Conquer the Heavens: Starting with One-Click Martial Arts Integration

The biggest problem with this novel is its inappropriate and irreverent humor. Books that specialize in jokes can become classics, but haphazard humor only makes the novel itself a joke.

The protagonist lacks charisma. You wrote the protagonist's personality to be eccentric, but your writing skills are insufficient to transform it into humor; instead, it makes him seem foolish and unaware of the urgency of the situation.

Actually, artificial intelligence shouldn't be the main character in the story. It should primarily be a tool, an auxiliary element. You can make it resemble a human, but excessive interaction with a sarcastic or overly critical tone is unnecessary. A purely tool-oriented approach might be better.

I've read up to chapter 22. Just finished reading it; it's alright, a decent read... It's just a little different from what I expected. I thought a one-click integration system would absorb the characteristics of different martial arts and integrate them together, for example—

The protagonist is always getting into trouble, whether there's a reason or not, and the AI ​​has been absent for the sake of getting into trouble for the sake of getting into trouble. It's been missing for about twenty or thirty chapters recently.

The main storyline was actually quite clear at the beginning. The current worldview has been permeated by the path of seeking external things (magic/cultivation), making the path of seeking internal things safer. Then the protagonist starts with martial arts, relying on the integration of martial arts to upgrade from traditional martial arts combat power to a mid-to-high level martial arts…

I apologize, but I might have to break my promise. The quality of this book dropped sharply after the beginning. First, ① the power levels were constantly suppressed, preventing the protagonist from obtaining the opportunities he should have had. Second, the world consciousness aspect destroyed a major element of the multiverse genre's appeal.

The protagonist is accompanied by an AI that doesn't even check its equipment before entering a dungeon, only to realize after entering that it forgot its preparations in the real world. Is this kind of farcical plot fun? The supposedly intense battles are written like child's play.

1. The most inexplicable flaw: the artificial intelligence does not come with a memo function, so the protagonist will forget all sorts of things, big and small, although not many. 2. The most frustrating flaw: In order to suppress combat power, some opportunities that seem perfectly attainable for the protagonist are denied.

The first few chapters claimed to have changed the AI's colloquial expressions, but it turned out they just tricked me out of two coins; they didn't change anything after that. They still want the gods to prolong the feudal dynasty for hundreds of years. The other side has already seen the emergence of materialism and capitalism, and you are still trying to extend the life of the feudal empire.