The Eastern Sequence: Starting as a Coroner

The 13 sequences (maybe more) designed by the author of the chapters updated so far have all appeared. I will sort them out. If there are any gaps, please help to fill them in~ Zi Shu Luo: Ninth-level storyteller, eighth-level You Lian (face-changing master), seventh-level shadow puppet maker, sixth-level diviner, fifth-level fawning minister Ugly Ox Martial God: ninth-level ranger, eighth-level old man Taoist, seventh-rank sword attendant Yinhu Zen Heart: ninth-rank novice (carpenter), eighth-rank warrior monk, seventh-rank ascetic, sixth-rank happy Zen Maotu Yinzun: ninth-rank hermit, eighth-rank traveler, seventh-rank star destiny, sixth-rank knife creditor, fourth-rank usurper Chenlong Yanshi: ninth-rank Danqing, eighth-rank Fengjian, seventh-rank Kanyu master, sixth-rank Tiangong, fifth-rank Rank Qilingren Sishe is tired of winning: ninth rank medicine slave, eighth rank assassin, seventh rank Gu master Shenhou Shouwen: ninth rank doctor, eighth rank beast master, seventh rank shaman, sixth rank horseman, fifth rank shaman Hai Pig Toad Palace: ninth rank gambler, eighth rank shopkeeper, seventh rank hidden palace Leap cat corpse immortal: ninth rank widower, eighth rank encoffiner, seventh rank black one Wuma Zhaohua: Ninth-rank scholar, eighth-rank fire master, seventh-rank flood control(?), Sixth-rank gentleman Youji disaster: ninth-rank bandit, eighth-rank armored soldier, seventh-rank knight, sixth-rank divine strategy Weyang Houtu: ninth-rank executioner, eighth-rank Yin soldier, seventh-rank criminal prisoner Xugou Dharma: ninth-rank cook, eighth-rank Qi refiner, fifth-rank thunder cultivator

Let's summarize the high-ranking beings currently appearing in various pathways (probably equivalent to Sequence 0) Leap Cat Corpse Immortal—Jiuyou Chengci Wonderful Form Refining True Monarch (Mirage God) Zi Shu's Absurdity—Prisoner Yuan Luan Chaos Dream Divine Traveling True Monarch (Hua Xu) Ugly Ox Martial God—Dongyue Abide by the Hundreds Zhan Wuqian True Monarch (Zhuang Miao/Guan Gong) Yinhu Zen Heart - The Secret Secret of the West to the One and Six Paths True Monarch (Great Sun Tathagata) Mao Tu Yinzun - The Nine Heavens Shining on the Sun and the Moon and the Last True Monarch (Zhu Jiuyin) Chenlong Yanshi - Shanze Wolong Hidden Wind and Accepted the Water True Monarch (Wind Queen) Si Sheyan Sheng - The True Lord of Xuan Ying's Turbid Heart in Southern Xinjiang (Yinjun) Wu Ma Zhaohua - The True Lord of Blazing Flames Who Bears the Righteous Dharma in the Middle Hall (Emperor Kuang) Weiyang Houtu - The True Lord of Houde Youxuan of Fengdu (Ming Ji) Shen Monkey Shouwen - The True Lord of Chengtang, who is sincere and kind, dispels evil and relieves suffering (Fang Xiang) You Rooster Disaster - Beiling imitates the true king of military calamity and disaster (Zhen Sheng) Xugou Dharma - Zhengyi Jingying protects the way and the true king of Liuhe (Guangchengzi) Haizhuchan Palace - Guanghan Wuwei Romance True King Wan Guan (Yue Mu Chang Xi)

Definitely not a newbie. The rhythm is maintained well, and I feel that large-scale products with an average price of more than 6,000 yuan should be no problem. If I had used a few books to develop a pen name, this book would have achieved far more than the current 40th place on the new book list with 110,000 words. If you are really a newcomer, you are destined to eat this bowl of rice. It's a bit impressive 👍

I read five chapters of Investment and felt that the writing was okay, so I went to check the information. Unexpectedly, coal and even briquettes have been widely used in my country since the Han, Wei and Jin Dynasties. In the Ming and Qing Dynasties, it was also quite common to use coal poison to kill households by blocking vents 😰

From the writing style, world view, etc., I can feel that the author has something special. But no matter in terms of plot advancement, plot progress, scene description, battle description, etc., It feels like there is a sense of jumping and anxiety. Obviously there are some places that could be explained in detail, but it just happens to be moving forward very quickly. Some places can be skipped, but that's where the ink is. For example, during the battle with the assassin, the fox detonated an explosive egg and was killed in two blows. . . . . . Another example is beating that monk. The boss jumped up and killed him with a sword. . . . . . Then wouldn't all the preparation you have done in front of you be in vain? It looks very tiring, and obviously the climax is just not satisfying. I almost gave up the book when I read it. Another point is the name "cyanide". If I talked about this term with an ancient person, he would definitely ask what cyanide is and what its compound is. Does the protagonist need to educate everyone on what chemistry is? Moreover, the people around the protagonist actually accepted this term directly and were very confused. Are these people brainless? I have never heard of something, and it is very related to the development of the case. I don't know what it is?

Who is the author of this book? If you have castrated, report to the funeral room as soon as possible.

After reading a few chapters, to be honest, the setting and writing are okay, but the gap between the setting and behavior of the protagonist is too big. The protagonist you wrote should be a bold, careful and thoughtful person, but why did you write so many psychological activities? Your inner complaints completely destroyed the main character. The character's character looks like a resentful woman. Especially when complaining about something, the protagonist seems to be very frivolous. Isn't the humor so humorous? It seems that the protagonist is thoughtful like Dee Renjie at one moment, and the same as 007 played by Stephen Chow. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

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But the book is indeed well written, especially the first five chapters. In terms of the plot, the links one after another, and the final reversal, are all unexpected (the author is definitely not a novice, maybe a demon from a foreign war) Then there is the profession set in this book. Although there have been similar novels before, and even professions, the promotion ceremony is quite novel. Later readers can refer to the promotion ceremony of best friends (it does not require anything special). Special materials, only promotion methods are needed) Finally, if the author is stable, compared to other fast-paced novels (there is no way to do this, because the emotional flow formula of the stove is really casual at the starting point) Therefore, the author's early recommendations such as testing the water may not be as good as other types of novels to follow, but as long as the author continues to be stable, and slowly follow this pace, there will be no problem in the follow-up to a big masterpiece.

The book is very good, but it feels very boring when I read it. Pig's feet always causes some things that I can't solve, and then I ask for help everywhere... What's even more speechless is that I like to take care of things, but I have no ability. I grind and grind, and it's not fun to do anything...