After We Broke Up, My Ex Asked Me to Attack Her

The author's writing is so good that it masks other problems. But I think these problems still affect the look and feel of this book. I think the most serious issue is the conflict in the plot. For example, in the author's own version of Bai Xuege, Touma and Yukina went through numerous open and secret fights, and finally broke out in front of each other at the airport; another example is mygo in the author's material, Su Shi was entangled, Xiangzi refused cruelly, the two tortured each other for a long time, the conflict continued to escalate, and the final explosion was when they knelt down in a shocking way. But in my personal impression, the plots written by the author so far, such as the milk pouring incident, the roommate incident, the ghost encounter incident, and even the equipment incident now, are all conflicts that break out immediately. The moment when the conflict emerges is the most intense moment of the conflict. The most intense plot is reserved for the beginning, and the rest is to see how the male protagonist solves it step by step. It does not give people (at least to me) a feeling of escalating conflicts. It may also be related to the direction pursued by the author. Indeed, the article has a very comfortable, real and detailed feeling to read. But I personally prefer those with more intense conflicts, because the bland plot is less memorable. The introduction said that it is girl-oriented and twisted, but after reading it in one go, the most important part is that the ex-girlfriend is still in love? ! Did you ask other female protagonists or male protagonists paired with female protagonists what they did that was very gravitas and stomach-ache? There seemed to be none. When people start mygo, they directly ask if they can form a band for life () Of course, the writing of this book is really good, I will continue to read it, and I hope the author's writing will get better and better.

First of all, let me talk about the conclusion. I think the readers of this book are attracted by the distortion in the first half. The reason why the performance of this book has been declining is because the latter part betrays the tone set in the previous part, thus failing to please the readers who have been screened by the previous part. Then, there is my complaint. The most uncomfortable thing about this book is that after the plot twists to a certain extent, the author ignores the force of logic in order to allow the plot to continue as envisioned! The most obvious one is the turning point where the two female characters and the male protagonist become a family. The knots twisted in the front are so obvious. I was still looking forward to cutting them off or untying them, but in the end I ignored them. I can ignore some small problems that defy logic by using the "self-hypnosis" skill developed through years of reading novels, but this one is too obvious. For novels that rely on interpersonal relationships as the highlight, the most important thing is that the characters are rich and deep, so that readers can feel the vitality of the characters and even empathize with them. Empathy can twist the distortion in the work into the readers' hearts. This is the reason why the distortion work can make people feel emotional. Combined with this point of view, the consequences of ignoring logic and forcibly skipping the plot are the readers' incomprehension of the character's behavior and psychology, "Why do you think like this? It shouldn't be like this according to your personality", "How can you ignore the past like this? What does the paranoia and madness in front of you mean?". Twisting into a knot requires energy, and resolving and ending the knot naturally requires corresponding energy. In the novel, a lot of effort was put into twisting it into a knot, but it was later gently resolved, but what about the knot in the reader's heart? What about the knot in the reader's heart that is twisted together by empathy with the work? Next, let's talk about the ending. Pure love is good, but unfortunately, pure love is still too easy to achieve. Compared with the twisted first part, it is simply an understatement. The previous plot has created many obstacles for pure love, and the various twisted heroines are all difficulties that pure love has to overcome. If these difficulties can be overcome through all obstacles, pure love will naturally become very valuable and gratifying. If pure love is achieved first and then the difficulties are solved together, that would also be a very good work. Both of these methods will make pure love purer. But unfortunately, I feel that the male protagonist uses Aicheng as a safe haven, and emotionally escapes from other female protagonists. Aicheng's long-term secret love is too tepid, and there is not much strong emotional expression. It often gives readers the feeling that the male protagonist likes others and she can accept it. These lead to the fact that this pure love may not be pure, giving readers a feeling that they may not always be together in the future. The fragility of the pure love between the male and female protagonists, and the conflicting and contradictory behavior of the powerful female protagonist, which can be said to be a bit cannibalistic, give this ending a feeling of decay. I didn't have many regrets after reading it, because in my opinion, many characters died during the development of the plot, and there were only corpses pushing the gears of the plot under the control of the author. After writing my thoughts, all the impulses caused by finishing the book have been vented. I am too lazy to read my thoughts again, so, just like this, for reference only

It's over, we are all going to die at the hands of this woman!

The amnesia section was really neither good nor sweet enough. It was not twisty enough or sweet enough. It went against my original intention of reading this book and made me feel awkward. The three female protagonists, each of them set a sharp price one by one. Generally speaking, the interest collected is not enough. (With spoilers) Suyo, a character who grew up in a honey pot, has never experienced hardship. She enjoyed a sweet relationship with the male protagonist for free as the target of an affair for a year. When it was revealed, the male protagonist took all the blame. The biggest pain she ever suffered was a slap from Hina. Her kindness was not seen at all, so can the bad woman be punished more vigorously? Hina, the ex-girlfriend, was positioned as a villain in the early stage. No, bro, you have laid out the perspective of a villain for so long, but the result is that the crematorium is worse than Chiyo. And after learning the truth, it is basically all male roles. The attack is so heavy, so you suffer this little? So the stupid woman should be punished harder? Chiyo, your current girlfriend? Clown! The ultimate super invincible unrequited love for the big enemy, the main point of view is the most, the emotional foreshadowing is also the most, but the emotional experience is the worst. Soyo and Hina's Yakuchiyo all helped to eat it. How dare you play a direct attack after being sent from the sky? It hurts, it hurts too much, there is nothing I can do about it, Chiyo only needs to fall in love, but Soshi Hina has a lot to think about. Hua Lian, invincible, silly and sweet positioning, true heroine's treatment of her own daughter, what keeps losing, obviously only small wins, big wins, born to be invincible, do best friends understand? Do you understand the person you feel most at ease with? It is really impeccable if you are not involved in the game. Although you cry all the time, the quality of Fatang is always online. But a few words, Hua Lian from a reader's perspective (just me), has a clear sense of stupidity. I wonder if anyone has the same opinion. It seems a bit physically uncomfortable. You clearly told me to shut up about the photos, but then you turned around and took the whole thing into account, muddying the waters🐟? Is this a hidden boss or an imperial appointment? Using the excuse of love and kindness, isn't it just a deliberate act? So she's good, but she basically means good but does bad things, then? The male protagonist is the worst in the whole story. He is an iron tool man. He is a tool man who has no shining point and exists as the center of distortion. The emptiness, entanglement and pain can be seen, but his personal image is 0 and his personality is gentle. Isn't he a scumbag? The highlight of the incident, isn't that what you should do as a cheat? The female protagonists dare to love or hate, which is the meaning of the male protagonist. . . That is proof that as a heroine, she dares to love and hate. It's too miserable. If you ask me to say it's scumbag, it's scumbag. If you fast forward to scumbag, it'll be over. At least I can add some highlights to the male protagonist to make up for it. It's definitely not good-looking to use a transition like amnesia.

We already have the girl opera, so please bring it to MyGO as soon as possible (Hi)

The relationship between the male protagonist's elders and the three women is simply a mess. It makes me uncomfortable to see it. Facing the older generation and the three women, staying away is also a highlight. You can't come back to watch the plot develop. I suggest that after the Shura field, let the male protagonist seal his heart with cement, let the three women chase their husbands, and then run to redeem Komori Ai. I have been watching it, and what I am looking forward to most is how to redeem Komori Ai. Komori ❤️ feels that he has the qualifications to become a soul mate (Oshino Shinobu). If in the later stage, Ai Komori and Shen Yin hide together or there is a heroine who has nothing to do with her and is not so naughty, it will be so cool to make the three girls regret it for the rest of their lives.

The author is so happy, he really knotted your wings.

Damn it, I have fully subscribed to the large version, and I gave you so many monthly passes before. I said you didn't write the ending of the two sentences well, so I deleted the review and banned you. I can understand that a new author's writing is not good, but I'm not attacking you personally. I think it's a bit heartless to delete your comments and ban you just because you said you had a bad ending. I have to open a small account to criticize. Some people say that choosing Hua Lian for the ending is natural, but I don't think so. How is it natural? Isn't it unnatural to confess to someone's boyfriend in front of someone else's girlfriend? Does anyone think this is normal? Isn't this a must-eat behavior? Kagura Hikaru and Hana Lian had always maintained a good relationship, but after the last confession, they suddenly realized, it turns out that I like you. We talked about Hina, Chiyo, and Sose, we kissed and Wu Tao did it, but in the end, what he liked the most was his good friend Ka Lian who had lunch together on the rooftop? What's your motivation? Riding the tram together for three years? The first love was not you, the one who forced it was not you, the one who rescued the twisted person was not you. But in the end, you were the winner. Should you win? Could it be that Hua Lian wins and bans me because Hua Lian is the author Bai Yueguang? Then I will accept it if you delete and ban me again. A 500-word comment for the large size and a 300-word comment for the small size. I have written a short essay for you.

It's not the woman written in your profile, why did Sibi kiss you? Don't really fuck Lily, right?

The best clown of the year—Kiri Hina🤭

Most of the time, super powers and Riqing are in conflict. You don't have to use super powers. It's quite awkward to be emotionally restrained by a few little girls. This cult should also have a turning point. The male protagonist's personality should have changed from this time on, and he can't always be so passive. If this continues, I'm afraid Chiyo will let him hurt others again, and it will become an endless harem. Others said that the male protagonist's love for me is good. After all, he still owes Chiyo a love. It is a good breakthrough for the three women to pursue their husbands for a while. Next, the male protagonist can put on a mask and be hard on the three women. Stop being ambiguous. Use this period to push Komori's love line, and then find an opportunity to reconcile. But the third-year one is difficult to deal with. After all, there is still one year before he will go to college, so he must either accept it or push it away quickly.

The soul is back... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul is back... Driving the long whip and riding the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Climbing over the mountains and singing... Returning... The soul is back... 𓀋 𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sing high and triumphant... We share the same robe with all our glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back.... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌​

It's so good, I had a withdrawal reaction after watching it in one sitting

I almost fainted when I saw the Lily episode 💀

I had already been born in Hina before, but I didn't expect that this life would still be a birth within the realm of birth. In the end, the male protagonist was still an accomplice, helping others to harm him, and all of them turned into sows and boars😋😋😋

It feels like Matsuoka's only god's vest. They both like to write literature about their predecessors, weak male protagonists, and the language style is also similar. The time of the break is also synchronized with the time of opening this book.

Guilt, betrayal, and love always have such a unique beauty, which is very easy to get addicted to. The author writes so well, both in basic skills and in controlling the direction of the story.

After I lost my memory, I became less good at writing. . . Just playing house.

After reading it, I felt that it was a forced ending by the author. At the end, I could not feel the love of the hero for Aicheng. It made me feel that Aicheng was regarded as a safe haven. Although the author said that the hero is passive, no matter how passive it is, it should make people feel the real love of the hero My evaluation is: the early stage is very beautiful and attractive, but the later stage is too delayed and turned into a mess.

I feel that the last few chapters are very strange. The male protagonist didn't need to know more about the Happiness Cult from the beginning. Even if he knew that this sect was related to Komori Ai, she had no special relationship with the male protagonist. The male protagonist is not a superman. His superpower is just mind reading. If he is in danger, he is no different from ordinary people. Why should the male protagonist risk his life to go to a place that he knows is a cult? Adventure, and I don't even know the details of the cult. Normal people would not be so determined to play Mission: Impossible when faced with this situation. Moreover, this part of the plot has absolutely no connection with the previous plot of breaking up with Ayanokouji Chiyo. It is as blunt as if the author ran out of inspiration after writing about the breakup and then suddenly discovered that there was a pitfall for Komori's love before he used it, so he slapped his head and added a plot for Komori's love.

Maybe I don't have enough experience. Apart from a few books by Liao Liao, I can't find any other novels on the Internet that are as interesting as the male protagonist's three views. Can anyone recommend it? I'll start by "throwing some light" The first book "My Girlfriend is from the Future" The second book "Reignited" is half a book. It was written a long time ago and my memory is not very clear, but I just can't forget it. It's a small selfish thing, don't complain if it doesn't appeal to your stomach. The third book... Well, it's gone Please give me a recommendation from a book friend with great wisdom

It only takes about a week to update a chapter. Actually, I can wait. I stocked up on dozens of chapters at a time. I have been stocking up for several months. Today, I suddenly saw the end. It turned out to be stock trading. It was uncomfortable. I always thought it was a harem. It was uncomfortable. I just didn't have to read it. I guess I stopped the loss in time.

It has to be this feeling of tearing high school students apart into a world war 🌹

Donating pigeons😯 I just made a full reservation and voted for the whole month🥲 Don't give me a bad job😫 I want to continue to twist.

I suffered from you. The ending was not impactful enough. The single ending of Aicheng was acceptable. However, the previous female protagonists were not explosive enough. My emotions were very sudden. I should have exploded before Kagura fell into coma, but in the end, I went back to my hometown to practice my abilities after a sudden change. . . .

Are you really not writing anymore? 😭

Are you a eunuch?😰