Miss Da Vinci and Her Dragon

Huh? If I'm not a buddy, I won't write it anymore 😰

6. The most euphemistic thing I have seen is that it may be continued in the future. This person directly wrote "abandon".

Why can a real dragon be so weak? Even a young dragon isn't that weak, right? I even doubt that I can defeat a group of dogs.

To be honest, I chose the name "Su Mu" after careful consideration. Actually, the name of the protagonist in fantasy novels like this has always been a problem. If you choose a foreign name, you may look uncomfortable, and if you choose a traditional Chinese name, it will be even more uncomfortable. It's not good if it's too long. Whoever likes a long name like a caterpillar will look at it. (For example, Sigismund, Adriano) Speaking of which, I actually named Sumu after the goalkeeper of Inter Milan Football Club, Yann Sommer, who is a Swiss. So stop saying the name is weird, Europeans just have this kind of name.

To be honest, after I replaced Speedy Spinner as the protagonist, I found that there was no sense of inconsistency at all 🙂

What a pity, the subject matter seems to be very good, and the writing is also good. The author didn't resist. I just entered it from the recommendation today. I saw the latest chapter, oh, cut 🙂. I can only say that pushing the corpse has to be the starting point. If you don't recommend books while you are alive, you will have to wait until you are dead to recommend them.

The following is my current view on the "magic lines, magic, and witchcraft" described in the article Magic lines: the use of so-called media and lines to guide the magic of the planet Magic: the use of meditation to guide the magic power of the living individual (guess) Witchcraft: the ancestral blood passed down by the living individual itself, which is inherent in it

Huh? Why was he resurrected? Didn't you say cut it?

? ? ? I just saw it two days ago. Didn't I write it if I didn't say I had no talent? I didn't read it. Why did it suddenly come back to life?

I don't like to follow books because they are easy to break, which is kindness I don't like finished books, because you can see the ending, which is loyalty I don't like half-dead books, because I don't know whether I will die first or the author will die first, which is honesty But you can read the author's books, which is filial piety. So I, a kind, loyal, honest and filial person, read this book But it's too short. I wish it was longer and the male protagonist would be CPU-obsessed, so there could be less plots like this And don't stop updating.

Yes, it is about Leonardo da Vinci, the art history of the Renaissance, and it is not about England, Frank, or Russia. It is about Venice, but the author writes about the environment of this water city in detail. Of course, it is still good, come on. 🙂

Eunuch is a harm to readers and yourself. Just rely on a little inspiration to write a small beginning and escape to Dongchang will only exhaust your inspiration and reputation. If you can't write anymore, you can write daily for a while. It is also good to practice writing.

It does have the feel of youth literature as a book friend said. Moreover, since it is a Western dragon, the protagonist is a dragon beast with the IQ of a time traveler, that is, the most basic real name is missing, not a real dragon The background and world view are not expressed, and the story is carried out directly like chasing a duck to the shelf.

Yes, it is good, but again, author, your novel is too fast. Others can write five or six chapters, but you finish it in half a chapter. Just like the Knight of the Golden Fleece, he suddenly appears, and the whole rhythm is very tight. Not long after the male protagonist was born, so many things happened, and there are very few descriptions of the characters. Apart from their appearance, there are very few other descriptions of the characters, such as the changes in the feelings between the characters. Transformation, the psychology of the character, etc., Otherwise the character will appear to be empty Of course, this novel at least has ideas. For example, the city-state of Venice, Italy, which is less written in the novel, starts with it. After all, other novels are either kingdoms or empires, and the city-state model is used to describe it, and there is also the artistic development of the Renaissance. But the idea is good. You have written less than 200,000 words so far. How many ideas do you have? To be honest, you should show off, write about daily life, be a chapter, and flesh out the characters, otherwise you won't be able to write much Come on 🌹

So it's a story about a male protagonist. I've seen this book a few times. I didn't click on it because I thought it was about a female protagonist 😅

The writing is good, but the dragon is so weak...

The dragon egg was bought back from the market, and it was only the size of an ordinary egg. After hatching, the protagonist was said to be as big as a cat. Being picked up by a human girl by the way was an insult to the word dragon. It is not easy for people with the word dragon in the east or the west. I am afraid you can't even beat a mouse after you were born.

After reading Chapter 5, what are the personalities of the protagonist Young Dragon and the heroine Da Vinci? In the first conversation with the heroine, the heroine said 'must' twice. Especially in the first sentence, 'must' appears. The first time you meet, a beautiful girl says to you, 'Can you teach me this? (Referring to the perspective technique of painting) Or ask like this: 'Can you teach me this' The girl who appears for the first time gives people a different impression. Similarly in the first meeting scene, the heroine gets stuck on the neck of the male protagonist/young dragon. In the confrontation scene with the thieves, the heroine summoned the knife and prepared to fight. The protagonist, the young dragon, breathed fire and burned a thief. From these two scenes, what kind of character does the heroine show? It's strong and rough. However, there is a scene in the middle where the heroine and the hero go to the vegetable market to buy chickens, but the stall owner, the mother-in-law, kindly refuses to charge money and has a family affair with the heroine. What is the heroine's character reflected in this scene? Likeable, gentle, and easy to get along with. After three scenes, is the heroine's character expression inconsistent? If the heroine is a strong character when getting along, in order to avoid this awkward feeling, the scene in the vegetable market can be ended in one sentence: the heroine takes the baby dragon to buy a chicken. Back to the topic, what kind of character does the male protagonist Xiao Long show in the three scenes? In the first paragraph, the young dragon behaves like a licking dog and is in a weak position when getting along with the heroine. The second section of the vegetable market, where the baby dragon is greedy for chicken, is a background or setting foreshadowing, with no clear character expression. In the third section of the confrontation between the thieves, the heroine rushed into the den of thieves and asked for the lost wallet. The baby dragon breathed fire and burned one person, telling the heroine to run quickly, but the heroine did not move. The character displayed by the young dragon is rational and wise. In the next scene, she met with the leader of the thieves group. After a few words, the heroine actually agreed to steal the treasure of a local lord or a big noble, and the reward was only 100 coppers? Oh, plus the young dragon is not held accountable for hurting people? ? In the third scene, what was the heroine thinking when she rushed into the band of thieves? And she actually knew the leader of the thieves group, that is, she knew that the leader of the thieves group might be stationed at the thieves group. Why did she come in? Why did the baby dragon insist on not retreating after causing chaos and being reminded? Just to get a wallet that you may not get back? So, after the four scenes of the heroine, her character is strong and rough, gentle and cute, reckless, stubborn and stupid. The male protagonist is cowardly and stubborn, and a rational dog-licker. Let's briefly talk about the male protagonist's young dragon's strength. Although it has just broken out of its shell, it can breathe fire and burn people, and it can fly. I think its strength is average. Because compared to ordinary people, it and people can threaten each other, and it can fly and escape, so it is not at a disadvantage. The male protagonist is actually a dragon! With this kind of strength and this kind of character expression, tsk tsk, Long, is he worthy? What is the universal image of the dragon? Is the male protagonist the dragon in My Little Pony? I don't really like the characters of the heroine and the hero. Personal opinion, for reference only.

Successful books are all the same, while books that hit the streets are all kinds of weird.

Why has no one read such a beautiful book?

There are only two updates on the shelves. What's the difference? It's not for nothing. Lao Deng, give me a hard update 🐷

What's the point of adding an occasional chapter when everyone thinks it's a eunuch? It's not clean?

OvQ

How long will it take to be on the shelves? Will there be updates once it is on the shelves?

Why eunuch😡😡😡😡

I saw you on Zhihu. It's better to update more and complain less.

It looks good, keep writing 😍

Provincial flow: There are changes in people. Those who came here for the label of alien beasts can be withdrawn.