Rebirth Begins with Liberal Arts Classes

1. This novel belongs to the category of urban rebirth. The genre is the same as "I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn" which was very popular in the past few years. However, the later novel really made this genre popular, and this article can also be seen as following, such as the character settings of the two heroines. But! This article has very good innovations. For example, the setting of the red cinnabar art student is very interesting, and there is also the appearance of Ms. Chen who led the protagonist to pass three exams in his previous life. I have read that in many novels of the same genre, if a character appears in this kind of setting, he will usually receive a box lunch in three chapters, but this novel does not. Although this character is very annoying, it means that the author has succeeded in shaping this character, and her constant presence is the real campus life. However, the writing and ink must be gradually reduced. If the writing is strong enough, the direction of this character can be discussed. (There are many more, so I won't go into details here) 2. The plot is very smooth. Although some settings are unreasonable, they are irrelevant. For example: Regarding the dividend issue of the brother surnamed Gao, the protagonist does not want a penny. What does this mean? It goes without saying that although the author later provided a certain explanation through Gao's inner thoughts, it was very feeble. In addition, I think the male protagonist's character is very likable, especially the climax of the last chapter where the sports meeting takes up the track, which reminds me of the plot of the misguided "Heavenly Map" (here I mean the plot settings are very sophisticated) 3. The author's depiction of the campus plot is extremely realistic, such as the cliques of sports students, the still existence of Miss Chen, etc., Which makes me look forward to the subsequent plot development. In addition, the author needs to listen to the opinions of readers, because I am also creating, but mainly in literary journals. Therefore, one thing is that the author often does not know how his articles are perceived by people. Of course, it may also be because we have to read a short story of several thousand words word for word hundreds of times. But putting this aside, one of the characteristics of online literature is its timeliness. Once traditional literature is published, it cannot be withdrawn, so readers' opinions are lagging behind. But in online novels, you can immediately check the market situation and make changes to the plot direction. However, readers' opinions must be weighed. For example, the campus plot of this article is very smooth and delicate, but when it comes to starting a business, there are some minor problems. Literature has never been about learning from each other's strengths and complementing each other's weaknesses, or the barrel theory. Rather, it is about exploiting strengths and avoiding weaknesses. Of course, this doesn't mean I won't practice, but the author currently doesn't have the cost of trial and error. This book has already improved, so it needs to be implemented steadily and safely. A major feature of online literature compared to traditional literature is that plot is king. I hope the author can think of the plot cleverly and lay it out reasonably. Finally, I wish your work a great sale! The two accompanying pictures I saw on Douyin fit the image of the two heroines very well 🌹

This kind of book is about romance but not procreation. The author doesn't dare to design such a real conflict plot. He can only write some extremely boring plots or simply poison you (a good brother has an ambiguous partner with a rotten crotch, a playmate's business is in trouble). You can just sit down with the Leshan Giant Buddha. There is endless writing about a bullshit sports event. Do hundreds of thousands of people really like to watch the protagonist pretend to be the lowest level? The only way out is to fast forward. There is not so much bullshit time and bullshit in high school. But looking at the overall framework, writing 800,000 words for the college entrance examination is not bad. It is not interesting, so abandon it.

Is anyone else watching? The website short has been delayed for a long time, and I don't want to write anymore.

Surprisingly good, come on, Xia Hejiang wrote it very well, but the so-called high-IQ control Green Tea Chen is really bad. After using the male protagonist to improve his grades and then getting rid of him without any use, but seeing that the male protagonist turns out to be gold, he abandons another male partner who played with her before to pursue the male protagonist. It's disgusting, don't be the female protagonist! She has so many scenes that I have to complain! 😓

Author, can you please stop writing about smoking? You started smoking when you were 16 years old. What do you mean? It's normal to not be able to smoke and quit smoking before you are reborn. It's a bad thing to smoke after you are reborn. People want to quit smoking now and there is no way. So don't write about smoking. I'm still reading the rest.

Today, some book friends made comments, saying that the writing was too watery, and that the emotions between men and women on campus were described too much, and it was very ink-stained. First of all, I would like to thank this friend for his support. Take this opportunity to explain. The classification of this book is Youth Campus, which is mainly an emotional description of the age when love begins. There are entrepreneurship and family conflicts, but not too many. Without him, due to the author's limited knowledge, he really can't think of a more exciting business war. The section about selling schoolbags at the beginning was a barely reasonable first pot of gold that I came up with after checking a lot of information and thinking about it for a long time. A spoiler here, Jiang Yao is the first heroine. There may be more details in the description at the beginning, mainly to establish the character. Recently I am writing an introduction to the beginning of the second year of high school. I have written a lot of pen and ink. I wrote more than 10,000 words just for the day of registration. The purpose is the same, and I also want to establish several main characters. At the same time, the daily routine of the school is displayed for easy substitution. The subsequent plot will definitely not be so detailed. Thank you for your support.

From the beginning of Chen Yuxuan's introduction, this character is a deeply hated character. It is either a pretense and a slap in the face, or it is decisively cut off and not mentioned in the future. Unexpectedly, there will be a lot of space and ambiguity later. It's almost as if it's not the first time you've explicitly written about a female protagonist. You can't clean it up. How can your book be so popular?

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How about you rush into the street? The main idea may not be explained clearly before it is put on the shelves. Chen Yuxuan has more scenes than both girls, so why should she continue to be a green turtle? Also, if you want to write about maturity after rebirth, avoid those mindless plots where your protagonist will look like an adult at one moment and then look like a high school student at the other. If you don't pounce, who will pounce? And it's too bland, right?

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The character Chen Yuxuan is written in such a rubbish manner, and she keeps writing it, and even has an affair with a man. I don't know what you think, do you like this kind of green tea bitch? The male protagonist is also like a dog and can't dodge. He doesn't act like a scumbag when writing about a scumbag. Chen has more scenes than the two so-called female protagonists.

To be honest, starting a business in high school is too unreal for those born in the 1990s. From 6 a. M. To 10 p. M., There is no time. Even if I finish my college entrance examination and then start a business?

Chapter 32 is so disgusting, it lowers the character and character of the protagonist.

The most important thing in rebirth is to study and accumulate capital. Just after rebirth, just fall in love with those teenagers and talk nonsense. My mental age cannot bear that feeling!

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You have to persevere, it's really not easy to write in your own style, especially when you have two girls with different personalities, status and families in your high school syllabus. Goodbye if you can't control it well. High school study seems to be easy to write, but in fact it is not. Especially since you are really two female classmates, why is it that because high school is a closed space compared to college, it doesn't work no matter how much you do, especially if you want to help with business and write it, how can you have so much time? If you can calmly tolerate it and keep the two girls in balance without causing too much harm, it is already very good to quickly jump into college. What's more, what I'm writing about now is that I've just been separated into classes in my second year of high school. So how many chapters are you going to use to end your sophomore year of high school? Do you want 100 sheets? Doesn't that mean there isn't much space to add? The world of university allows a person to fully utilize his or her own strengths and gain a foothold in business. Two girls are definitely not in the same school, which is more conducive to development. It's better to write the first few chapters of Yuanmeng High School when you reiterated it. In order to learn how to do it, it has become more and more scattered and the length is a bit too broad. Study the above, just a few sentences will explain it. Overall, I can still read it now, and I hope it is carefully designed. If you really want to write about high school, the plot should be arranged in a more reasonable way. We should write about Jiang's perseverance in learning. Classmate Xia, you can control it yourself.

It's better not to kill this character directly. When a bit of reality is brought into the fantasy, it is still very good. Other female protagonists are unattainable and distant. On the contrary, this kind of female supporting role is very suitable for the mistress. And it is at a height that is easy to reach, unlike the heroine who is completely immersed in fantasy.

Well done, there can be so many plots in which a hero saves a beauty, but the author chose the one with the most barrages. Shen Tama refused to answer several calls for help from the heroine because of anger. Bye bye sand sculpture