I've Become a God, You're Suing Me to Stop the Game?

The front ones are pretty good. After seeing Chapter 38, I died suddenly. You are already level 999, and the highest level for others is only 200. You are actually afraid that others will not be able to protect you. . . . I really don't know, why is it necessary for you to write about the awesomeness of this character?

Simple evaluation: The logic does not make sense and there are too many common sense errors.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more confusing as it went on, and I was in a state of writing whatever I thought of. In addition, I really don't understand the logic of a level 999 protagonist worrying that a group of people less than level 200 will bring danger to him.

The introduction gives an aesthetic of insanity

The subject matter is good, but it's a little bit cheesy

After reading two chapters, I know from the name Zhu Biao that the protagonist is Prince Yiwen of the Ming Dynasty? I don't understand, and the author didn't explain it either.

Deleting the post, right? I don't care about this, but have you changed the logic problem? If you haven't changed it, you will probably have to cut it off soon. If it doesn't work, it won't work.

After reading it, I can actually sew it pretty well, but as I read it, I felt like something was missing... Maybe it wasn't a little cool? Take the first player Zhu Biao as an example. The most exciting thing is probably the changes that Zhu Biao brought to the original world after he became an immortal. However, there is too little description of this aspect. The main content is that the protagonist is pretending to be cool. However, the character of the protagonist is too invincible and the plot is too smooth. As a result, the pleasure gained from pretending is not that sufficient. The above is just a small personal opinion. The author's writing is quite good. Come on.

The plot at the beginning is so poisonous that the main character inexplicably calls his master his father. It really feels like being embarrassed to hear a bad joke in life. The author likes to make things awkward. You might as well read how to write a book that summons players like "Give the Players a Little Lord Shock".

What a risk, I was almost deceived. Brothers, the poisonous weed ran away quickly.

The protagonist is Zhu Biao, and Chen is a cheating old man.

There are some poisonous points and the plot is relatively bland. Less than food and grass

The cute new writer is trembling, wishing all readers a good year!

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is not exciting enough and feels frustrating.

How does the protagonist know that this is the prince's? Is there any explanation later?

What kind of dog daddy is that? Let me crawl on it.

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