Zhutian: the Ancestral Dragon from Qingyu Nian

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After three pictures, I couldn't understand it at all. I wrote whatever I thought of, a hammer here and a stick here and there, but the preface and the follower didn't match.

No, the reason The three golden cards are poisonous Lory behind is so annoying

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An invincible man was praised by a few little girls. It feels like the next step is to work hard for them as a licking dog. Just call grandpa a few times and do something for them.

Today I came across an author who said not to use flashbacks 🙂🙂😰😰. He said that if you think you understand it, it's because you are the author. To the reader, it's just a mess! Damn it, I got to the point all of a sudden, let me change the previous content!

Why is it so messy?

I feel that if the protagonist is invincible, he must be in need of love. He could either recognize a sister, a daughter, or a mother. Grandparents may also be recognized It feels like the protagonist is raising a pet. Why not get a biological one? It's a bit fake.

When it's time to celebrate, shouldn't we go to the temple, take a spaceship, and go directly to Chaotian Continent? Go directly to cultivating immortals, and later directly cultivate to gods

It's good, it's okay, but if you set a goal and bang your hammer here and there, many people won't understand it, and even those who understand it won't understand it in the end, because the protagonist doesn't seem to have a real goal. If you want to become an immortal, work so hard to become an immortal, don't do it. It's so confusing that you don't even know what the real goal is. Some people can understand it, but most of them can't understand it. Besides, a novel is meant to happily pass the time. You've made it look like fate. Who wants to read it? It's better to give up and change the book.

Luanluanluan, commonly known as Xia Ji Basha

After reading a few chapters, the more I read, the more I couldn't understand it. Then I skipped reading and I couldn't understand it even more. The whole story is a mess. Although it seems to be written about celebrating Yu Nian, there is no feeling at all. It is better to write an original world when writing Qing Yu Nian like this, or remove the existence of the protagonist at the beginning, let people in Qing Yu Nian's world realize the existence of ancient civilizations, and then let the original protagonist of Qing Yu Nian dig into the past history. Finally, when the plot of Qing Yu Nian is about to end, the protagonist comes out to show off, and then ascends to other worlds (the heavens)

The subject matter is okay, but the author is not skilled in writing novels.

The subject matter is good, but the heart is too big and the strength is not enough.

The three golden pictures are not good, and there is no point in reading the rest. I insist on reading Chapter 7 which is a piece of shit.