I Rely on Length to Achieve Immortality

With the novel setting and "rigorous" world view, there is still something to watch before chapter 200; after chapter 200, it will inevitably turn into numerical flow/panel flow/upgrade flow and running account. At the end of a chapter, in addition to the numerical changes of the protagonist's panel, it is also about the numerical changes of the world environment; the story that was foreshadowed in the early stage Event lines, world lines, character interactions, and character changes all disappear/collapse. The quality of writing is worse than jumping off a cliff. The description of the dynamic changes (realm) of the world view is static (no matter what attributes are added). The description of the content will always only include the intensity of physical training (physical training is fake). Concept, the originally good setting is 🐷) and the total amount of spiritual power. The dynamic effects of other advanced attribute concepts are not absent but simply do not exist. For example: "In other fairy tales, Yuanying can be reborn after severed limbs. In this work, the power and endowment of the Mahayana period are still the same as those of mortals." Just make a U-turn and go G (up to multiple "souls" can escape). The core competition is still a competition of spiritual power (strength). Advanced concepts such as skills/power of heaven and earth/roads are just replacement words for the durability of spiritual power in this work, and have no other function other than that"). In addition, the dynamic interactive changes in the world line have completely disappeared. Now the content is just what the male protagonist wants to come, any character conflicts, and there is no core conflict/external description (nothing profound/eye-catching), only the stacking of numerical values ​​​​on the character panel and the running list of wishes coming true 😊

Some thoughts on lengthening gold fingers. Premise: You can see only one inch. So what if we add an inch to the sun in the sky? Is the disk size of the sun that can be seen with the naked eye directly increased by one inch on the basis of the "disk size", or is the total surface area of ​​the sun increased by one inch? Is the sun in the Xianxia world a real sun or a star-level mythical creature called the Golden Crow? Speaking of which, does this golden finger have a range? There are quite a few questions. It is well known that the fewer descriptive characters, the stronger the effect. This gold finger is like this, and people can't help but think about the many possibilities about it. Where is the most cost-effective place to add this inch? The enemy's vital wound? Rare materials and elixirs? Handsome guy's nostrils? The slits of the breasts? Girl's cup size? The golden elixir, Yuanying, and Yuanshen that will be developed in the future?

The protagonist still wanted to be a mortal and cultivate immortality, but as soon as he entered the hotel, he chose an accommodation area that sounded problematic. There are few people in this dormitory, so the protagonist with the problem will be more conspicuous if he lives there.

By the way, this is just the beginning, Goldfinger is about to be exposed, and it was exposed to several high-level bosses at once. This should not be caught and studied. If there is no halo of the protagonist, it may have been sliced ​​and soul-searched, and various studies have been carried out.

If you can't increase your qualifications, then go crazy and condense your mana. Anyway, you're adding one inch. The more solid your mana is, the higher the bonus you'll get by adding one inch.

The male protagonist has a bit of a wrong outlook on things, and he is still a man who indulges his own family, which may lead to the severance of his own path (Summary: The inner sect brother takes love as his guide, and falls in love with the outer sect brother's wife. The inner sect brother does not know this. The male protagonist says he has the right to pursue others, and then does not stop or remind the inner sect brother from the side, and gives the inner sect brother advice to pursue, and then there is a series of revelations of the identities of the outer sect brothers and the remedial measures) , (complaining: I'm chasing after your mother, but it's reasonable for others to chase after your wife, right?) It's probably around 200 chapters, but the first 200 chapters are really quite interesting, and I don't recommend reading the rest. You can just flip through the catalog and see which ones you can accept.

Find long and thin spiritual materials, such as heavenly silk and fine gold thread, add one inch to the diameter, and you will make a lot of money.

It was pretty good to watch at first, but what kind of brain did Tianxiang come up with to design the plot? There are more than 100 chapters of plot surrounding a succubus, and 15 chapters of fighting to kill her. The author has all the succubus in his mind, right? What's even more outrageous is that a group of succubi licking dogs turned the protagonist upside down, running around, and the outer door was almost gone. They then handled it with care and paid a small amount of money to not pursue it. I really! This is not how the amiable world of cultivating immortals is written. Chapters 300-400 made me sick.

Try adding +1 inch to the radius of the atom's nucleus.

This book is so well written that it has already surpassed Yang Shen in an instant. The Lord of Mysteries is the best novel in the history of Qidian. Mo Yan and Chen Zhongshi are not worthy of carrying shoes.

It's so funny, it's just the male protagonist and his male mothers. But it's quite interesting. I haven't seen such a relaxing novel in a long time. All the members are really good people. The decent ones are all genuine, and they are also self-editing, but there is too little written.

Why doesn't the protagonist learn observation skills, similar to Qi-gazing, which is a very common ability in cultivating immortals? Then why doesn't the Dharma Xiang find a smaller Dharma Appearance technique? If you can't find it, order it from your neighbor. Make a Dharma Appearance technique that is only one centimeter larger for each level. I will be invincible.

I always feel that the protagonist's upgrade is not real. The author has too little description in this aspect. There are no supernatural powers and spells that can change the world. The meaning of level increase seems to be that you can fight higher-level enemies, just like playing a simulator of cultivating immortals.

It is known that there is no spiritual energy in the Demon Suppressing World, and the spiritual energy will cause the things sealed in the Demon Suppressing World to resurrect. When the protagonist makes guns to help the people of the Demon Suppressing World, he cannot find any way to make gunpowder or other powered firearms, so he insists on using spiritual energy as the driving energy. Author, do you intend to let ordinary people who have never practiced in the demon-suppressing world how to recover spiritual energy that they cannot see at all? How can ordinary people judge the strength of monsters without spiritual consciousness? If the monster is gone, isn't it just to send spiritual energy to the monster? And wouldn't a large amount of spiritual energy attract monsters when energy-powered weapons are piled together? How is this different from using a nuclear weapon to fight Godzilla? The author said that you want to help the ordinary people in the Demon Suppressing World survive. In fact, you are planning to let the ordinary people in the Demon Suppressing World exterminate their clans and use them as sacrifices to unlock the seal of the Demon Suppressing World. If starting from the Dark Heaven Realm is just a decline in writing skills, then what is written here in the Demon Suppressing World is purely based on the defense. Author, did you think twice when writing? Even if it is a novel, you must have the most basic logic

It is obviously a novel about cultivating immortals, but it has a strong flavor of a courtyard house. It feels like the protagonist has been fooling around.

To be honest, I feel that the combat level of this book is a bit low, and it can't keep up with the current mainstream version of Qidian.

The protagonist should practice pupil magic. It would be great if he could see the microscopic world. If this world is also composed of microscopic particles, then add a little directly between protons and neutrons. It may be more powerful than Jinxian's magic. After all, the performance of Jinxian in this book is so bad that even if you press Mahayana, you can't even hit a hole with all your strength.

There is a big loophole in this book. He used the cultivation of the second dantian to cover up his real cultivation. As a result, both dantians were golden elixirs. How can he explain it later? I can't stand it anymore!

Let Shen Nong tell us about the quality and whether there are any poisonous spots.

I scrolled through the comments section and found that the readers of Xiuxianwen are too many angry young people with a strong temper. Authors who write light novels, fantasy or western fantasy in this style may have a much better effect. Readers there will be better able to understand your taste.

Personally, I feel it's okay. I can sum it up in three words: relaxed. There is not a lot of conspiracy suspense. It is indeed a very everyday novel about cultivating immortals and is easy to read.

I have read dozens of chapters, and this novel is indeed not violent. It is more like practicing and traveling in a college. It is very relaxing, not poisonous, and has a lot of funny points. It is quite good.

The writing is very interesting. I hope the author will work hard and I will give you a reward.

Very interesting. I haven't seen such a relaxing novel about cultivating immortals in a long time.

It's pretty good. The writing in the front is particularly good. Although it has dropped a bit in the back, it is still on the rise. It can be considered a refined grain.

But the back is rotten like this

The first book is very awkward. If I hadn't started reading it from the second book, I probably wouldn't have been able to read the first book. The only highlight of the first book was Elder Coffin The beginning of the second book was awkward, but I followed the clone theme without reading it. The middle and later stages are okay, and the highlights are the supporting characters. Brother Ya, the protagonist's various scenes of getting married are good, and the combination of various skills is very novel The third book, the beginning is not good, the charcoal spiritual power barbecue is very novel In summary, the author cannot write the first three golden chapters. Next time I open a new book, it is better to find an author to write the first three chapters. There are many eunuch authors who are particularly good at writing the beginning, and as a side job, they write the beginning for others.

The early stage is good, but the later stage is a little dull. Generally speaking, it is a qualified and relaxed work. The length of the work is appropriate. If you are starting a new book, you hope not to set the word count target too high. The writing style and energy may not be able to sustain it.

The beginning is good, and it feels like it should be a relaxing fairy tale. However, there are problems with the setting of Donggeng District from the beginning. It's just incompatible. The plot behind it has the meaning of a conspiracy theory. However, uncovering the reason is simple. So, overall, the writing is good, the atmosphere and plot are relaxed, but there are logical problems.

The author may have discovered the problem himself. It was quite interesting in the first and middle stages, but not so much after the middle stage. The story became boring, and it collapsed when there were too many copies, and then it became unreadable.