Naruto: Starting from Becoming a Disciple of Orochimaru

Minato's brain is the easiest to be brainwashed by the third generation, and Pig's Feet taught him the method... Isn't this asking for trouble?

I think talking about politics in Naruto is a withdrawal. Killing people since elementary school, what kind of political thoughts can they have? I guess the third generation himself doesn't know how to do it well.

Let me sincerely tell you some of my opinions on this book: there are some bright spots that are poisonous, but I personally feel that the poison outweighs the excess! ! Let me talk about the highlights first to prevent the author from thinking that I am a scumbag and driving away all the readers! ! Highlights ① The route for the rise of civilian ninjas is very good The protagonist is not afraid of Konoha conspiracy theories and chooses to make a genius debut to obtain better resources and the opportunity to apprentice with Orochimaru! ! How can I put this in perspective? It is indeed completely different from other novels on the market (the other protagonists are afraid of this and that, for fear of accidentally exposing their talent and being taken away by Danzo). It's not that there is a difference between the two, the difference has its advantages, and the good also has its advantages: no one does not expect to have more resources on their way to growth. Orochimaru has studied under three generations, at least at this period, he is in full swing! ! Although it is not the most suitable one (the most suitable one for Thunder Release + Sword should be Konoha White Fang), Orochimaru lives a long time! ! It is also convenient to learn ninjutsu and obtain blood succession limit cells and other things (compared to the other two ninjas among the three ninjas)! ! Highlight ② Finally, it is not the physical skills that lead to victory It is not that the physical skills are not good, but that it is difficult to travel to "Naruto". Don't be invincible in physical skills all day long. If you are so invincible in physical skills, why are you wearing Naruto! ! Isn't it the ninjutsu and chakra that everyone is attracted to in the first place? ! And relying solely on physical skills, do you have the perseverance of Xiao Li and Kai? ? Although physical skills are a permanent bonus and the more you exercise, the better you will become, but your growth is very slow! ! After 6 years of training, it is estimated that Xiao Li is only as good as the Renren test - he still needs the guidance of a famous teacher! ! The protagonist is taking the Sasuke/Kakashi route! ! It's not a pure body, but consider developing a ninja body. Although it's a bit tricky, it is indeed the fastest way to improve your strength! (Refer to Sasuke's Ninja Exam, you will know that physical ninja can do anything, but they are just okay, and they can barely pass the Ninja Exam. In the middle, I learned Kakashi's Thunderbolt to stimulate the cells to increase the activation reaction and immediately became an elite genin.) I like this kind of protagonist very much, and it is very suitable for civilians! ! It's not as boring as a pure body, because it's not a whirlpool/senju, and it doesn't have much chakra, so it's not a big ninjutsu development. Illusion geniuses can easily be restrained by eye spells and blood stains! Next, I'm going to make a bit of a rant. It's really not bad, it's just that I really can't stand it! Poison point ① The protagonist is too arrogant He just graduated from the ninja school. First, in the battle with "Senju Rope Tree", he described the protagonist's contempt for the wealthy Konoha family in his heart, and then used ruthless hands in the battle that made "Tsunade" who was watching the battle feel worried + angry. Finally, at the end of the battle, he humiliated "Rope Tree"! ! In subsequent episodes, he is called "Sarutobi Hiruzen" by his full name? ? I don't think you are a big shot with outstanding achievements. Aren't you the fifth scumbag who just graduated from the ninja school? ? Those who show their fangs before they have grown up are "idiots"! ! Let me talk about the protagonist template in my mind: it should be Minato when I was in school, or Seiichi Yukimura in "The Prince of Tennis"! ! With a smile on his face, he won the match with Yun Danfengqing, and taunting his opponent after winning was absolutely unacceptable! ! Coaching your opponent after winning is the true master style! ! Before you grow up, learn about Aizen in "Death"! When there is no absolute strength, letting outsiders relax their vigilance is the best way! It's a cool point to go from being "humble" and "bowing down" to revealing your true nature! ! The poisonous point ② The supporting characters feel too intellectual + NPC The ceiling of the fanfic "Uncle Snake" in my mind should be that the protagonist tells Uncle Snake the secrets of the Sharingan and the Senju clan in exchange for resources. Uncle Snake immediately investigates the protagonist behind the scenes and immediately determines that the original body has been replaced. , And wanted to directly control the protagonist to spit out all the secrets through secret methods, and then the protagonist countered: If you kill me, you will not be able to obtain the secrets in my mind. I know that you have mastered a forbidden technique called "Reincarnation in the dirt", but you can try reincarnation directly in the dirt now to see if the person summoned is me. . Afterwards, Uncle Snake activated the Reincarnation of the Evil Land and actually summoned the original soul that had been replaced by the protagonist! ! Afterwards, Uncle Snake throws his hat into the ring, not only eager for the protagonist's secrets (who is he? How many secrets does he know?), But also afraid of hurting the protagonist! ! This is the Uncle Snake in my mind! ! As for Uncle Snake, Tsunade, Uchiha, and Hinata in this book. . They are just tools that follow the protagonist's ideas without considering the source of the answer! Poisonous point ③Are you a bit overwhelmed with writing? In Chapter 2-3, the protagonist is about to graduate. Chapter 58: Has the protagonist grown up to the point of confronting the "Third Generation Hokage"? ! ! Although this is inseparable from the poisonous point ② - everyone follows the protagonist's ideas and follows the route described by the protagonist, but what to write later? ? I am really worried about this combat power Poison point ④ I feel deceived by the title of the book The protagonist loses to Orochimaru's sect. Normal readers will think that he is taking the villain route. Anyway, after Orochimaru's defection, whether he goes with Orochimaru or the protagonist creates his own force, the protagonist will definitely not be able to stay in Konoha! ! As a result, poison point ② Orochimaru was outwitted + poison point ③ The protagonist got up too fast! ! As a result, the protagonist escapes before Orochimaru. . I am really speechless. Others are masters cheating their apprentices, but you, the apprentices, are cheating their masters Also, the protagonist becomes a disciple and feels lonely. After becoming a disciple, the protagonist still goes his own way, and does not get any help from resources because of his apprenticeship with Orochimaru (except for the one who channeled a lizard leader). Anyway, I feel that it is much different from what I thought: I thought that apprenticeship with Orochimaru can learn a lot of forbidden techniques. , Or follow Orochimaru to do experiments to get a lot of experimental data and get the experimental results you want Let's talk about some trivial things ① Useless foreshadowing The heroine seems to be the original character Hinata Haru - her parents are the Hyuga branch and the Senju family. As a test subject of marriage + blood fusion, among the several pairs of combinations, she is the only genius! ! I can only say that when I saw this background, I knew she was the heroine. And it will only give us a premonition in advance: with this kind of background, the follow-up must be to lay the groundwork for the protagonist to enter the Hyuga separation + Senju family! ! But I can't say it's useless, I can only say it's really no surprise! Then the protagonist must be paired with someone of noble blood. In my opinion, the protagonist is strong enough and can be paired with an ordinary woman (like Yuan Yelin) who will be her husband and raise her children. But with such a big background, it feels really redundant! ②Recommended route I think the protagonist's early tone is good. I have some suggestions for the follow-up: follow gene flow and restore Otsutsuki's bloodline! ! ! Naruto, or many Japanese novels, pay attention to the "blood theory". Good bloodline, get twice the result with half the effort! ! Otsutsuki bloodline = Uchiha + Senju/Uzumaki (I always thought that they were separated from the same ethnic group, otherwise Asura would not be the previous generation of Senju and this generation of Uzumaki. And Indra has always been Uchiha... The characteristics of Senju and Uzumaki are different except for their hair. It's the amount of chakra, the hair is genetics, the color of the parents is the same as the color of the children! ! The amount of chakra is blood stains) + Kaguya/Taketori (developed by Kimimaro, combined with the sense of Senjutsu Chakra can evolve the corpse veins into "co-killing ashes") + Byakugan. . Finding a way to restore Otsutsuki's bloodline is hundreds of times better than cultivating it yourself. Although some people will say that bloodline will become a limitation in the later stages, and that's where the bloodline is developed to the extreme! I can never surpass my predecessors, I will say fart! ! Why can our seniors develop beyond their predecessors? Our generation cannot surpass our seniors. Whoever set the upper limit for our seniors is my upper limit! Inspect the environment with white eyes, 360-degree defense without blind spots! ! The whirlpool increases chakra, not that the jinchuriki is better than the jinchuriki. Mom no longer has to worry about my lack of mana! ! Sharingan learning, copying, and countering genjutsu! ! Corpse bone veins, the nemesis of physical skills! ! You'll die if you touch it!

It's okay, I won't say that the character understanding is a little different from mine. After all, Naruto has a lot of bugs, but the biggest problem is the poor character description, the dialogue and expository text are the same, and the novel is not a setting collection. Orochimaru's character, Sandaime's character, speaking style are homogeneous, and the abstract point is the writing style.

This method of controlling the body of a snow rabbit to experiment with blood stains is so interesting. With such a high level of chakra control, should I start to consider seizing the original control of chakra and imprinting my own mental power into it so that the ancestors of chakra cannot take it away. There should be a lot of snow rabbit psychic beasts with various blood stains in the back to act as a joke. Uchiha has obviously inherited the local divine power, and all his abilities are the names of gods. It should be that Otsutsuki's sacred tree absorbed the power of the gods that were gestating or dying, but did not digest it. It was passed on to Six Paths as impurities, followed by Senju and Uchiha. The power of Buddhism was given to the Senju, and the power of Shintoism and monsters was given to the Uchiha. The protagonist should develop his own divine power, control his own rules, and establish his own heaven. For example, the rules of the sun follow the path of the Golden Crow, Taiyi, and Haotian, or the rules of thunder and punishment, follow the path of Zeus and heaven's rewards and punishments. The protagonist's power can take the path of Shenting to rule the world. The ninja world can obviously travel through time and space. Is it possible to consider finding a modern Japanese manga world as a twin world, and the nobles have mastered certain communication channels to explain the obviously abnormal technological development of the ninja world. Although there is no industrial foundation or educational foundation, they directly own the finished products of various electronic products. The protagonist's organization slowly developed into the divine court that opened up the heavens, the Heavenly Court. The world of Death can be connected, but it can only connect to the current world. It can be written that chakra cannot be used in other worlds, or is incomplete, so that each world will have new ideas. Every world should be universal for the physical body, but the degree of spiritual interference with reality is different. Each energy system is not universal, or even collapses directly. Full Metal Panic, Pacific Rim, early, long before the plot begins, can also explain that world's abnormal material science and obsession with large robots. In the world of spells, the technological level is roughly consistent. It can be written that it is the source of the sealing technique, and the Uzumaki clan has captured the Shinigami. Or the ninjutsu of the ninja world affects the development of spells on the opposite side. It is best to find a world where the ninja world is a world where unique power or technology has a traceable long-term impact.

Use the dragon's cave to extract the genes of those snakes to see if there are dragon genes. If not, then change it and make a glue to use as a psychic beast.

Is this what I said? If you owe too much debt, why don't you just open up money?

This is because there are too many arrears and we will directly pay for it, 🤔🤔🤔

This book is surprisingly good. I can read it, write down my own ideas, and can close the loop on data theory.

Directly hit Danzo's dog's head and explode the gold coins fiercely.

It's really good. It's thoughtful and has its own logic.

It's very good. It has its own unique vision and logical thinking. Keep it up 👍👍👍. It can be ranked in the top five among all the fans I have read.

It's boring and the robot-like protagonist The good things are all mine, no matter how hard the opponent tries, it's useless

Classic Uchiha Hyuga's original heroine, isn't this an outdated routine for Naruto fans? I subconsciously thought I was reborn.

It is simply impossible for Konoha to equip a team with two female ninjas. Teams in Konoha usually consist of two men and one woman or three men. It's quite embarrassing to force the dubbing into two female ninjas, and what's the relationship between Tsunade and Orochimaru? Just squeeze the rope tree away by yourself. As a result, you squeezed out all the people you had connections with, your writing was embarrassing, and you even made Uchiha a disciple. Do you want to laugh the readers to death?

The author entered the palace, everyone dispersed, dispersed

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