Shanzhai Taozu

The writing is good. The characters and interactions are not awkward. It's a bit like opening up a monastic system in a different world. I hope the monasticism will not be exaggerated. After all, the magic weapon has been reduced in dimension. The biggest fear is that the combat power will collapse. I hope the author can control it well, otherwise the book will collapse as soon as the combat power jumps out.

You don't need to look at the thirteen pictures. What I originally saw was an idea. You can practice hard for more than ten years and get two million, and then kill a few people from outside the territory and give you two million directly. You can use real objects as carriers to significantly reduce the price. This idea is very good, and you can redeem it and give you skills and spells. If you have to open one to kill outsiders and give something, kill a few people and give so much, then you ask your father to take you to kill a few million, just exchange all kinds of authentic products from the prehistoric times, and you will be invincible in one chapter. Wouldn't it be better?

I always feel that these three worlds were one world in the past, but were later divided into three because of certain things. Later, these three worlds followed their previous trajectories and merged again. However, due to the lack of laws of heaven and earth, three different cultivation systems were born in these three worlds. However, because each world has given birth to its own laws of heaven that belong to the unique system of that world, they are not the same. Failure to accept the other two worlds has resulted in the three worlds not accepting the other two worlds' cultivation systems, energy, and spirit. Now it only takes a chance for the laws of heaven and earth in these three worlds to be re-integrated, and the cultivation system will be completely complete, unlike this incomplete system of heaven and earth. Although others can reach the limit of this incomplete system of heaven and earth and become a broad road, there are still some differences in the end.

The biggest problem with this book is that it doesn't feel exciting. Goldfinger is too simple and has no positive feedback to the protagonist. It means that the protagonist can't learn anything from it and can only rely on Goldfinger's own equipment to overwhelm others. The most enjoyable part of a cool article is to use knowledge to crush it, but this book does not reflect that at all. In addition, the author writes a pleasant article, but due to the simplicity of Goldfinger, the introduction alone took a lot of space in the early stage, and the pace was too long to be read. Anyway, that's all I've seen so far. My evaluation of this book is that it's just hay, tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

Maybe it's because I don't like the adventurous spirit of seeking wealth and wealth, but the beginning is quite interesting. Suddenly it went downhill because of the common routine and then there were all kinds of conflicts. Maybe this is the difference between ordinary people and the protagonists. One wants to be a civil servant and maintains income despite droughts and floods, while the other is a trend-setter of the times who is ups and downs in the business world.

It's unlucky to be a eunuch after ordering so many

Don't write about pure Taoism. Such logic is illogical. The dispute between Taoism and Taoism is no worse than a world war. Moreover, the biggest disadvantage of cultivating immortality is that it is slow, otherwise it would not have such a long lifespan. Also, what the protagonist learns is too complicated. Do you want the protagonist to learn all the arts of immortality and demonism? Then the protagonist has not practiced yet. Some knowledge can be exported to others for research, so there is no need to do it personally.

You can't make the original version. The original version is in the wild. The best you can do is imitate it and imitate it yourself.

Changed from one update a day to one every two days. It should be cut soon, so keep it there. Read it when you finish it, and move it after you cut it.

Trash is trash, a eunuch is a eunuch

Try to write as many plots as possible about creating magic weapons. What attracts us in this book is the creation of various ancient magic weapons and the use of these ancient magic weapons to manifest the saints. Those who practice and understand the laws don't need to write too much. I feel like you are not very good at writing about understanding the laws in these chapters, and it seems a bit weak. But this Qingyun's writing is very good.

The subject matter is quite good, but I was a little discouraged at the beginning. I suggest the author write more about farming and development, and less about content that is far beyond the protagonist's level. In addition, the power system should be clearer. I don't know if I missed it when I saw it on the shelves. I don't know what level the protagonist is in martial arts, and I don't know the specific level in cultivating immortals. Even if it is cliche, the protagonist should be divided into building foundation pills and so on, otherwise it will look confused.

The words and sentences in the article are a bit too impetuous and pursue gorgeousness. The sentence segmentation is unreasonable, and the reading is stiff and requires you to think about it sentence by sentence, which is too much of a reading burden. The characters are not three-dimensional, and the protagonist is not specific and vague. The story line is a bit long, one or two chapters long, with no beginning or end, just water. The world background is a bit complicated initially and can be expanded slowly later, which will affect the reading experience in the early stage. The setting is very good, but the writing style is biased toward the routines of old Internet articles from 10 years ago. Generally speaking, the old lady's foot-binding cloth is smelly and long, tasteless to eat, and it is a pity to throw it away. The writing is good, but the details need polishing.

It should be relevant to the topic and write more copycat magic weapons.

What Elder Meng wrote was a failure. It caused others to collapse, but he had nothing to do with it. Is this his fault or someone else's?

Speechless =_=, when there is no inheritance, the realm is unclear. I have taken several inheritances, and now I don't even know what state the protagonist is in. You are the first novel with 100 chapters in which the realm of the protagonist is blurred.

If you want to cut it, just kick me👇, I don't dare to order it anymore

This book is good, why are there so few people reading it? The updates don't seem to be very powerful, but don't worry, it's not easy to read this book.

I thought it was a story about land gods playing the human world similar to Lan Ke Qi Yuan, but after reading a few chapters, the name didn't match the reality. It would be better to change the name.

This is the most boring novel I have ever read about combat. It slipped away.

Yun Zhongzi and Duobao Taoist are two famous imitators of ancient times. Yun Zhongzi imitates all aspects and is durable. Duobao Taoist's one-time magic weapon is extremely powerful.

It's fun and interesting, and the setting of Tianci is quite interesting. I feel that Tianci can be expanded in the future (why, how did it come about, are there other two worlds? If only Chongming World has it, why is it only Chongming World. The other two worlds can also be expanded a lot, and the protagonist can go undercover to the opposite side. Does the Soul-falling Bell have a special attack on the world that specializes in souls? Can Luobao Money and that Tianbao Sect be linked?)

Take your time and don't rush, the settings can be done without crashing.

The beginning is a bit straightforward, but it gets much better later on. The writing is smooth and the story is innovative. It's worth looking forward to. I recommend it!

I saw this book on the daily guide today and felt that the author's name was a bit familiar. I remembered that I had read your book before and gave you two votes

Not bad, food

Hey, it looks good, but I discovered it too early. Also, I'm a little worried that it will collapse or fall into a cliche, which will make people guess a lot after reading the previous article. Looking forward to seeing something different, come on.

When does the author usually update?

A bit boring... I hope the author will write better and better. The inspiration for this theme is fine.

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