Everything Starts from Childhood Skills

A son of the current emperor has to do it by himself. He doesn't even have a decent retainer. This prince's equipment is really low. He is not as good as those big families. A prince with the ability and many thrones. If you want to do it, do the people who follow him agree?

As title. After reading Chapter 50, the protagonist was seriously injured twice, and the first plot was not finished yet. Many dialogues were completely unnecessary, neither advancing the plot nor portraying the character's personality. On the surface, the narrative seems to be a two-line narrative, with one chapter writing one line of plot. All I can say is that it persuaded me to quit, it was too procrastinating.

The progress is slow. The first chapter is about the female supporting role. The whole chapter is full of content. It also has a two-line narrative. Does the author think he is a big boss? Even the basic fan base cannot write like this. Not to mention what happens later, with plug-ins turned on, and just after defeating someone, he is immediately slapped in the face, so there is no need to exercise restraint. The author is even more self-righteous. On the surface, he explained it in the comments, but in fact the readers didn't listen at all. Readers on the basic 8th level said that they were a little bit poisonous and they still went their own way. Anyway, I have only read more than 40 chapters, and I am still talking about marriage and fire lotus. I am too lazy to read what you write next.

The author's idea is very good. I want to write a good story. The story background is okay. It's just that the idea is wrong. Write the main characters, male and female protagonists, character relationships, and plot advancement into one big piece. The article is full of individualism and makes people who read it want to laugh. Selfishness is human nature, but selfishness is not the only way to survive. Final advice: Don't look at it, it's a big one.

The writing is indeed good, but the various relationships are so complicated that the more you watch it, the more you can't stand it. The protagonist's fighting ability is also very frustrating. Anyone can try it.

Most of them are good-looking, and the poisonous points are basically concentrated on the heroine. Since they are all talking about cultivating boy skills, why bother writing another heroine to add superfluity?

The brainless heroine in the whole story is self-righteous, refined and self-interested, and she also puts on a layer of warmth and longing for freedom. The whole story is indifferent!

Although I haven't read it yet, it's the first time I've seen someone writing about real boy kung fu. I find it very novel and interesting.

If you don't understand politics, don't write randomly. Can you understand some common sense about history? First, it is written that the Jianghu people want to arrest the prince and question his martial arts skills, and then these court officials dare to attack the prince casually. This makes me feel ridiculous

Niubi, the protagonist is a martial arts genius of the contemporary royal family. As a result, by the time he reaches adulthood, his strength has reached the first level. After that, only the masters and unknown masters are left. Both his mother and the queen can only have access to an ordinary magical book "Tiangang Boy Gong". Are you planning to keep the magic book to grow moldy?

With the way it is written now, it will be deleted by readers sooner or later. You can't hold on to cutting yourself🐣🐣🐣🐣🐣

In the early days, Goldfinger boasted that he was so awesome. The good guy is still the prince, but in the end, a random person can beat the protagonist half to death, and kill the guards of the prince's house at every turn. They are so awesome, who are they slapping in the face? There is a grandmaster behind him, but it does not mean that he is a grandmaster, and it is not like there are no grandmasters in the Zhu family. The most important thing is that he has goldfinger. Every time he fights with others, he is beaten so badly, and he is attacked easily. , Vomiting blood or something like that, I already have the master-level body skills, so I don't use them, I will be beaten to death immediately, they have already stepped on your face, beat your people, and you still fight him, you just defeat him It's over. I'm just relying on my internal strength to fight others. If I win, that's it. I'm beaten to the point of vomiting blood and seriously injured, and I'll die soon. This is very desperate. At least give it something that makes people happy.

The writing is not bad, I can only say this, maybe it would have been popular ten years ago... It feels like an old-school martial arts novel, written in the era of Jin Yong and Gu Long, with ups and downs, but the pace of life is generally very fast now, and online novels are mostly accepted by the public as fast food literature, which may not be accepted by too many readers today. But if you like this bite, it seems that it is time to start eating.

The title of the book attracted me, but I couldn't put it down from the beginning. It felt like it didn't cut into the subject very naturally: 1. A person who aspires to martial arts, is supported by the emperor, and is this how important a martial arts master is to the royal family? Then an inexplicable Huolian takes a wife in exchange? Can't there be an exchange of interests? 2. Why do you have to arrange a wife when you learn Tongzi Kung Fu? You have never seen a woman? Waiting to be green without breaking the rules?

After reading 60 chapters, I have read a novel for so long, and for the first time I have the urge to report a novel for removal. You are a disgusting reader with no lower limit.

Run quickly, the male protagonist occupies half of the book, and the female protagonist occupies half the page. If the author is a woman, he writes about the female protagonist at the beginning. The male protagonist in it is extremely aggrieved, and he has to thank the female protagonist for being plotted by the female protagonist. Moreover, in order to show that the female protagonist is smart, the author has adjusted the IQ of the male protagonist. The male protagonist is frustrated and stupid, while the female protagonist is unsmart and selfish. Such a story should not be placed in a male channel and given such a name.

The most rubbish novel, a treasure was written and put on the shelves, it is really a world full of wonders. . .

It was written bluntly as a plot...

Nonsense, this is just a threat. This woman didn't know that there was a Cui family behind her, and she only had a fire lotus in her hand.

Brothers, let me give you a warning for all book friends. Although the name of this novel looks like a martial arts novel and a Ji Do-ryu novel, half of it is written about female palace battles. The male protagonist accounts for half of the plot, and the female protagonist accounts for half of the plot. It is also the conflict between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law, and It is divided into concubines and concubines, which is very confusing to read. Later, it also contains the same harem politics as Zhen Huan's biography. I can't stand it anymore. This work is like a deformed child produced by the cross between male and female videos. Book lovers who originally wanted to read Budo-ryu should not read it.

Let me talk about my thoughts. The beginning is not bad, but the plot is indeed dragging. Secondly, human nature is selfish. Everyone knows that one or two sentences are okay, but if you say too much, it turns into chattering and annoying. Finally, the novel is a carrier with strong subjectivity. The content must be described around the protagonist. Other characters can be described, but not too many. It should not be one chapter for the protagonist and another chapter for other characters. This will create a sense of fragmentation and greatly affect the reader's reading fluency.

To be honest, although I personally think this book is good, there are too many fairies in the book which is a bit off-putting.

Author: Your book is not pirated. Do you know what this means?

The protagonist, the third son of Ming Dynasty, could not learn any advanced kung fu, but he learned boy kung fu? If it weren't for the rubbish Golden Finger, that boy's skill would be of no use. Not to mention the most powerful magical skills, at least the skills that are more powerful than the boy's skill should be learned. Even the emperor's legitimate son can't learn powerful exercises, who can? Only the prince? Can he learn so much on his own? I would really laugh if a royal child who learned magical skills showed up later.

If you want to write a female video, you have to post a male video. Even if you post a male video, you still have to write a double protagonist (yes, the other protagonist is female)🤣👉🏻🤡👈🏻🤣

It looks good, I love reading it, so I wrote it like this! The first three chapters are well written, please give me feedback in the future.

I subscribed to most of the books. To be honest, my biggest expectation after following the story was that the protagonist would ascend to the throne, and the people around the protagonist would be enfeoffed one by one, and then have some daily life. But twenty-five years later, everyone in the protagonist's family was humiliated, and the protagonist's mother was Forced to commit suicide, the protagonist's sister and fiancée became the wrath of others. All the protagonist's subordinates, except for a few who ran fast, were all dead. I really don't know what you mean by writing this. If you are a literary youth, don't come to Qidian, at least don't come to the male channel. You have to figure out what the highlight of your book is. You have laid out so many emotional dramas in the front, and those who can catch up behind them are those who recognize the emotional dramas you wrote. After writing more than half of the book, you come up with a magical twist and cut off all the emotions. You might as well just kill the girl and kill the sister in a cool article at the beginning. You are not the one who put the poison in it. tm I shouldn't have continued watching it twenty-five years later. I still hope that at least half of it will survive. After all, the protagonist is not confirmed to be dead, but just missing. The result is that everything is gone. So what is the point of having so many emotional dramas in front of you?

The book is a good one, but the updates are too slow, and the double main plot jumps every other chapter. Plus, it's the Chinese New Year, so it might end up being eaten to death.

This is the first novel I read when I downloaded the Qidian app for the first time. After reading a few chapters, I now want to uninstall the app. There are still people reading rubbish novels and I can recommend them 😒😒

1. The plot is procrastinating. It took dozens of chapters to take a fire lotus and it is not finished yet, and this fire lotus is just a rare treasure 2. He considered himself the second prince, but was blatantly challenged and assassinated. What is the need for the Ming Dynasty to exist?