Rebirth 09: I Am Such an Affectionate Boy

Why does this protagonist have a harem worthy of his wife? Is he worthy?

The single heroine is great. Pure love god of war

I would like to ask if it is a single heroine. If not, what is the meaning of writing the first chapter like that? If so, what is the meaning of writing so many Lin characters later?

The contract has been signed. Dear friends, you can read it if you are interested.

The first chapter is written like this, is it a harem? What qualifications does this protagonist have? Just because he was reborn?

It's better to have more female protagonists. Once the framework is set, don't change it casually, otherwise it will be easy for both parties to be unhappy.

I feel like a guinea pig being used by a relative of mine to practice acupuncture. Yesterday my feet were so painful and numb when I put them back on, and they may be the same today. Chapter 2 It feels like it takes one or two o'clock to heal. I'm sorry.

Brothers who are following me, please tell me if there are multiple female protagonists.

Already passed the internal investment and signed the contract within two days.

His wife loved him so deeply in his previous life, and she loved him so much in this life as well. Doesn't the hero feel any guilt at all? Why does he have a harem? Why? It was really not worth it for Li Yalan to rush there, so I fed the dog with all my heart. Who else, Liu Yiyi, had never met each other in the previous life, but could have an affair in this life? They were just writing novels. In reality, no matter how good-tempered Li was, he would be kicked. If I don't say it well, it's my fault. I prejudged it based on the first chapter.

The first few chapters are of high quality. The writing style of the short story is full of emotions, but when it is stretched out, the plot material has highs and lows, and I feel that it cannot be controlled by the long story, and the structure is not stable. As a new author, I think this book needs a lot of polish.

It feels weird, it takes a lot of effort to read, and the time and place are not clearly explained.

It's an old work. It's the first time I've seen it. Chapter 1 doesn't change and there are more girls. The framework is off topic. The writing is really bad. There are a lot of people to wash it for you. Why don't you read more? Look at this lousy book.

How many chapters does it take to confirm the relationship? The male protagonist never advances, they only kiss once, and they still play simple childish tricks.

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Stepping on the floor

Let me rest for two minutes. My bones are numb. It hurts so much.

To be honest, too many typos affect the viewing experience

Very warm, very sweet, faster