Transmigrating Together, Starting in the Age of Blossoms

It's a very good book, but I would like to make a small suggestion. Let one die and let them change their mentality. Now they always think that they are the protagonist and don't care about the danger. 1. Are the elders of the demon sect so kind-hearted that they would teach you magical skills whenever they meet? Too taken for granted. It's like meeting a rich man with no children on the road. He asked me to give me a share of his property. 2. When I met the man-eating Yu clan, I was originally fighting, but when I saw it turned into a child, I immediately lost my guard. It was like being blown up by firecrackers during the Chinese New Year. I turned around and saw that it was a child who set it off. I immediately fell in love with this child and bought him candies. 😰

CSs like Xu Fengnian had better not get too close to him

I just want to see the flowers, that doomsday mixed martial arts thing. It's good to be a cheat, but in the end you want to open three ways? What is this thing? Do you understand the precise targeting of reader types? If you want all three, then you can't get all three! I watched Fanhuaxian very well. Who the hell wants to watch your mixed martial arts show Doomsday Line? I'm so annoyed. This way of writing is disgusting.

How can I put it, the hook is too big and the jump is too fast. The author may have difficulty writing this book after three or four hundred chapters. The characteristic of 99 style is sharing talents instead of exchanging skills. For example, it is like playing Haki in Bleach. Every world has its own world view. Why don't you understand? This is why 99 was the starting point but has never been surpassed.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 22. The author's writing is very messy. First person and third person are mixed together. Storytelling and novel are mixed together. There are too many punctuation marks. The plot is as cliche as it was ten years ago. Many plots feel like they were written on top of each other and slapped on the forehead. But I can still read it. It is really a book that can be read. If it is not cooked, don't blame me if you eat raw melon and eggs.

The previous one was okay, but the appearance of Teng Teng was a bit baffling and she was not the main character's daughter. The three sentences are inseparable from this little girl. All the characters like her and help her feel the heroine of watching the female video again.

1980S literary online novels...

It was written well before, but why did a daughter suddenly appear? I felt awkward all of a sudden, and the content I wrote suddenly became wordy and blank,,,,

Writing about mixed martial arts usually doesn't end well. Because time is messed up, most people can't grasp it.

It's smooth, absolutely. If you weren't poisoned to death by Chapter 13, you're considered great.