God of Ten Thousand Mountains: Beginning as Zhulong

There is something wrong with writing! I saw wow, what a beautiful woman. This sentence is so disgusting.

Your subsequent killings are really careless. Anyone who offends you will be killed. Although the Lin family is quite hated, the traces of your growth are so eye-catching that no one suspects it. Personal evaluation: Dry food

I don't really like this kind of eunuch novel, even if it has a single female protagonist, this novel arranges some women around it just to highlight the protagonist's determination to become stronger, which I don't understand. If you have the ability to make your woman stronger throughout her life, why should you become that immortal monk?

Xiao is the father of the protagonist, and he sends things every day.

In the later stage, it was a little bit too much, it was too ridiculous. I can't describe the feeling

The writing in the front is quite good, but when I saw Rong Yu coming out of the cellar and the hero saving the beauty later, I felt that it was a little distorted and flawed.

What's going on? Are you not ready to write? It's actually quite well written.

And with your amazing magical powers, the court will treat you as a god. You are the master of the country. Who can catch you unless there are immortal cultivators?

EMMmmm How childish it is, even worse than a mortal cultivating immortality! It's just that martial arts not only requires several levels of root bones, but also the techniques. Not to mention combat skills, it also requires elixirs, which is even more bizarre. Not only does it cost money but it will last a lifetime and you may not be able to reach the top level. Are you serious??

The plot conflict is well written and the progress is well controlledヽ(⌐■㉨■)ノ♪♬Come on, I'm optimistic about you