OK, I'm Surrounded by Magical Girls

The writing of Fa Tang is very good, and the writing method of weak plot and weak combat is also very right. The reason for the poor results is probably that too many things were thrown out at once in the first few chapters? The author knows it clearly, but the reader is confused and tired when reading it. Also, the images (appearance, personality, background) of several female characters and the protagonist are a bit vague, making it difficult for everyone to form an impression. The chapters about the divorce of Sakura's parents were very well written. If it can maintain this level, it will be a success. Also, this book has a strong homey flavor (love flavor), so maybe it's not suitable to be posted here? I have seen books of a similar style in other software. It is not considered a big hit, but it is still no problem to have a full meal.

Think of it as the heroine saying that my super power is that I am better than you!

The smart push didn't come back to life. Sure enough, I just threw it away. I have no favorites and no follow-up reading. What a pitiful me! Is there any kind-hearted book friend who can comfort me, or scold me as to what the problem is? Maybe there is something wrong with the first three chapters. The writing is a bit messy. I started the book in a hurry.

The reason for rushing out is probably because I don't have Thurse,,,

This book feels very sweet to me. Although it is a nonsensical harem, it is still very sweet. Even industrial saccharin is enough! Few of Dian Li's works can be written so lightly, and the character interactions in it are like the cool and pleasant breeze on a mid-spring night. To be honest, I think this book is better than many books with relatively good scores. The reason for such poor scores may be due to lack of exposure and lack of py.

I think it's okay to just keep writing about daily life

The author has released the whole main plot. If it continues like this, it will become an industrial saccharine and it will be sold on the streets.

The writing and settings are okay, but the male protagonist's performance was too bad. I resigned after reading Chapter 11😡😡

First of all, at the beginning, there are three or four girls who are devoted to the male protagonist. Before the characters and the reasons for their liking are fully laid out, they start to force the setting. Especially for the male protagonist, the idea of ​​​​changing from a person to a harem is also very abrupt, and he seems to be a scumbag. There is a big mistake in the creation of the characters at the beginning, and many people naturally can't stand it.

After taking a quick look at it, I found it to be quite good. It smelled like science fiction (dog food). The lack of popularity is surely due to the book title and the lack of content, right? Write a good book about it, kono!

I feel that the male protagonist's attitude toward Yamashita Sakura changed a bit quickly, which gave me a utilitarian feeling that he only accepted it for the sake of superpowers. I feel a bit scumbag 😅

Hello, the Janus on the cover is so awesome and cute. So, the god of this world is really the cutie Janus, right?

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I forwarded it to 9 group chats, and comrades forwarded it to check in here.

Daily writing is quite good, but the main line is not prominent Please choose your direction of evolution: 1. Continue to increase the description of daily life and show the advantages of writing daily articles, but writing too little will lead to a loose structure and no tension in the novel 2. Highlight the clues of the novel and construct the context of the novel, but writing too many main lines will overly advance the plot, destroy the original gentle rhythm, and make the novel boring In short, it is recommended to slightly promote the story line of the article while maintaining daily life, so as to avoid being unable to write later.

Hey, he actually finished second in reading!