Sword Dao Supremacy: From the Start, I Simulate a Life

Personally, I think it's okay, but the writing feels a bit messy in some places 🙄 Keep up the good work! And the author, does the protagonist know the plot? The first chapter shows that the protagonist knows that this is the world of true spirits. In the seventh chapter, when simulating Xu Jing, there is another book that seems to have seen a similar situation. Later, when he is familiar with the disciples, it is obvious that he knows the plot. I personally feel that the protagonist's "prophet" is a bit confusing. Do you know Schrödinger? I can't say it's not good, but it feels awkward (personal feeling)

Swordsmanship only has nine levels of low-level earth-level skills, eleven levels of mid-level earth-level skills, thirteen levels of high-level earth-level skills, and fifteen levels of top-level earth-level skills.

There is also a fan on this site who is the master of swordsmanship. The author can refer to it.

The dialogue is too frivolous and childish. I can't adapt to this style.

The exclusive world view of Kendo is not suitable for this kind of life simulation system. The exclusive world of Kendo pays attention to understanding. The bonus of souls such as martial arts will is too strong. It is not too much for you to directly perfect your will into secrets after a life simulation. In other words, your martial arts will will increase by 10% after a life simulation. This kind of suppression is too obvious and makes the author very abstract. He clearly treats the readers as fools! In short, the hook is too big and the author cannot control it. Those who have read the original work will not click on the name to read it. Those who have not read the original work will just read it as a novice.

The plot is messy, going here and there! It's not that the writing is bad, it's that the plot arrangement is bad.

Another book on Kendo Suzun comes from Wuhu.

Some parts feel a bit ridiculous, especially Long Biyun, who is in the spiritual sea realm and can practice heaven-level techniques.

That's it, then from the time I first subscribed to now, haven't I become a clown?

The timeline is a bit confusing. The original work states that Zhan Taimingyue is two years older than the original owner, so Ye Chen will be twenty when she is twenty-two, so this is the time for the original owner to enter the foggy area and accept the inheritance of the king. The original owner was twenty-one or less than twenty-two when he participated in the martial arts tea party. He was less than twenty-four when he hosted it, and then he advanced to the spiritual sea. So the timeline is a bit messy