
Douluo: Killed by Yun Ming at the Beginning
斗罗:开局被云冥所杀
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- Completed
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- 1.7M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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If the protagonist hasn't upgraded his soul ring, won't he be suspected if he doesn't open the soul ring in a fight?
Xiao Yuhao said: I will become so strong in the future
The cold wind blows in the lonely valley, and the cicadas chirp in the spring and autumn. The young man returns. At Danghun Mountain, the stone man sheds tears, and the fixed immortal wanders and the demon heads north. Thousands of immortals on the upstream river have retreated, and love has lost its hold on tears. Destiny means success or failure. The immortal regrets but I don't. Even at an early age, I knew that things were going to be difficult, but I was still able to fly like a hero among the clouds. The cold wind blows all the way, causing the sea to rise and fall, and the traveler walks alone. A sword is forged with painstaking efforts and painstaking efforts.
Instead of promoting the book, I found it by searching through the books I had read before to see if the author had written any new novels! I hope this book can surpass the past. Recently, there have been more Tang filial sons who have joined Shrek and rebelled. The author still needs to kill this evil trend.
Genius author!
The combat power is broken, the character is broken, the writing is poor, and you have ten spirits and ten artifacts. Why not just make 100 spirits! This mindless routine was no longer used ten years ago. To be honest, I can't even stand this free novel. Please run away, it's all about history.
Shennong
(Only personal opinion) I can't understand it now. The current plot is to sacrifice the whole family at the beginning and then have a grudge against Yun Ming. I don't know what the author was thinking. He didn't understand obscene development and offended Shrek, Tang Sect and Haotian Sect in advance. Just take offense if you offend them, and they will definitely turn against each other in the end. As a result, you also offended the Spirit Transferring Pagoda in advance. Now the allies are Gu Yuena and the Sun Moon Soul Guidance Academy. Are you planning to cooperate with the Holy Spirit Church in the future? The master of the plane is still Tang Hao, the God Realm has returned early, and the big headwind is still making waves at the beginning. Do you plan to gather the readers later and then unfinish it? Secondly, Gu Yuena has merged into one, can't she still feel Tang Wulin's Golden Dragon King bloodline? Tang Wulin was allowed to grow steadily without any thought about his bloodline. Gu Yuena didn't react at all. Was it because she felt that the Golden Dragon King's bloodline was not important? Now when the protagonist goes out, there are people chasing and assassinating him. He is only level 30 or 40 now. I don't know how to win other than using big tricks. After burying a bunch of little poisonous points, I felt that the words I filled in at the end were far-fetched. Viewers can make their own decisions.
To express my own personal opinion, everyone knows about Shrek's integrity. Domineering, arrogant, double standards, and self-righteous are consistent labels. From the perspective of Dou Er's Ma Xiaotao, it seems that the protagonist's sister was killed for no reason, but the facts cannot be understood this way. First of all, Ma Xiaotao is one of our own, born from Ma Hongjun, who became a god ten thousand years ago. This kind of phoenix with a bit of evil martial spirit will not be condemned to death by Shrek because it comes from one of our own. What is the current situation of the protagonist's sister? Awakening: In addition to the Pluto Sword, this is one of the most powerful evil spirits in this era. As a force that considers itself to be a righteous force who understands this kind of martial spirit very well, their reaction can be guessed at. Evil Fire Phoenix, there are examples of it after purification and evolution. But I don't have the Pluto Sword, so I don't know how to contain this martial spirit. Choosing to kill him is not difficult to understand. Second, some people may say that there are fallen angels in the original text? And joined Shrek, but the protagonist's sister is different from Yuan En Yehui. There is no huge hidden family behind him, nor is there a powerful second martial soul. The chance of losing control is too high. For this kind of evil soul master who has no background, no other martial soul to cultivate, and is extremely out of control, he is a genius. Is it normal for Shrek to kill someone who flaunts himself as righteous? In addition, Shrek hides evil and evil. Everyone also knows a thing or two, such as breaking into a restricted military area, directly rebelling against the alliance, and causing the risk of losing control at the entrance to the abyss, but they will do it directly. Also. All actions that are hostile to Shrek can be labeled as evil forces. Don't think that Yun Ming is too righteous as a leader of a force. It is better to wear a pair of pants with Tangmen. It's like selling arms to a hostile country and then hollowing out Tiandou City, one of the largest cities, as a military base. He might not know a thing or two. The butt is not clean to begin with. The only clean person may be Yali, who sacrificed herself for the common people and almost exhausted her own life force. Her integrity can be trusted. But at that time, they had not yet joined Shrek. And Shrek's disguise. And publicity. The brainwashing ability is first-rate, and no Shrek person will fight for Shrek's glory or even do whatever they want. So it's not really dark, it's really Shrek who is the only one who shines. As for the others, almost all of them were eleven or twelve-year-old boys and girls who grew up after entering the academy. They are people who have been deeply brainwashed. They're really just "Shrek's Justice" and not a good deal at all.
I felt like laughing when I read it, and I deserved it. Writing it like this makes me feel like a young man, and there's nothing to it.
Come on, you deserve it, not to mention what Shrek did at this moment was definitely the right thing. Ordinary evil spirits should be let go, but a spirit of this level should be let off just because it's a child? Funny. Later, in the character version of the protagonist, I saw that the heroine was the Dragon King. Haha, I can only say that what Shrek and Tangmen did was not perfect enough. There are also two pits to compare. TM are all time travellers. Knowing that in this era, evil spirits are dying, the protagonist's father does not allow them to awaken the spirits on their own, so they go to these two pits secretly. She was still a little girl, so the person who was killed in the hands of the evil soul master who grew up was not innocent? Do you want to use absolutely powerful force to kill all the top evil soul masters and attack the fish that slip through the net with all your strength? If you want, that's what Shrek does, just kill him when he wakes up
After reading more than 170 chapters, I can only say that the author is not suitable for writing about civilian development. Just write your invincible style honestly. In your development article, I don't know where the protagonist got the courage to jump in and out. The protagonist is just over level 30, without any means of survival, and jumped into Shrek's body. Purely relying on chatting
.... I almost finished reading these 500 chapters in half a day for free. I wrote as fast as I could read. The chapter name is the outline of this chapter. You don't need to read the content, just look at the chapter name...
This game was really cruel. It only taught Tang Wulin a little lesson, but it directly led to the male protagonist being discovered by Yun Ming in advance. Behind this, Tang Hao was obviously fueling the fire. It is really too difficult to fight the Tang family in the Douluo plane that has become the Tang family continent.
Shrek has been holding the protagonist down, making it uncomfortable to watch 😰. After a few chapters, it will become clear that the protagonist is threatened. Not to mention whether the protagonist is uncomfortable or not, it makes me uncomfortable just to watch 😰
A breath of fresh air in Douluo novels, it's rotten to the end 😒😒
There's no need to read this book. It's 700 chapters and it's not finished yet. It's just a money trap. I'm really crazy about making money. Most of the whole article is just nonsense.
The concept is confusing at the beginning. Isn't this sister stupid? The key behind this kind of curl must be from the protagonist's side.
Gu Yuena
Technology is the primary productive force, I like AI very much
Inexplicably, the main point of conflict in the early stage is the conflict between the protagonist and Yun Ming. But Yun Ming knew that Di Tian was behind the protagonist, and Di Tian also took action to show how much he valued the protagonist. Still thinking about killing the protagonist, no buddy, you really want to kill the protagonist, why don't you get rid of Ditian first and wait for revenge?
The author has prematurely brought the protagonist into contact with his enemy, and intensified conflicts in front of him many times, but he also forgot that strength is the basis of speech, and the story he wrote was too aggrieved. If it weren't for other bright spots, it would be really hard to watch. My suggestion is that you start by being obscene. I think the current story should achieve the recognition and trust the author wants from the Federation and Gu Yuena. It's time to get down to business and plan as much resources as possible in the limited time. Improve your strength as soon as possible and intersperse it to cause trouble for Shrek. He secretly plotted many times and took revenge on the Holy Spirit Cult. There are other story lines that could be written in other countries. Targeting these protagonists with too clear goals seems to always lead to bad things.
It turns out that I'm not the only one who felt it was poisonous. I also felt it was poisonous at first, but a lot of people criticized me and said it was normal.
The beginning is poisonous and the middle is watery. You can't say that the author is bad. If you say so, you will be banned.
The invincible guy who hangs up Leaving levels is over 50, so he calls out to demigods Needs combat power logic but doesn't have combat power logic Can't maintain combat power logic and is unwilling to level up While trying to level up, you also create a scene of over 50 levels doing over 90 levels. Then you might as well just not level up. It's a big deal to hang up in the first place.
After reading it, I feel that there are no highlights. The only thing I like is that the heroine is the Silver Dragon King, but the author did a very stupid thing. The uncertainty of the protagonist's golden finger is really upsetting. If he can't write it down, he calls it golden finger growth. It gives people the feeling that his successful growth is God chasing after him and feeding him, and it has nothing to do with whether he works hard or not. I don't know what other people think. In my opinion, this is disgusting. Anyway, it says that the protagonist has one more ability, and he is a proper all-around player.
I couldn't see any decent behavior in the protagonist. He slaughtered the Tang Sect in one city after another. Most of the content was just to satisfy his own selfish desires. He was sanctimonious. He could only be said to be another Tang San. After the revenge is over, what is left for the protagonist? He is just a hypocrite who is driven by his own desires and has no noble ideals.
I gave up after watching half of it
Let's talk about it briefly The protagonist is a bit brainless and always doesn't know what he is doing Ten Wuhun is a very strange and difficult to follow setting. It reminds me of the early Douluo fanfics like Taichi Diagram and Chaos Bell Wuhun. I have to follow the same protagonist There are too many battle scenes, and they are very boring, and at the end of the fight I still have to activate my martial spirit body There is no need to talk about other things, overall it is a bit boring book, nothing serious
It can only be said that it is just black for the sake of being black. Is there anything bad about Yun Ming in the original work? I didn't see it at all. The only controversial fight was to save his wife. Who else would not fight?
The story line is very good, but it's a pity that there is no emotional scene, which is equivalent to not having a heroine.
It's so damn vicious. If you rob Yali by force, I won't say anything. If you don't rob Yali, then you still do this to Yun Ming. It's a bit embarrassing.
I also agree. It took me three days to read this book, and I felt that the overall writing was pretty good, but there were very few emotional scenes. My main purpose of reading this book was for the heroine. Gu Yuena just started reading a few hundred chapters, and she felt that there were many aspects to the character description that were very good, but just that feeling, you know? It's just that his feelings for the heroine are too obscure, you know? But the heroine should express all her love for the heroine. What's more, when it comes to describing the rationality of the increase in combat power, there are actually not that many blocking points. It's just that the emotional line is not described so well. I can't accept it. Compared with the previous book Dragon King, this one feels much worse. It doesn't have that feeling.
This book relies on the defense and does not accept refutation.
Why is this author always the same? It seems to be the same in the last book of Dragon and Phoenix. Is it difficult to use transition words such as "then", "that is," "then" and "all of them"? It's not like a primary school student writing an essay, buddy.