Rolling Through the Ming Dynasty

There is no detailed description of scenes and characters at all, and there is a lack of immersion. The charm of the text is also very important, and the plot is actually pretty good. The start is too hasty. In fact, your book might have gotten good grades 10 years ago, but now people who read historical texts are basically old bookworms, and their requirements for writing skills are getting higher and higher.

The personal prowess of the protagonist in a historical novel?

{"NickName":"Old White Pig a small commoner in the late Ming Dynasty","UserId":191017983}This is the forging method of the barrel of a heavy matchlock gun (that is, the turtle dove gun in the late Ming Dynasty)! This is also a flange chicken method, which is stronger and stronger than the British flat plate lapped coiled plate forge welding. The 20-21mm caliber is powerful enough to penetrate Jiannu armor at 6-70 meters! And the large diameter is conducive to forging and drilling and enlarging! White teeth, armor-piercing longbows and heavy arrows are all useless in front of heavy matchlock guns! By the way, there is no need to look at the so-called historical data that says it takes nearly a month to drill a gun tube. This is purely misleading! In fact, when using Fujian iron or refined wrought iron, after the gun tube is forged and welded, it needs to be annealed for a day after simple correction to ensure the quality of the forged welding! Drilling and reaming only takes six or seven days at most! Oh, don't forget to sprinkle borax powder during forge welding to ensure that the impurities on the forge welding surface are clean!

Chapter 7: There is Lu Yingxiong on the left of the supervisory censor, and another Lu Yingxiong. Although Lu Xiangsheng was resented after his death, as a colleague who died fighting against the Qing Dynasty, it is okay to call him Jiandou Gong. He is not a nameless ranger. This Lu Yingxiong is a bit awkward.

Some simple common sense questions should not be asked. It's not that Changzhou Prefecture is governed by Wujin County. The Lu family is in Yixing County. The distance between the two sides is about 50 kilometers. Let's talk about how a 9-year-old child went to Xiaoling, more than 100 kilometers away, to fly a kite. It really flew with the kite.

Just seal it, I won't be able to read the first three chapters.

Lao Bai Zhu has written so many books but still has not made any progress. Many words in it are misworded, the protagonist's vision is confusing, and the whole novel is almost described in narrative plot, which is messy and disorganized.

First, he is a modern person. Does the author think it is appropriate to portray him as an ordinary ancient person? We want to see his story of transforming the Ming Dynasty as a modern man. Second, in fact, I think it is almost impossible for the protagonist to support the entire Ming Dynasty if I continue writing. The opponent is too strong and he is too weak now. I have not seen his future plan to transform the Ming Dynasty as a modern person who traveled through the late Ming Dynasty. I am talking about the more macro aspects. For example, how is Huang Taiji doing? Is Mao Wenlong dead? How to stop it? Is it necessary to recruit talented key figures from the late Ming Dynasty? The protagonist just wants to dominate the mountain and run the business slowly, but there is probably not enough time. If this continues, let alone confronting the politically savvy Huang Taiji, he will probably be defeated and flee to Taiwan in the end. Third, I'd better think again. The common people in the late Ming Dynasty are not suitable for the protagonist of this book. For this kind of story that travels through the late Ming Dynasty and transforms the Ming Dynasty, you can probably take the father-son route. If Lu Xiangsheng is still alive, the protagonist can use his father's power to plan, and there is also historical knowledge to pave the way. I have seen several books like this recently, and there are also ones that time travel to Yuan Chonghuan's son. This kind of plot focuses on father and son, two male protagonists, one protagonist and one protagonist, which may be able to cover up the shortcomings

At this time, in the late Ming Dynasty, there was no golden finger and nothing written was logical. Good people really couldn't live. I really want to support the author, but it's a pity.

As the saying goes, an introduction is king and three chapters are king. I'm sorry you don't have level 5 and a great mark, so I won't click on it.