankind forward and a people's view of history.

I came here to read Shuangwen, but the more I read, the more inappropriate it becomes.

Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. I'm here to see you add some points, not a pseudo-historical article. Start off the upgradable battlefield and risk your life to change history into imitation history...

I feel that the map I made by myself is not very good. First of all, I have no time. It is difficult to update it twice a day. In addition, there are predecessors who have done it first, so I will not show my shame. But I found that without a map, readers are unclear about place names and locations. Fortunately, this book is based on the late Tang Dynasty. Many masters have made maps of the late Tang and late Tang Dynasties. The name of the creator is on the map. The protagonist is in Gyeonggi after traveling through time, and then goes to Shannan West Road and Jiannan Road in the second volume.

Just saw the end of the battle in the capital. It's pretty good, but it's a pity it's not exciting enough. I don't know if the author is sure of the follow-up

I'm from Tieba, come and take a look 😄

Okay, I hope to send an Easter egg chapter to show the distribution of map strength and so on.