Rolling Through the Ming Dynasty

There's a complete lack of detailed scene and character descriptions, resulting in a lack of immersion. The charm of the writing is also very important; the plot is actually quite decent. The beginning is also too rushed. This book might have achieved good results 10 years ago, but now those who read historical fiction are mostly seasoned readers, and the requirements for writing skills are much higher.

The personal bravery of the protagonist in historical novels?

@Reader This is the forging method for heavy matchlock musket barrels (also known as the "Dove Cannon" from the late Ming Dynasty)! This is also the French method, which is more robust and sturdy than the British method of flat plate overlapping and rolling forging and welding. A 20-21mm caliber is powerful enough to penetrate the Jurchen iron armor at 6-70 meters!

In Chapter Seven, the Censor-in-Chief kept calling him "Hero Lu," even though Lu Xiang-sheng was resented after his death. As a colleague who died resisting the Qing, calling him "Lord Jian Dou" was perfectly acceptable; he wasn't some nameless wandering knight. Calling him "Hero Lu" felt a bit awkward.

Some basic common sense questions shouldn't be asked. For example, Changzhou Prefecture's capital was in Wujin County, while the Lu family lived in Yixing County, about 50 kilometers apart. How could a 9-year-old child possibly travel over 100 kilometers to Xiaoling Mausoleum to fly a kite? And this child actually flew away with the kite.

I should stop writing now; I couldn't even finish the first three chapters.

Despite writing so many books, Old White Pig hasn't made any progress. Many words are misused, the protagonist's vision is confused, and the entire novel is almost entirely a narrative, resulting in a chaotic and disorganized work.

First, he is a modern person, but the author has portrayed him as an ordinary ancient person. Do you think that's appropriate? We want to see his story of reforming the Ming Dynasty as a modern person. Secondly, I think it's almost impossible for the protagonist to support the entire Ming Dynasty if the story continues like this. The opponents are too strong, and he's currently too weak.

At this point in the late Ming Dynasty, without any cheat codes or overpowered abilities, everything written is illogical; good people simply can't survive. I really wanted to support the author, but it's a pity.

As the saying goes, a good summary is king, three chapters are emperor. Sorry, you don't have level 5 or the "Master" badge, so I won't click through.