American Comics: Starting from Obtaining the Hatred Value System

It's a boring plot. The criminals are only caught but not killed. It's really wasteful. Kill those who have enough hatred to kill them. It's more enjoyable to write and watch this way

After reading a few chapters, I feel like forget it. It's too awkward. The style is quite Chinese, especially the name of the protagonist. When I read the novel, I couldn't even construct the scene in my mind. It doesn't have the flavor of an American drama. When outsiders call the protagonist Luo or Lao Luo, I don't feel awkward at all.

The progress is too slow, the hooks are not good, it is like a castrated version, and the main character is not good and has no imagination. I don't understand the plot. I said I have seen the movie but I feel that I don't know anything. After reading more than ten chapters, it is too boring.

It's boring, the protagonist is just like a native, and I have no desire to continue watching!

Regarding the boring plot, I have seen a lot of feedback from book friends. I listened to everyone's opinions and decided to speed up the progress. However, since the previous parts of the manuscript are difficult to modify, I will do three chapters a day to get to the later plot as early as possible. Thank you for your support and I am deeply sorry for bringing you a bad experience. If you have any questions in the future, you can leave a message under this comment. Thank you very much!

It's quite outrageous. Hatred can only be triggered against villains.

After seeing today's update, the protagonist doesn't even know what he should do. A dog's life is at stake. Are you afraid that you will die too late when you follow Batman and the others to play the vigilante game without killing anyone?

Why do we need to merge worlds? A single universe is enough to write about, there are so many comics

It's better to become Huorong directly. At least he is connected to the entire emotional spectrum. This system is unknown. World animation and comics, whatever you want, as long as it is within the world view, I don't want to see the movie. It's so bad.

The protagonist broke the law and went to the Luther Group to steal some material. This material might help Barbara stand up, but he couldn't get it at the moment. He also set it up that even if he had money, he couldn't buy this material, making an excuse for himself to steal it? This material can be obtained even if it takes a few years, right? But as a police officer, you have to trample on the law, so what else can you say? He used to be upright and upright in Gotham, but now he steals materials for his own benefit? I don't know why the author designed such a plot, just to increase Barbara's favorability? Isn't it okay to use powerful magic or something like that after becoming stronger? In order to quickly get a girlfriend who can walk normally?

If you wear a battle suit and make waves, wait until the press conference to reveal your identity directly. This can attract hatred, and you can also harvest hatred by wearing a battle suit openly. After all, the fact that you can't receive hatred now is not because of the helmet, but because others don't know who you are after putting on the suit. As long as your identity is disclosed, even wearing a helmet should not affect the harvest of hatred. There is also the issue of not killing villains. The author did not handle it very well and should change it. For example, how much hatred can be harvested to fully fill the required abilities is directly displayed by the system, so that you can choose according to the situation. For example, you can brush a certain ability that a villain needs, and after reaching the full level, you can kill it directly regardless of other garbage abilities, or some villains can be killed directly if the abilities they can cultivate are useless. In this way, it will be more acceptable to readers. There is no need to change any of the previous chapters. The system upgrades and updates are directly arranged in the following chapters to show the abilities that can be developed in the villain, allowing the protagonist to make free choices.

The plot is too blunt

New book and new author, I'll go take a look. If there is no reply from me to this comment, it means you can still read it and you can enter my bookshelf. If you reply, then you can imagine.