Conquer the Heavens: Starting with One-Click Martial Arts Integration

The biggest problem with this novel is that it is inappropriately funny regardless of the situation. Books specifically written about jokes can also become classics, but random jokes will only make the novel itself a joke.

The protagonist's personality charm is too low. You wrote the protagonist's personality in a very out-of-the-box way, but your writing power is not enough to translate it into humor. Instead, it looks stupid and you don't know the priorities of the situation.

In fact, this artificial intelligence should not be written as the protagonist. It is mainly a tool and a supporting role. You can be like a human, but there is no need for excessive interaction with a vicious tongue. A purely tool-oriented approach may be better.

I saw Chapter 22. . I just finished reading it. The writing is okay and it is a good read. . . . . It's just not quite what I thought. . What I thought was one click The integrated system is to absorb the characteristics of different martial arts and integrate them together, such as - Star Absorbing Technique + Dragon Elephant Prajna Technique + Thirteen Taibao + Golden Bell Cover = absorb other people's internal energy + (internal energy is not purified) directly dispersed to strengthen the physical body + enhance strength/physical magic defense = x x Shen Gong Ladder Cloud Zong + Lingbo Weibu + Spiral Nine Shadows = Step on the left foot and the right foot to reach the sky + Infinite battery life (increase internal strength bug while eating to replenish physical strength) + Flying in the sky (surrounding Gang Qi + nine figures, not afraid 🏹) = Infinite battery life version of the flying skill = xx magical skill. However, the novel is an AI system that collects databases and deduce exercises + assisted practice flow.

The protagonist always gets frustrated no matter what happens, and gets frustrated for the sake of being frustrated, and the AI ​​has also been invisible for twenty or thirty chapters recently.        ，，， The protagonist of the Tianlong volume is not as good as Duan Yu. He has worked hard for so long and practiced martial arts by himself. As a result, Beiming Divine Kung Fu has to do the task. After completing the task, the bulk of it was still eaten by Duan Yu. After learning the Beiming Magic Technique, it is understandable that it is more difficult to attract people from other worlds. If you don't attract people in this world, then why are you still trying so hard to learn the Beiming Magic Technique? I really don't understand.

The main line is actually very clear at the beginning It is that in the current world view, the path of human beings seeking external pursuits (magic/immortality cultivation) has been penetrated, and it is safer to pursue the path of internal pursuit Then the protagonist starts from martial arts, and relies on integrated martial arts to upgrade from traditional martial arts combat power to medium martial arts and high martial arts cultivators/magic reincarnations So I At first, I thought it would be a bastard protagonist, or a genius with endless talents, but it turned out that it was in line with the main line until the Hulk chapter, and then it was all messed up Up to the Hulk chapter, the protagonist's charade was a little small, but at least he was using his brain to seek to break through the upper limit of traditional martial arts internal power (Hulk potion). If his intelligence was not good enough, he would teach martial arts to a plot researcher , inspiring NPCs to take the subjective initiative to reproduce the Banner Hulk test (martial arts version) on themselves, and gain the super power of unlimited energy from genes This was obviously what he thought at the time, and even Zhang Hui himself said that the protagonist was about to take off In the end, the author directly blocked the internal super power of the gamma test, and the protagonist mutated I felt lonely, OK, and said I had no energy. Indeed, Banner has a huge energy gamma ray or a hell oba setting to replenish energy. The protagonist has no source and cannot have infinite energy. Let's consider it reasonable So I went to Tianlong to use Beiming to save energy and find batteries for myself. As a result, Tianlong started to crazily suppress the combat power, and the bug took Beiming. The result was——cannot be used? Md Is Tianlong a world with strong combat power? I would still believe it if you revised the movie, but the novel version of Tianlong is also superior in combat power. According to your sudden setting, if high-level players become immortals and pick up the basic introductory chapter of Xianxia "Baiyang Zhenjie", do they have to do an advanced mission to practice one Qi transfer and one Zhoutian? At least Baiyang Zhenjie can be practiced for a few days to match the internal strength of decades, and it can cleanse marrow and cut hair. Isn't it much faster than Beiming Yijin Jing? There is also a mission to unlock the peerless martial arts - you can practice the small phaseless martial arts at the beginning by just picking it up. What's going on? This restriction is not just a slap on the forehead, it is just a temporary addition, just to reduce the combat power I think the author just wants to write the world he likes, and the protagonist has to reduce the combat power to fit those low martial arts worlds he likes - especially Canghai Why suppress the combat power, because later I have to go to Canghai to show off, but I can't pretend to be Fenglingyue, why don't I write Canghai forward - -Because we have to go through the unavoidable plot kills in the previous outline, and the most outrageous plot kill is the plot involving Thor and Father-level Odin As a result, he went to Canghai to be beaten next time - because he wanted to write about Canghai, the protagonist cannot obtain too buggy combat power before Canghai. Even if it is Marvel, he has got a bloody edge armor. In theory, when he wears it, he can accelerate in a circle and make a sonic boom. "Peng——" passes a white line, directly breaks the speed of sound and kills all the masters in Canghai with his body, and it can't be used I'll seal them all for you Just for breaking Canghai and Liuxu Gong The author can have feelings, but for the sake of feelings, he scoops out all the fillings of the dumplings without filling them. He has to brew vinegar himself for ninety-nine and eighty-one days, until all the dumplings are sour. Hugh also wants to get rid of his jealousy This is my first time seeing him By the way, the author puts his own life into the protagonist, which is okay, but the protagonist should be the author himself who is more progressive, happier and carefree, not the other way around; real life is limited everywhere, and it has to be reflected in the book to torture himself in the book You have written a novel, so you might as well be bold. That's it, I will continue to pay attention, because the previous article is really good.

Sorry, I may have to break my promise. The quality of this book has plummeted since the beginning. First, ① the combat power has been suppressed, and the protagonist cannot get the opportunities he should have, and ② world consciousness, which wipes out one of the great points of Zhutenliu, and the description of artificial intelligence is a big failure. First, there are various quarrels, and usually insert some It was good, but it was annoying to be everywhere. Then I entered the world of The King of Fighters. Warcraft could already filter out a group of people, but the King of Fighters came again. It was really confusing, and the character of the protagonist was weird. The author may not have controlled it well, and the title. He swallowed the title himself and integrated martial arts? It's just Edith integrating a few moves, and then it's gone? I will keep this book on my bookshelf and keep subscribing to it, but I won't read it. I haven't read it since the King of Fighters volume. If I made any omissions, I apologize. Finally, I hope the author can hone his skills in this book and perform better in the next one. (I'm waiting for your next book)

The protagonist has an artificial intelligence and does not check the equipment before entering the dungeon. Only when he enters the dungeon does he realize that he has forgotten the things he prepared in the real world. Is this kind of amusing plot fun? Desperate things are written as if they are playing house. Someone else's first level can fight against hatred for a few minutes. The protagonist can't even beat Duan Yanqing, so he starts to suppress the protagonist's strength? I could learn internal skills by myself before, but now I can't. The settings of the first dungeon were eaten by dogs? If what you write is not to your liking, the most I can do is leave on my own. If you are deliberately disgusting, I will have to curse a few words before leaving. It's so disgusting that I can't even watch it for free.

1. The most unexplainable poisonous point: Artificial intelligence does not come with a memo function, and the protagonist will forget all kinds of things, big and small, although not too much. 2. The most uncomfortable poisonous point: in order to suppress the fighting power, some opportunities that obviously seem to be available to the protagonist are not available. It doesn't mean that the protagonist should be able to grab everyone's heads, I don't like this either, but at least you should get the heads that can be obtained through normal operation. This is not to say that all the protagonist's plans will always achieve results, but the failure rate of your plan is indeed a bit high. Few plans that directly enhance strength will go smoothly.

In the first few chapters, I said that I had changed the colloquial expression of AI, but the result was that I was cheated of two points, and nothing was changed after that. You want the gods to continue the feudal dynasty for hundreds of years, and materialism and capital are sprouting on the opposite side. You are still trying to extend the life of the feudal empire, and you are extremely speechless. To put it bluntly, you are hindering the birth of the party and causing us hundreds of years of pain.