Game of Thrones: the Three-Headed Dragon Viserys

A very good novel Very good, one of the most recommended novels this year. The author's writing style is exquisite, the conception is exquisite, the characters are full, and the scenes are rich. After reading many articles, nothing is left in the mind, but this article is different. Many scenes have the texture of movie CG, which is grand and spectacular. The author's scene switching is also very smooth. A particularly favorite scene is when people find three dragons squatting on a cliff in the rain. The water vapor is steaming and the dragon wings are dancing wildly. The red viper's hair is burnt because it is too close. It is trying hard not to let its legs weaken and fall. The details are so perfect. There are many impressive plots. The most memorable plots at present include the intrigue between Brother Long and the Fat Governor, Lord Tyrosh's investment in Viserys' lemons and copper coins, and the first battle with the sea monster in the three dragons' storm. Brother Long is very good at setting up characters and creating public opinion, and he has all kinds of tricks. Unfortunately, the author was affected by many people's negative comments, and the infrastructure construction of the political battle in the later period was a bit rough and rushed. Game of Thrones itself is a group portrait novel, but online novels require the author to focus on the protagonist, which has led to some readers being disgusted with too many story lines for supporting characters. I think it's okay, it just depends on how the author balances it. In addition, I prefer the war strategy part, and the author's main plot is biased towards Brother Long collecting magic power and becoming a god. I skipped all the parts involving magic. I hope the author can continue to write more, please read and cherish it.

If the author has no food in his stomach, he feels that he can enter the palace. A few suggestions for the author: The protagonist, plug-in settings and background opening time you adopted are very good. Using the three giant dragons Guli Oak King from the game The Legend of Zelda: Tears of the Kingdom as a plug-in gives people a full sense of expectation. It can be said that as long as you don't take the ballistae with your face, or go to known Jedi places such as the ruins of Valyria, the ocean bottom, volcanic lava, and the home of the cold god north of the Great Wall, you can basically run rampant in a bright and low-demon world like Game of Thrones. Fortunately, your writing does not give people the dry feeling of white text. But to be honest, the story is really average. Just talking about the protagonist and Irio pretending to be crazy is stupid and boring. Game of Thrones pays attention to legal principles and guest rights. This is a rule that even the Valyrian Empire must abide by in its heyday. Viserys' identity as the "last descendant of the Targaryen Dynasty" is the guarantee for his survival. On the surface, Robert offers a sky-high price. He was rewarded, ridiculed and given the insulting title "Beggar King", but no one dared to do anything to him secretly. Without this identity, the protagonist is nothing, but with this identity and knowing the plot, the protagonist does not have much room to operate In the case where the protagonist only needs to collect dragon bones and eggs to use cheats to run rampant in the world, he can completely trade the future for space. Dragon bones and dragon eggs are nothing more than collectibles in the context of the extinction of magic. No matter who the opponent is, your interests can be clearly stated. As long as you understand Ilio's calculations and don't threaten the opponent's core strategy, unless the opponent turns into Emperor Qiao in the next second, there is no need to worry about the opponent's face. In the end, no matter how rich Irio is, the identity of the protagonist can influence it. He is just a small businessman in front of the power. The protagonist can use him as a springboard to contact Dorne or the Iron Bank to quickly collect dragon bones and dragon eggs to quickly pass the novice dangerous period. When you can transform into a dragon, all conspiracies and tricks will be meaningless, instead of like now, pretending to be crazy and stupid, fighting wits with the air, and even bullying the young dragon mother. I feel like the author is addicted to writing these contents? The whole mouse in the gutter is really amazing. Your plug-in for the original Viserys can take off Another point is that what readers want to see is the dragon spreading its wings and traveling in the nine heavens, its roar shaking the world, and everything turning to ashes under the dragon's flame. I can't feel this from your plot and wording of constantly suppressing the protagonist. Even if you transform into a dragon in the future, I'm afraid it will be very monotonous, so I don't look forward to it any more

There is a cuckold plot in this book, so I recommend you not to read it.

I read it in one go. The author's writing is very good and the writing style is very good. Then I was shocked when I read the chapters and posts. They were all scolding. They scolded the writing for being poor, scolding the writing for not being interesting, and also said that fandom should write fast food and not write well. I couldn't understand it at all. First of all, the author's writing style is very good and he has studied the original work very carefully. The words and sentences have the flavor of the original novel. The character description and the wording of the dialogue are all carefully thought out. There is no problem in the novel where all the dialogues are just talk and no character. This has already caused a stir among many Game of Thrones fans. Let's talk about the issue of water or not. Isn't it wonderful that the protagonist in the early stage is under the control of others and escapes from the fetters through words and various overt and covert confrontations? Can this also be called water? Furthermore, describing this kind of game does not mean describing inner activities and using large dialogues. The author's writing is already refined and restrained.                                                                                                                                                                                                               Goldfinger garbage can not start the second second, and also the main character cannot transform into a dragon for a long time. Regarding the world view of Ice and Fire, how can you write a dragon at the beginning and write 300,000 words, which is pretty good, or does it just collapse to God War? Then why should I read Binghuo Wen? The writing of a novel itself must have a foreshadowing, turning point and climax. The pace of this book is not even slow compared to Dou Po. Is the current environment so fast?

But your characterization has expanded this part. If you remove the battle of wits and courage with the air to speed up the development of the plot, it will appear that your writing style is relatively poor, and there may be some situations where you abandon the book. The best solution now is to find a class for yourself while cutting the book 😜

Wanting and wanting at the same time, it's hard to please both sides. It is necessary to keep close to the selling point of the original work (marriage drama), but at the same time be afraid of the poisonous point of offending the online audience (cuckolding). I want to have the excitement of transforming into a dragon once, but in the next chapter I will be secretive like a rat man. It is necessary to have the pleasure of revenge while maintaining a false and upright persona (although it is useless) to "call" for peace. It doesn't mean that a national war is necessary, but revenge + punishment is a legitimate reason, and others can't gossip, so why are you pretending? The bookshelf has been removed.

Although I have read the original work, the bad marriage customs in the True Dragon chapter can be completely avoided. You can turn into a real dragon, but the protagonist has to have his wife naked. Apart from anything else, is your own protagonist a native? As an earthling and a Chinese, do you want others to watch his wife's body being fucked? If your protagonist is an aboriginal, I can completely accept this writing, but if the protagonist is a time traveler, a king, and his wife is his sister, and they are already in love, how can you let others see that your protagonist Zuo Ai wants others to discover that you have had sex before marriage? I thought it was good that the protagonist did not abolish slavery and used money to buy the Unsullied, but now that even the wedding customs cannot be changed, why did he travel through time? There is a golden finger who can transform into a dragon, but he still has to accept these messy things. Do you think Aegon the Conqueror and his son Maegor would accept something they couldn't bear? As a fan, you don't know what can and cannot be written, and what will make readers extremely unhappy? Isn't it just for fun when I read fanfiction? If you like writing original novels so much, why don't you write out the little moments when Viserys pinched Daenerys in the previous novel? Whatever you like, the chapter "True Dragon" will not be changed. Depending on how many follow-up subscriptions you lose, I will also help you promote the chapter "True Insect" in several agot groups.

This author is so self-righteous that he drives away all readers. The wedding drama is so disgusting, I have no desire to watch it anymore

Let me just ask, what does Chapter 78 mean? Why not change it? I will definitely not subscribe in the future. Nausea

The author had a good beginning, but in the end he failed. Why: 1. Why is the original work called Game of Thrones? Because this book is essentially a low-magic world, neither gods nor magic can be omnipotent. It is essentially a Machiavellian novel wrapped in a magical veneer. What everyone wants to read is the development of power, tactics, knight lords, and a little bit of magic. But with all due respect, the protagonist has never thought about developing power and just wants to be a ranger. The article you wrote is completely inconsistent with the readers it attracts 2. The author's writing skills are not good, and he cannot write about the battle of wits, so he forced to write about the battle of wits. In the end, everyone looked like a clown. This book would have been much better written by a historical writer 3. The plot progress is too slow, there are too many chapters, and only one of the three chapters is about the protagonist, so why don't you just copy the original work The author has this attitude, and he can't do anything else well.

Ghidorah is also a three-headed dragon, a golden dragon, and can also shoot gravity rays and lightning.

Brothers, the Song of Ice and Fire map is here Westeros: Essos The Song of Ice and Fire world map

An expert on the website Atlas of ice and fire made a series of inferences about the geography, administrative divisions and population information of the world of ice and fire. The conclusions are roughly as follows: 1. The volume of the planet where Westeros is located is about 8% larger than the earth, which is consistent with Martin's claim that it is slightly larger than the earth. Planning the longitude and latitude lines according to the size of the planet, the distance of one degree of latitude is about 119 kilometers (the earth is 111 kilometers). 2. The area of ​​the seven kingdoms south of the Great Wall is approximately 7.93 Million square kilometers (including affiliated islands), which is smaller than Brazil (8.51 Million square kilometers) and larger than Australia (7.69 Million square kilometers). If the Seven Kingdoms really existed, they would rank sixth in the world in terms of land area. 3. Martin claimed that the continent of Westeros is about the same size as South America, so it can be inferred that the continent of Westeros north of the Great Wall should extend to the area corresponding to the North Pole of the Earth and the other hemisphere. 4. The latitude span of the Seven Kingdoms is about 40°, the Arctic Circle is about 360 kilometers north of the Great Wall, and the Tropic of Cancer passes through Qingting Island and southern Dorne. 5. The largest of the Seven Kingdoms is the Northern Territory, which is slightly more than one-third of the total area, with 2.93 Million square kilometers, about the same as India; the smallest is the Western Territory, with an area of ​​500,000 square kilometers, about the same as Spain. 6. Arranged in order: North (2.93 Million square kilometers), Reach (1.24 Million square kilometers), Dorne (850,000 square kilometers), Riverlands (700,000 square kilometers), Vale (660,000 square kilometers), Stormlands (520,000 square kilometers), West (500,000 square kilometers), Crown Territory (340,000 square kilometers), Iron Islands (29,000 square kilometers). 7. Inferring the population from the number of conscripts, Westeros has a total population of about 40 million, of which the River Bend ranks first with 12 million, while the smallest Westland ranks second in terms of population, with about 5.5 Million people. Then there are about 4 million people each in the North, the Riverlands and the Vale, 3 million in Dorne, 2.5 Million in the Stormlands, and 1.5 Million in the Crown and Iron Islands. 8. The population of the five largest cities in the country is: King's Landing 400,000, Old Town 350,000, Lannisport 200,000, Seagull Town 50,000, and White Harbor 30,000. With a population map of the Seven Kingdoms of Westeros

I think the best written Game of Thrones fanfic is Iron Throne, the second is Crown Prince for a Day, and the others cannot be read.

I haven't made any progress after reading dozens of chapters. The main character is paranoid every day, and he just copied the original book. After reading the book reviews, I found that there is a cuckold at the end. It's really cool.

I subscribed to Chapter 78 of Volume 2 first. How should I put it? Writing online articles without knowing how to adapt to local conditions is undoubtedly asking for death.

The previous chapter is normal Volume 2 Chapter 78 True Dragon ! ! Invincible cuckold dragon! ! A taste of death

After reading a reader's review, The Bronze Throne, I have a feeling that almost all people who read your book gave it a thumbs up I don't know what your purpose is for writing this book. If you want to make money, you must have some readers. You can also say that you are selecting readers, but, if you read fan fiction, you basically want to change the original work and constantly create more exciting points. It doesn't matter how invincible you want it to be. You can suppress it, but you, the author Isn't it a bit ungrateful? The title deceives people and kills them. It's a long paragraph of inner drama, and it keeps pulling with one character. I don't know when you can exert your strength to realize the exciting point of turning this into a dragon. We can't write the kind of insight that the reader has I have been reading novels for so many years. Unless the writing style that suppresses the protagonist is really high, almost no one will read it. After all, most people are into the protagonist. When their own thoughts and behaviors seriously conflict with the protagonist's behavior, and they feel unreasonable and unhappy, they will almost criticize the author. Reading novels is almost to fantasize about the happiness of the protagonist To be honest, your writing style is really nothing to complain about. I feel good, but at your pace, I have only read Chapter 20. We have no patience. At your pace, in this fast-paced novel era, I really feel that there are too many people who can persevere and are also attracted by your writing style. I think the writing is very good, but you are just talking about Shui's inner thoughts and pulling all kinds of pulls. You should write original works. If a fan writes like this, I really feel that it is uninteresting. It really wears down the readers' patience. I can't see the excitement, and gradually I can't get into it. I feel that the protagonist is just like that, and I have no desire to read on I think the purpose of writing novels is to make money, and there should be relatively few hobbies. If you don't follow the readers' appetites, you won't be able to attract fans of the same genre. If you read the novels, the taste is probably like this. If you can't satisfy the needs of this group of people, how will you pay for it? I really feel that you should write original works, so when you write this, I feel that there are not so many people saying that everyone has a God's perspective when writing fan fiction, and writing in this way consumes patience. Although everyone says that ordinary people have a God's perspective, I think I can do it, and I am a fan of confidence. It's a pity that there are so many things, Balabala. I really want you to write the feeling you want. I really think your writing is very good. There is so much water. I can still read 20 chapters. I also read your reply to the Bronze Throne. The summary is that it can't be changed. It has been written so much. The writing method and the plot of the story have been fixed. When I read this, I couldn't stand it anymore. I couldn't stand it. It's a long story. You are original. I can read it. You are a fan with a God's perspective. It's unbearable. Why don't you be direct? Add a patch in your introduction and tell us how long we have to persist for a while. In this case, I feel that there are not many people who can see more than 20 pictures. The pace of novels nowadays is indeed very fast. It is indeed different from the previous novels. Life is fast-paced and novels are also fast-paced. Come on, author

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Author, do you know why you are not popular? Look at your 78 chapters. How many people have said that you won't change it? If nothing else, you can try another way. You insist on taking off your clothes, which makes people uncomfortable. How many readers who paid for you have gone away? Why are you so stubborn? This description is completely unnecessary.

The wedding drama in the latest chapter is really disgusting. Is this protagonist a native? Or a modern person? If the tradition in Westeros is to eat poop, will the protagonist follow the tradition and eat poop? They are all adults and have their own independent thoughts. It is the protagonist who changes the world, rather than letting the world assimilate the protagonist into an aborigine.

In the front, Illyrio was playing tricks on me, and in the middle, there were all kinds of gods and ghosts. In the back, I took over Westeros directly. It has no charm of a Thrones game at all. It is a failure with a three-headed dragon pretending to be a ghost.

The best ice and fire fan novel I have seen so far 🙂, it is rare. I just don't know why there is no fire. It may be related to the subject matter itself. I look forward to the author's next book.

Halfway through the book, if the book hadn't talked about gods and ghosts for several chapters starting from the White Walkers in the White House, and hadn't strengthened these gods who don't know whether they exist or not, then this book could be said to be the best text in Game of Thrones. The plot and writing are excellent. The addition of those chapters on magic is like the sandwich of Oreos being broken, and the puffs are filled with expired yogurt. It's not inedible, but it has a strange smell. I feel that a lot of readers should have been lost in those chapters.

The most unpleasant thing about this book is Dorne's marriage contract. Originally it was a contract rather than a vow, and it was not made by the protagonist. So the king's ministers reached a contract with a neighboring country behind the king's back, and the king disagreed after knowing about it. Can this be considered a breach of oath? This contract did not originally consider dragons, nor did it hope that Targaryen could develop an army from the Eastern Continent and rise again. The plan was to wait for Westeros to fall into chaos. After all, Baratheon had just come to power, and Dorne raised an army to help Targaryen restore the country and obtain the position of queen. But Dorn's approach was to leave Viserys alone, not to mention the military strength, a team of attendants, and some financial support that could guarantee the life of a nobleman. Regardless, Viserys was allowed to become a beggar king and a clown in the trading city-state. Arianne let her do whatever she wanted, wandering between the beds of other noble children. Is this the queen Dorne prepared for the protagonist? A queen who has lost her virginity? The protagonist has raised an army, but Dorn is not optimistic about it and does not fulfill his contract. Instead, he takes the initiative to communicate with Baratheon and form a marriage. This is breaking his oath. It wasn't until he knew there was a dragon that he took refuge. As a result, Dorne's performance was blocked by Tyrell, and novices were pecking at each other until the protagonist intervened, with no effect at all. The role of the protagonist's allies is actually to clean the battlefield and take over the territory after the dragon sweeps. Just go to a few Dragon Party families and you can basically meet your needs, and then it just snowballs. In this situation, someone who has no sincerity and no merit, yet still wants the protagonist to compensate and promise the heir's marriage to Dorne. It's so disgusting.

When I write the plot, I start to explain it at a certain point. Then when I talk about a certain period of history involving a certain noble, I start to explain the history of this noble family and various related development histories It's more like a paper than a novel. At least six or seven of the ten chapters are setting up and explaining, Even if It is a wizarding novel that focuses on farming research, and it is impossible to explain most of the content like this one. A slight mention of a nobleman or a name would take hundreds or even thousands of words to explain, as if the author is doing a review of a novel called "Ice and Fire" The author's own notes in this book are three times longer than the main text.

Newbies, please remember to read the 78 chapters after they are released. See if you can accept them. If not, stop your losses in time. I am also grateful to the previous Shennong. Fortunately, I only subscribed to this chapter.

Alas, it's over. When I first started following it, I stopped every two days. When I saw the latest chapter, I stopped for two consecutive months. I revived it last month. I was very happy. Now it's finished. I really enjoyed reading it, and I'm thinking that the author will write another few million words,,, I hope there will be another one

Looking forward to the new work. The concept and writing style of this book are very good. There are a few points that are a bit overwhelming as mentioned in the comment area. However, the flaws are not concealed. I look forward to the author's new work.

And it runs through from beginning to end. It's really uncomfortable to watch. You may think that the natives have watched Blue Star's Game of Thrones drama, and they will be suspicious if they don't dare to command the password and set fireballs 😰