The Great Voyage Beginning with the Celestial Dragons

Laughing. Being a Celestial Dragon and being beaten by Garp 😅 The World Government dares to attack Zefa but not Garp?

I saw in the comment section that the protagonist was beaten by Garp as a Celestial Dragon, so I thought the author had changed it. When I looked over, I saw that the good guy was more vicious than I thought. As long as he wasn't beaten to death, Garp would be fine. That's great, you're watching Bandit King, right? With what kind of ability Garp has, how can he be called the "strongest lieutenant general"? You can fight the Celestial Dragons, why are you afraid of the protection and dispatch of the Celestial Dragons?

In a word, Robin's mother will eat the thunder, everyone bids farewell.

Nt, I was knocked unconscious by Garp in the navy, and the Five Old Stars didn't say anything afterward. Even if it was the original work, Garp was just talking nonsense, how could he dare to fight the Celestial Dragons?

It's enough for the Celestial Dragons to be like him. No matter how rubbish the Celestial Dragons are, Garp wouldn't dare to touch them. If Garp dared to fight the Celestial Dragons, he would have gone to Impel Down City to rob the prison sooner rather than watch Ace being executed.

The minefield of fan fiction is self-created heroines and fruits. In the early days, there were naive heroines who created their own heroines in CP streams, but they didn't have the drawing skills to draw people. In addition, there was a sense of unfamiliarity and fragmentation. People didn't care about the self-created fruits for the supporting characters. But there were powerful protagonists such as the Golden Crow and Phoenix that were not available in the original works. There is a great sense of resistance, stare, cause and effect, luck, door, surgery, swallow, fit, mirror, so many perverts use their imagination to develop more exciting, self-created designs are not interesting, for example, I designed a fruit of desire, which can evoke the seven deadly sins and control others. This is not interesting.

The identity of a Celestial Dragon is actually a failure. To be honest, if you don't know how to write about a female protagonist, don't write it. Just make it awkward. It's outrageous to treat the heroine like a Celestial Dragon even though you are already a Celestial Dragon.

Shennong couldn't bear it any longer. The navy's military expenditure was only 50 billion Baileys a year? Bailey and the Japanese yen are in the same proportion. Japan has a military expenditure of 6.82 Trillion yen a year. How can your navy's 50 billion be enough? Even if we calculate the salary of a soldier based on an annual salary of 1 million yen (50,000 RMB), 100,000 soldiers would cost 100 billion, not to mention that the navy has more than 100,000, and there are also expenses such as officers, equipment, maintenance, food and accommodation, etc. The economic accounts are in a mess. The characters also have problems. They don't look like Dragon People at all. Instead, they look like a loser who won the lottery and became a nouveau riche loser. The whole is the emperor's golden hoe

What kind of people read what kind of books. How could a person who received Chinese education from an early age turn into a bottomless Tianlong as soon as he traveled through time? Even if you lay the groundwork and say that you were corrupted by power or that you were a bad person before time travel, I can accept it, but this writing is really based on the defense, and it made me dig my toes at the beginning. That's it. Leaving words means that I have seen a little bit. Don't be arrogant, if the front is like this, you can't expect to see the back.

A Draco was violently beaten by Garp in the navy headquarters? After seeing so many Dracos, you, the lowest, don't really think that Garp is invincible, right? The World Government is not a bastard. Although the protagonist is nothing now, is he the one who can fight whenever he wants? Where to put the face? There are also emotional scenes that are also speechless. It's enough that the protagonist meets the person he likes when he goes out, tsk tsk tsk

A diaosi travels through Tianlong and is still a diaosi After all, the articles written by diaosi are only suitable for diaosi to read.

In fact, I think Garp is a very measured and tolerant person. He has established a character that is proud but always loyal to the navy and will not betray. This may cause the Tianlong people to be very unhappy, but they think Garp can be used. But apart from using his words, Garp has never actively attacked the Celestial Dragons, right? Personally, I don't think he will take action, especially since this matter is inherently unreasonable. He is still very rational in the face of the overall situation. Before he had the ability to move to the world government, he was more tolerant. Even Ace was killed in front of him and was easily suppressed by Sengoku. How could he just jump out after Sauro was killed? So I feel that this plot is not very reliable. In addition, you just write exciting articles. Why do you create a plot that readers don't like? Does it feel good to be abused? Then you just don't want to start with the Celestial Dragons!

It's poisonous to write about female protagonists. If you need to criticize, just criticize.

The powerful yet elegant protagonist has just traveled through the world of One Piece. Within three or two chapters, he was immersed in the illusion of Yoshigin and did not wake up until the end. 🥺

The most aggrieved Celestial Dragon in pirate novels.

I want to pretend to be a Celestial Dragon, but I pretend to be very low-level.

It's so toxic that I can't watch the first few pictures. The relationship between the male and female protagonists comes very suddenly. The protagonist's personality changes drastically when he comes to this world. How come you have lived under the red flag for more than 20 years and ended up becoming a Celestial Dragon? You don't have any psychological burden. You can slave whoever you want, and you are still open. The Bureau said that you can kill Aunt Kaido at will based on your identity. Haha, the preface and the follower are inconsistent. I just said that my family has no strength, so I can start a war at will. Why? Why should other families pay the price for your ideas? Didn't you just say that other families are squeezing you? The author's writing style is really bad.

I was quite disappointed with the previous one, because I know the characters in One Piece too well. The story written by the author is entirely to serve himself, and it has changed too many characters of the original characters, which makes it very uncomfortable to watch.

Really, it seems that when you travel to a Celestial Dragon, you inherit the brain of a Celestial Dragon.

I have never understood why there is such a thing as a heroine. Who among you has traveled through time and had a heroine? Life will be endless in the future. With your monstrous cultivation and power, if you can persist with someone for 100 years, I will consider you to be awesome. A heroine and a woman are completely different. The woman you have slept with is not necessarily your woman. I don't talk about fantasy or ancient times. It is obvious now. Wait, if you are rich and powerful, every woman you have slept with will be married? Do you all care? If you don't find it annoying, they are still annoying.

It's not unreasonable that it's not high-quality. It's bad but not thorough. Wano kills but doesn't kill them completely. Obviously the male protagonist has the same brain circuit as Kaido and has no political or country-governing brains. To deal with the enemies in One Piece, you need to keep your family in order, kill everyone who is not your own, and leave a few obedient dogs to the upper echelons of Wano Country. If you issue an order to abolish the sword or put away the sword, everyone with a sword will die. If you open a factory and the civilians of Wano Country work and have enough to eat, the country will basically be yours. If you can eat enough, the common people will feel that you are a real king, and this is also where the troops come from, the basic base.

Why don't you eat the fruit yet? Can you achieve good results in such water?

There is too little gold in the sky in the whole article. The author did not consider it well. A mermaid can buy 500 million to 600 million beli. As a result, one family only has 10 billion. There are three or four branches in a family. There must be at least 20 people in total, which means one person only has 400 to 500 million. It's funny. When Saint Charles bought the mermaid, he asked for 500 million as if it were pocket money. When Brother Ming took over the kingdom, he wanted to collect 10 billion beli from King Liku. King Liku collected the whole country and finally gave it, which showed that the foundation had not been shaken, so he just gritted his teeth and held on for a while. It is not a problem for each of the 170 franchised countries in the world to pay an average of 10 billion in heavenly gold every year. In other words, the heavenly gold has at least one trillion beli every year, and the result is 200 billion haha.

It's so rubbish. It's so daring to put this on the shelves. It's just shit. Although I can't write it, it doesn't stop me from seeing whether it looks like shit 😜

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What is this? The Shuang Cities book was very well written. Why is this book so messed up?

It was disgusting to watch. I have seen this routine too many times. At least ten years ago, the plot was about getting rich and teasing a beautiful idiot supporting actress. Not to mention that the details have the meaning of writing emotions. This is embarrassing. You can explain that you just went there, but it can only be like this two days ago. With superhuman abilities, you were still a superman two days ago. After two days, you will be a native of the motherland. After a month, you will become a native of the ancestors.

The writing is not very good. Although the plot is very interesting to me, the writing is really hard to read.

It is true that the world government is most concerned about face. The supreme image of the Celestial Dragons must not be damaged. Anyone who publicly damages the image of the Celestial Dragons must be punished. The four emperors, as well as the emperor and his deputy must be executed, unless there are special circumstances. The Yonko class can look down on the Celestial Dragons, but who among the navy dares to publicly damage the image of the Celestial Dragons? The most that Karp did in his original novel was avoidance and scolding. He pretended not to see it, so he didn't dare to take action. It was in public. This novel is extremely poisonous.

The emotional scenes seem a bit awkward, so I started writing them right from the beginning