Immortal Robe

I clicked on this book because of the Xian Hu in the tag. I read Xian Hu back and forth several times. It's really hard to find novels with a bit of a fairy tale in the future. I saw the label of this book and came in to read it. I read more than ten chapters. At present, it seems to be very unsatisfactory. How can a master of Yuanshen and a magic weapon be surrounded and suppressed by a group of so-called Taoist masters who practice Gang? And then the Lian Gang who has a magic weapon is hunted down by the ordinary Lian Gang realm of the side sect without a magic weapon? I don't understand what the setting is! It gives the impression that the soul is useless and the magic weapon is useless! It's completely different from the fairy gourd! At least for now, it seems that the setting is very immature. Unlike the Immortal Gourd, which is a very mature system, the talisman, magic weapon, magic weapon, and innate magic weapon are so mature! I hope the author can improve it in the future, so I won't say more!

What the hell is this about? Another guy who licks his head, a bunch of mentally retarded supporting characters, who can't walk when they see a woman. Don't worry about your own life. Even if your parents die, your whole family will be saved. Are you worthy of Xian Gourd Liu? Go home and farm

Obviously the writing skills and plot arrangement are very good, but why do you have to make money by cramming in words?

Monthly tickets, best-sellers, and you are not on the top three new book lists. This is a big problem. Logically speaking, the Xianxia stream you follow should have a very large market. Even crappy books like "The Immortal Cage" can be on the list. I read less than 20 chapters. I saw that guy named Bingyun came to ask for help. The protagonist finally helped her to the end and stopped reading. His actual behavior was not pleasing. In the end, he defended himself. No, big Brother, what age are we in? The beginning of a book is about a female cultivator who is in trouble, and the protagonist rescues her, travels with her beauty, and explores a secret place together. This is purely to the point of death. The introduction of the protagonist in your article makes it very clear. She is a casual cultivator who cannot be more stable. She pursues the path of immortality wholeheartedly and never aims too high or has any wrong ideas. How come there is such a plot of traveling with a beauty? ? ? The protagonist you introduced at the beginning is a mess in terms of temperament, thinking, and handling of things.

Finally, the eunuch, this guy is always changing his vest to get bad money, but there are still people who keep being fooled, and he has changed several books, and none of them can be completed. They just earn a few hundred thousand words to earn some money, and then change the vest to write a new one. This kind of people write books without an outline, and just rely on a little inspiration to start the book. If they can't finish it, the eunuch will change the vest!

It's too ink-filled. The book is a good book, but I'm too impetuous to read it. I struggled for more than ten chapters before I got the golden finger. It took me a long time to find a sect. I wanted to read the imaginative Taoism and magic weapons in it. In fact, I want to see new ideas when reading fairy gourd novels. I don't really want to see how difficult it is to practice casual cultivation.

This author likes eunuchs so much. When he sees the Sichuan IP, he knows that he is the author of Xian Chan and Emei. Let's fatten or die.

It's over, this style of writing, if I predict that it will be on the shelf, I will have the eunuch run away to change his vest 🙂🙂 I have seen several books of this kind. Because there is no fast food and slow fire, it will not be able to hold up after a few chapters 😒😒

In fact, the most enjoyable part of the Xian Gourd style is the Taibai Sword Sect, which can dominate the world with one sword. When you shine the magic weapon, you will be called Qiao Tianwang, and the good fortune will be called Zhong Shenxiu. I hope this Xian Gourd style can write about the domineering and domineering fighting style of the Taibai Sword Sect that was left blank at the beginning.

It's too slow and it's too watery after it's put on the shelves. The beginning is to open the meridians (level 2), and a wave of great success in Chapter 11 (level 3),,, water, water. Carrying the magic weapon, this Lotus Platform (Level 8), and the Nascent Soul Pressure (Level 9) are similar to the mortals' foundation-building to destroy the Nascent Soul, and they are invincible everywhere across three or four realms. I started to enter the orifice in the thirty or forty chapters. As of now, it is almost 200 chapters. I have just finished entering the orifice through water (level 4), and then entered the mysterious light (level 5). Later, there are 7 or 8 major realms before the soul. Is this a preparation to write until death?

Generally an interesting book, but the author is first-rate. This author is most likely a eunuch who reopened his account.

Isn't the protagonist a time traveler? Why does he look like an uneducated native? The protagonist doesn't know about things that even primary school students should know. Why is he deliberately suppressing the protagonist or forgetting to write about the character?

At present, it feels like the plot is quite ordinary. It sounds traditional at best, but cliché at worst. As the plot progresses, the protagonist is trapped in a swamp, and it is difficult to escape for a moment. One link leads to another, and then there is another point where he can't help himself. He is disgusted by the righteous path, and does not buy it by the devil. He is trapped in a crack, and he cannot escape until the finale.

It's a bit humorous. After the part about visiting the mountain gate, I thought the plot would get better, but I didn't expect that part to be the highlight of the whole book. I don't know if each chapter has 500 words of informative content after it is released. The whole article is meaningless, has no evidence, and has no literary explanation. If you can really quote some Taoist classics and explain various matters of spiritual practice in a convincing manner, it will be a disaster. He would run away after playing around with money, and his food would look so ugly that it was unappetizing.

If you want to do it, hurry up. If you want to put it off for half a year, don't write if you don't want to. It's so boring.

This style of writing without a main line, just writing whatever comes to mind, reminds me of a hateful Lai Ge Bao.

I think the writing is quite good. I don't know if it's because of my shallow knowledge or my different interests. I always feel that the writing here lacks a bit of fairy spirit. The dialogue between the characters is more of a Jianghu temperament, which is a bit unable to reflect the spirit of those immortals, such as Yuan Laomo. However, he is a big boss of the devil, so he should reach for the stars with one hand. There is no one like me in the world. His aura is as sharp as a rainbow and his devilish aura is overwhelming. When everyone sees him, they bow their heads and dare not speak. In the eyes of the old devil, he knows every move he makes and can kill him with a snap of his fingers. And the Yuanjiang Sword Sect should be standing in this land like a giant of immortality. Every move in the territory is under his eyes. Yuan Laomo and everything else are all taken into account, like a skylark in the palm of his hand. I am just expressing my own opinions, and I hope the author will get better and better. I can also see that the author is still very deep and powerful. This is just my opinion, I hope it helps.

What tricks do you set for the protagonist, such as what kind of magic formula, magic weapon, or panacea you get? For things like this, you can't concentrate too much, you have to do it in sections, one at a time. Every time the protagonist obtains some new skills, you need to have a digestion process so that the protagonist can make full use of these skills, enhance combat effectiveness, defeat enough enemies, and advance the plot. This is how you make the best use of everything. If you get too much and too densely from the previous one, you haven't even digested the last one and you haven't put it to enough use yet. You will get a new one. Writing this way would be very wasteful and aesthetically exhausting. The previous link has been digested, used enough, and promoted enough plots, and it is almost impossible to defeat the new enemies. You then arrange for the protagonist to encounter new enemies. Writing the plot this way will be much smoother. In a word, obtaining treasures, magical powers, and elixirs is not the key. It is not cheating for the sake of cheating. Cheating and enhancing the protagonist's combat effectiveness are to show and promote the plot, not just for the cheating itself. You cannot put the cart before the horse.

The author's writing is quite real. The protagonist's IQ is not high, his emotional intelligence is not high, and he is not a powerful person. He is average or even average in all aspects. Isn't it normal to just follow the crowd most of the time? This is an ancient fairy tale novel about chance. Don't ask for too much.

I think any of his previous books are much better than this one, but this one has persisted for so long, and the previous one, All Eunuchs

I guess you are a fairy toad trumpet. It's good, don't collapse. I feel like you've written very well, but it doesn't exceed 500,000 words.

This book is very good among Shushanliu novels

It's best to have a name that fits the world of Xianxia, ​​just like the title.

Too much water, my head is big, I recommend a book called Immortal Industry, but the author seems to have a cervical vertebra problem, the update is also touching

Good books, good books, don't be a eunuch

Persistence is victory. The author has written chapter 500 and has a solid foundation for becoming a great god.

Order 50 chapters after release, if the author replies

Meeting such a shameless author

Come on, I haven't seen this for a long time.

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