Swallowing Starry Sky's Unconventional Upgrade

The author got the point wrong and kept writing about the power game, which caused a group of apprentices to get into trouble. The originality is okay. Fan readers all know the plot and realm behind it. Who wants to see a bunch of kids fighting over you? Even the original version of Luo Feng rose quickly and had no trace of ink at all.

Janet

Do fans of Devouring Starry Sky write about indigenous people?

After reading more than 200 chapters, I gave up. I got over the little bit of trouble at the beginning, but I just couldn't stand it anymore! Author, let me ask you, is it the Hunyuan unit that is the worst of the peak ethnic group in Yiqiu? And can the number of Chaos Monuments used as inheritance monuments be purchased with money? Are you kidding me? Still so cheap? And as immortals or world lords in the virtual universe, will they lack the currency of Hunyuan Units? Really, if you write in this urban style and write more details in this urban essay, your grades will be good! But it's really not okay to write about swallowing!

After being convinced, the good heroine chose to become a robot like Babata in order to accompany the hero all the time. The hero even agreed seriously and was poisoned to death.

Let his wife become an intelligent life. It sounds nice but he can't control it, but he puts the mark of his soul on it. The author can really write it. It's really weird to read.

Kill Li Yao and steal his aunt! ! ! Looking at the cover used by the author, I think everyone knows something, right? 😆😆😆.

In addition to the time stillness that is clearly mentioned in the original work, let me talk about the other two branches of the three branches of the law of time that I have seen in other fans. Some directly regard time acceleration and deceleration as two major branches. There is also a classification that combines acceleration and deceleration into a time variable speed, and adds another time disorder such as restraining time from standing still, which is more in line with the mutual restraint phenomenon of the three major branches of the original space. Some people slow down time and throw it into the stillness of time. If they are reduced to the extreme, time will still stand still. I haven't seen the others yet.

The author made a mistake. He had to write about aborigines. If he switched to a time traveler or a newly opened world view, the results would be much better than this. Judging from the framework, he could write an original book of at least a medium level... The biggest and biggest poisonous points are two: Although he is an aborigine, the time traveler can take advantage of everything. I can accurately guess that although I am a native, I know everything that a time traveler should know. If I can't find the logic, I will blame it all on Janet. She, the heroine, is definitely the incarnation of the author. Things that Giant Ax and the gangster can't easily understand are common sense here, and Janet has revealed the underlying knowledge many times. The second item is that the number of Chaos Monuments can be purchased with Hunyuan units? The original text has always said that each level is given once, except for the only exception where the bastard gave Luo Feng his Chaos Monument 20 times, not Jiuyu. Almost 20,000 yuan per time. I wrote a sword with 1,000 heavy treasure points on the back. This value can be exchanged for 500 billion times for the Chaos Monument. This kind of thing is just a piece of cake among most sages. As long as it can be exchanged a few times, the sages use it up every day, and the immortals cannot enter it, let alone the little Karami. Rongjun Uka, who has a big boss behind him, can be replaced, but he will never come out. Is it the turn of the little Karami to use him? There are too many small points, and they are basically minor designs. I suspect that the author wrote the article based on the detailed outline of the swallowing, and not according to the novel... Just list a few impressive ones: First: Luo Feng's arrangement seems too deliberate and rigid Second: There are too many dirty things, conspiracies, and decisions, and the cultivation article almost becomes a Machiavellian article Third: A team of all generals uses sniper rifles to kill the lord monster? The war general is not afraid of all kinds of conventional thermal weapons, and the god of war will not be beaten in the missile center, so it will be fine... Fourth: I rented an off-road vehicle when I went to City 003, and then the driver drove back there by himself. This driver is definitely a real boss, at least the god of war started... Fifth: He actually said that monsters rely on eating and Those who make progress through fighting, as mentioned later, are also practicing. Of course, they cannot practice skills like humans, but they also practice genetic energy like humans. They are all about improving life levels and achieving life transitions Sixth: The calculation of the force multiplier is always right and sometimes wrong Seventh: The Earth War Divine Works Helmet also requires mental power? Those three thousand war gods are more than three thousand spiritual masters? Eighth: How to solve the spacecraft cracking problem without Babata? Spaceship energy problem? Spaceship coordinates problem? Relying on Ruins No. 9 Is too far behind Ninth: At least twice, I wrote about relying on a kind of fruit to increase the power multiplier. How about relying on food to solve the research and development of spaceships? Rely on eating to solve the accumulation of study? Do you rely on eating to determine how smart you are? The force multiplier is the percentage of control over the body, which is a technical thing... Tenth: The law of time is about 70%, and there is a lot of space. The most important blood crystal is a hundred, a hundred. Luo Feng's ten are the black warriors. This is the most attractive to the gangsters. Recruiting a disciple to become a direct disciple, the protagonist is so awesome that it can even be said to have refreshed the three views of the Lord of the Universe. It depends on what happens after passing through the three levels of Tongtian Mountain. The alien race has more detailed information about the protagonist than our own... 11: The time-innate beast god is not dead? Do you want to take it back and make it your own beast? It is said that the eight innate beast gods were divided and eaten. Of course, they were not only eaten, but their whole bodies were filled with treasures. And he said he has sixth-level combat power? There are only three situations for sixth-level combat power: 1. True God; 2. The fifth-level Lord of the Universe holding the most powerful treasure; 3. The three ancestral gods speak and follow. There are only a few fifth-level universe masters in the universe, and they still integrate the secret method. The strongest universe masters are all fourth-level masters, including the eight acquired beast gods who have inherited the throne.

It's really rare for a fan of the Fantasy style to follow the laws of time. Others follow the laws of space. They are either warriors or spiritual masters. They are different.

If you write about indigenous people in fan fiction, uh, bye.

The fan fiction is written about indigenous people, and the key to the indigenous people is that they have a system. It's hilarious, and there's no sense of immersion at all.

Why do you keep hiding your identity as a spiritual master? What's the point? The protagonist has the strength of a god of war, but he is still too timid to reveal his identity as a spiritual master for fear of being assassinated. Especially since the protagonist is from an extreme martial arts school. As soon as your God of War strength was reported, the 19-year-old God of War, the genius among geniuses, the black god of dragon blood, became the invincible God of War. Even the congressmen did not dare to say that they would definitely kill you, let alone there were only a few congressmen in total. They would really treat you as a decoration to assassinate you. Now it looks like I have to go to the elite training camp again, and then use Janet Dragon Blood to go to the ruins to get the Black God suit. The problem is that aside from the psychic master, you can't ignore the value of the 19-year-old warrior. You can't hide the psychic master, then hide the warrior, just be an iron bastard, wait for Luo Feng to rise, and then leave the earth with Babata's spaceship.

Get rid of the natives and awaken your memory after becoming immortal! The title is: I only awaken my memory after becoming immortal, can Luo Feng let me go!

Finally he is no longer a eunuch. Don't know when it started? There are some articles stating that some male protagonists are 100% opposite-sex insulators! But in fact, a man without a woman will not become strong at all. Or in other words, no matter how strong a man becomes, it means nothing without a woman. No matter how strong he is, he is still a eunuch. He did everything he could to pass the trial. Just cut off all the heroines, what's the point of becoming stronger? No matter how fancy your article is, if it doesn't have an emotional thread, it's just a piece of shit.

If you are not a time traveler, what is there to write about a native? You, a native, have a system, but what about Luo Feng! When writing about aborigines, what should I do with the original script? There was no you in the original script, only Luo Feng. There is no logic at all. Writing about indigenous people is equivalent to going against the original work. In other words, if you are not a time traveler, nothing will happen to you, so you deserve to die. Only three people can leave the earth. Writing about indigenous people is better than writing a separate book about the world view.

Janet

I still can't figure out where the intention is to write about indigenous people in fan fiction.

Author, have you ever thought about this question? Nuo Lanshan has won a hundred consecutive victories at the cosmic level in the Giant Ax Arena. Will such a person have no field? Will it be stuck at the cosmic level and unable to break through? Also, Hong showed his domain when he first arrived at the Qianwu Dojo. Doesn't he, the Lord of the Horned Dragon, know the potential of the planetary level comprehension domain? This is at least a Realm Lord seed. And he doesn't know about the protagonist's apprenticeship with the core genius of Virtual Universe Company? For a possible immortal legacy, the protagonist and Hong, who has at least the potential to be a world lord, are turned against each other, especially when Hong is his disciple. I can only say 👍 👍

Author, are you selling your account and replacing someone else?

After the genius battle, I let myself go. There are many bugs that conflict with the original work. The four major ethnic groups occupy 70% of the territory. The Venerable class has a special extraterritorial battlefield. The giant ax reverses time and space. I don't know who created the earth. There are more than 10,000 universe masters in the original universe. The Hell clan was destroyed without the death of the true god, etc.

I don't know if you have noticed that the Xunfeng Sword Master next door basically has the same system.

I read Chapter 51 and then flipped through the table of contents. There are 434 chapters in total. Chapter 207 just finished the genius battle 😅😅😅

So why don't you open a clone? The true god didn't have a clone before and he was killed instantly.

"A boy from this world, a cruel dark corpse king appeared in the elf world. He sat on a luxurious toilet made of gold. He often robbed the elves on the way and asked them: Do you think I look like a human being? If the answer is yes, he will sit back on the toilet with satisfaction. If If you answer no, he will become furious and send out his minions to destroy everything. The beautiful elven world is suffering from a great crisis. Please sign a contract with us and become an invincible warrior to resist the Dark Corpse Emperor! " A cute blue bird-shaped elf in the subspace shouted. "I will give you love and tolerance!" A brown and green fat little elf said, blinking his mung bean eyes. "I will give you courage and strength!" A red elf with two horns on his head said, waving his cute little sword. "I will give you happiness and patience!" A purple elf said, swinging his crab hands and tentacles. "And I will give you wisdom and magic!" The cute blue bird-shaped elf stretched out his colorful wings and said. "Who do you want to choose for the contract?" "As a child, I can't tell, I want to try them one by one!" The bald boy said eagerly. As a result, the bald boy named Walkerma von Hindenstein gained unparalleled piety and power. His love was so strong that he claimed to be the spiritual descendant of the God-Emperor and a living saint. He even made up rumors that he was a descendant of the God-Emperor's illegitimate son... His courage was so strong that he would ride into the battlefield in a chariot, shouting spells while wielding a hammer to kill any dirty scum who dared to touch his luxurious carriage with dirty hands. His happiness is so simple. Apart from whipping himself every day, you don't know what he did to the statue of the God Emperor while hiding in his room... His wisdom is so outstanding. He reads ancient scrolls and scripture files in the Imperial Library every day, and from the treasure house of forbidden knowledge, he understands a great truth: justice will defeat evil, otherwise it will be defeated by evil. "After so many years, what is your choice?" The four elves asked in the dark. "Only children make choices, and I, the greatest gentleman in the empire, the invincible pastor, the light of civilization, the holy Archbishop Walkerma, want them all!" The bald middle-aged man stretched out his big hand and shook it tightly. As a result, his body turned into a skeleton, and he was forced to put on the Bone King's armor and the crown of witchcraft. He cut off his right hand and forcibly attached it to a bone melon. His body was repeatedly pierced inside and outside by the black tentacles ejected until it was completely wrapped. Became Nagash, the Corpse King. "What a greedy guy. I've run out of ideas. Let's find the next person to seduce." The four elves named Nurgle, Khorne, Slaanesh, and Tzeentch discussed this. "Young man from this world, a cruel dark corpse king has appeared in the elf world..." Before the cute blue bird-shaped elf finished speaking, the bard who was stopped said: "Lovely elf, do you think I look like a human being?" "Um... You do!" The bird-shaped elf seemed to have a strange association and replied tremblingly. "The answer is correct! Have you heard of Cathay? I have a long narrative poem of 600,000 words. Please give me some time and listen to my details."

The author writes well! I would like to recommend my own Devouring Fans. The ultimate understanding of swallowing the stars, please read the new book regularly. Thank you so much!

As soon as I saw the plot of recruiting the protagonist to be the servant of the family warrior, I was hooked.

"I have played with guns on the throne of Khorne, drank soup at the cauldron of Nurgle, shared spoils in the house of Tzeentch, and sold songs in front of Slaanesh's bed! This is me, the founder of the empire! The slayer of orcs! The resister of demons, the emperor of mankind, Sigmar!" Sigmar introduced himself to the banquet with his warhammer, and by the way told all the guests how bad he was. "Fellow prophets, who can tell me the future destiny of the human empire! Can it suppress all races and be glorious forever?" The muscular man asked arrogantly. The prophet of Ulric the White Wolf came out first and said: "I see that the future of the empire will be filled with bald priests. They have scriptures in one hand and hammers in the other. They chant the name of Sigmar and brutally surround and suppress Ulric believers. After the civil war, the empire was destroyed." "Heresy! As a devout believer in Ulric, I don't believe your sowing discord!" Sigma was furious and smashed the White Wolf Prophet's head with a hammer. The Great Necromancer stood up again and said: "I saw countless warriors fighting with muskets and giant swords. Soldiers were cut down, priests were bewitched, and the empire was destroyed. Only the world of undead and bones will last forever." "Bastard! Humans will never accept a dead world!" Sigma smashed the bones of the Necromancer with another hammer. The rat prophet took a step forward, and the green crystal ball in his hand projected a picture of the bliss of the world: humans and rats coexist harmoniously, and the future will be prosperous; they provoke wars and sell military disasters, but criticize normal trade; they eat chicken and shoot each other in American style, but they are called They love life; their hands are full of blood, but they claim that they are the victims; they party together on the island, but claim to be human role models who take care of Luo Li... "This future seems pretty good. How can we realize it?" The big golden man asked humbly. "We lie, we cheat, we steal, and we have a course to teach these. With such continuous exploration and progress, the glory of the human empire will surely be realized." "What a wonderful future, I really want to see it with my own eyes." Sigma sighed happily. "Yes, when the empire is about to be destroyed and the last emperor, Karl Franz, dies in battle, you can be resurrected in his body and experience it all for yourself."

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! Recommend a book that is decisive in killing, sharp and joyful. "Old Man in Time Travel Picks Up Rags and Survives by Making Bad Movies" is hilarious...

Western women on Earth in anime are all very distinctive and colorful. Oriental women give people a gloomy image, and look like maids when put together.