Transmigrating Together, Starting in the Age of Blossoms

It's a very good book, but I have a small suggestion: let one of them die, so they can change their mindset. Right now, they always think they're the protagonist and don't care about the danger. 1. Are the elders of the Demonic Cult really that kind-hearted, teaching divine skills to everyone they meet? That's wishful thinking.

It's best not to get too close to someone like Xu Fengnian in CS.

I only want to read "Blossoming Flowers," and that other post-apocalyptic martial arts storyline. Having a cheat code is fine, but you're trying to write three stories at once? What the hell? Don't you understand the importance of precisely targeting your readership? If you want all three, you'll end up with none!

Well, the overpowered abilities are too much, and the plot twists are too fast. The author might have to stop writing after three or four hundred chapters. The characteristic of 99 Flow is that talents are shared, not skills are exchanged. It's like playing with Haki in Bleach. Each world has its own worldview, so why don't you understand that? That's why 99 is the starting point but has never been surpassed.

I couldn't continue after chapter 22. The author's writing is very messy, mixing first-person and third-person perspectives, combining storytelling and novel writing, using excessive punctuation, and the plot is as clichéd as it was ten years ago. Many plot points feel like they were written on a whim. However, it's still readable. If you're really looking for something to read, you can give it a try. I don't guarantee you'll be familiar with it, so don't blame me if you find it unreadable.

The beginning was alright, but then Tengteng appeared out of nowhere, even though she's not the main character's biological daughter. Every other sentence revolves around this little girl; all the characters like her and help her, making it feel like watching a female protagonist in a female-oriented novel.

Plagiarism of online novels from the 1980s...

I was writing something fine until suddenly a daughter popped up? It was so awkward, and everything suddenly became rambling and blank...

Writing crossover martial arts stories usually doesn't end well. This is because the timelines are disjointed, and most people can't keep up.

It's described as smooth, and it absolutely is. You're amazing you weren't poisoned by chapter 13.