I Summon Players in the Doomsday Wasteland

This novel gives me the feeling that I wrote a little here and there and then put it together. The key is not yet put together. There are some traces of "This Game is Too Real". You can't copy the key. You Chinese language will be so angry when I see this book.

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I can't stand Chapter 17 now. It's not that the content is bad, but the transition is so baffling that it makes my brain hurt.

This game is too real for me. I saw the author said that I need to learn

Now I just open a document every day and work on it, and every night it's a matter of life and death 🪖

I ramble here and there, what on earth do you want to write?

There's nothing wrong with the content, but the writing feels messy. The transition happened quickly.

What's going on in the transition? No, read it twice after you finish writing it. This transition is really baffling, okay? They were chatting one second, and the next second they suddenly said they had just come online. What about the transition in between? Have you eaten it?

😎 Your NPC role is a bit inadequate! Feeling silly

Why don't you make emoticons?

The first time he was seriously injured, he went to the hospital before he was resurrected, and the doctor had to leave for no reason. The player who lacked firepower was either sent away when he left home, or was waiting to be resurrected. Where did he find the time to chop down trees and make a Gundam? Why was the black box upgraded inexplicably? What did you do? On the previous page, he was stabbed in the back, and on the next page, he went out to fight monsters There were three players in total, one kept dying, and both of them wanted to kill the protagonist. The Justice Knight wanted to kill the protagonist for a few refugees. Rabbit had long known that the refugees wanted to kill the protagonist, so he didn't care. He wanted to teach the protagonist a lesson. The problem is, you can't save him either? It's not a refugee internal conflict. The protagonist is dead, right?