Mortal: I Have the Fantasy Westward Journey System

The protagonist's sister has double spiritual roots, her two best friends have double spiritual roots, and the adopted orphan also has spiritual roots. There are so many people with spiritual roots in a small town with only two streets. The writing is a bit too childish. This is a world where mortals are cultivating immortality.

I feel that the protagonist is not very bright, and there is a kind of two coins unique to the protagonists of ancient Shuang novels.

I have read so many mortal novels, and this is the first time that someone robs his benefactor. The other protagonists, at most, do nothing to save their own people and only help their own people.

Fangcun Mountain, really paired with spiritual beasts, is already dirty to see😏

The author is not a good person, otherwise he would not be able to write such a plot

The writing is good. In fact, some dark and bloody plots (destroying a whole family) can be blurred or brushed off, mainly because I am afraid that you will be cheated 😏

Good evening, this biography of a mortal cultivating immortality is very well written and very interesting. Also very bold. It looks great.

The writing was pretty good, but I didn't like the protagonist who took the initiative to become a robber and hunted down the person who led the protagonist.

The writing is very good, and it is very interesting based on the biography of a mortal cultivating immortality.

I don't think it's good to take the initiative to kill people, even if it's to seduce people with evil intentions.

Come on!

Is 109 considered the late stage of Qi training or foundation building?

What are you writing about in Chapter 11? 💩