Saiyan Son Gohan in American Comics

The subject matter is okay, but the writing style is really not good. The novel is written as stiffly as the cutscenes in the game, and the dialogue between the characters feels rushed. It is like a student reading a text. In a paragraph or sentence, the sentences are not smooth, and there are too many wrong sentences, just to write more words. The novel is a novel. Suddenly there is no quality. If you don't read novels very often, or if you don't have any requirements for novels but don't require quality, it doesn't matter. But if you have high requirements for the quality of novels, you won't be able to read them If the quality of novels doesn't improve, there won't be many subscribers.

I feel like Son Wuhan's character will be cheated in Marvel.

The way to cultivate Qi is not to pass it on casually, without even knowing whether the other person is good or bad.

Look at the combat power of Nabalai Earth, are you afraid of those weapons? And apart from Super, Dragon Ball, Dragon Ball Z, and Dragon Ball GT, there are those who are afraid of weapons. If you take a star bomb in your face, it will be fine. Why would you die if you take a small pistol? I don't understand.

Gohan can tell if someone is a bad person by sensing their energy, so he is not easily deceived.

Gohan

Apart from the subject matter, it's useless and the writing is so bad that I can't stand it anymore.

Will Gohan CP still be Videl? I feel that this original CP is quite good, and I can play the role of Saiyan Superman with Gohan 🙂

Dr. Gohan in the Pokémon world, Gohan has the talent to be a Pokémon trainer since he was a child

Your first chapter is a bit too wordy, why don't you start with the creation of Pangu? And your writing is not very good either.

The identity of this indigenous time-traveler is not exciting enough. The arrangement of the time-traveler's soul traveling through Sun Wuhan is more interesting and attracts more traffic!

Beast vs. Beast

I read two chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The first chapter introduced the original plot of Tony being captured. At the end, a purple ball fell across space near the terrorist base. The second chapter tells about Gohan who blew himself up because he couldn't defeat Cell and let Shenron teleport him away. He traveled to the vicinity of Tony in Marvel. Then he sensed the base because he was hungry. After killing everyone inside, he sensed Tony in the cave and he was still hungry. The two wanted to find what they wanted to eat. A series of very embarrassing plots. Continue to read other things I want to see.

The writing is too poor, and there are too many failures in the plot.

Ah,

Author, you can write the plot of the Marvel Avengers movie as one timeline, and write the mutants as another timeline. Later, due to changes, you can bring the mutants and their enemies from the mutant timeline to the Avengers timeline, so that you can open a new map reasonably. Don't mix the Avengers plot and the mutant plot together from the beginning. If the writing is not strong enough, it will easily collapse. After all, although these two are both from the Marvel world view, they rarely appear together in movies, and there are not many references available.

More updates, Super Er Xiao Gohan yyds 🤭

Can't we write a protagonist with a high IQ? It's silly to always choose this kind of thing.

How about the author let Gohan maintain his super transformation, just like Cell practiced with Goukong before the game 🙂