Great Dao Huaixu Sect

The writing is somewhat mysterious, which is very good.

3.5 Million words, no contract? ? ? ? ? ? Cow B

The content is too trivial, the main line is not prominent, and it is not interesting. Still need to work harder.

I like to read the reviews before reading the novel. I saw some comments asking why I didn't sign the contract. After reading four or five chapters, let's analyze it from my humble point of view. Actually, I don't quite agree with the Golden Three Chapters. Everyone has their own favorite type. Some people like cool stories, some like multiple heroines, some like single heroines, and some like decisive ones. Well, I'm a little off topic. I feel like the author wants to write a good story, but there are a lot of wasted words at the beginning, and the theme is not directly grasped. For example, if the title is a medical hospital, just cut to the medical center and start writing. Don't introduce what happened before the town. I feel like the written words are useless. You said that he got rich by mining before, but the mine disappeared. Because there is little land, he can only hunt. It can be mentioned in one or two strokes in the middle of the story. Besides, when I write about the medical clinic, I just want to highlight the protagonist's kindness and superb medical skills. I can just mention it in one or two strokes. In my opinion, these are useless pens and cannot satisfy the readers' curiosity. A story can start very plainly, but at least it should capture the main point. It is unnecessary to write about hunting at one time and treatment at another time. There are other things. If you want to write about hunting, then highlight the story of hunting and describe it from the perspective of the protagonist. For example, someone is injured and needs treatment, and the protagonist shows off his skills. After reading four or five chapters, I feel that the author's story is quite good. Everyone may have different hobbies. But please don't be angry. I am also looking at it with a learning attitude. .

I have read 400 chapters so far. What keeps me going is the protagonist's kindness and lack of bloodlust, the stimulating spiritual roots, the upgradeable qualifications, and the free chapters. The writing and plot are both good. Compared with some books on the monthly popular list, the setting is to eat books, and the plot is only a slap in the face and a slap in the face. It is much better. The disadvantage is that the characters are too disgusting. I thought that no one commented on this book and the author didn't know about it. However, after what Gao Liang said in Chapter 366 and Wang Chengzhi in Chapter 377, I found out that the author also knew that those senior brothers were disgusting. If this world was not about Taoism, but about Buddhism, the protagonist would have become a Buddha immediately. After all, although the protagonist is not written in the book, he has his own mind. If you meet him today, you will know that he is a good person, and you will share the money you earn the next day without worrying about others being disgusted. For fellow students, 50% of the 100% earned will be given away, for the other disciples, 99% of the 100% earned will be given away, and for the sect, the money earned by a top 100 company in annual revenue will be given away for free, and the company will also be given away. The protagonist's generosity to his fellow sect members would be acceptable if the sect was destroyed in the plot and everyone lived and died together for many years. But at the beginning of the story, the protagonist is set to be a well-read, kind-hearted and not pedantic character. He knows how to protect each other by killing bullies, and doesn't know the importance of guarding others after arriving in the sect. But the protagonist is like a supporting character in other books. When you meet people from the same sect or master, everyone feels like you have met the protagonist. Today you have a meal to get to know him, and tomorrow when you go out to experience, you will be an angel investor and give benefits to the protagonist. You have read 400 chapters and implemented 400 chapters. It felt strange to be sympathetic to each other and those outer disciples from the beginning. After all, we had just encountered the dangers of the world, and we were still unfamiliar with the new environment during our escape Although the subsequent process of recruiting inner disciples, actions proved that the friendship of a group of brothers wanted each other to be better, which meant that they were good people, and the weird ones in the master were even more weird. In the end, 3 Hundred Chapters of Secret Realm The plot of the four brothers who met the living treasures is also inexplicable. It is clear that the narration in the article has shown rudeness, but the author deliberately described it. After the protagonist realizes that he is rude, the follow-up plot also adds a lack of brains and emotional intelligence. As a result, the four brothers did not do anything, and the protagonist regards them as good brothers again. Moreover, they are casual cultivators and earn resources by themselves. Even without brains, they should have experience, and they should be more experienced in exploring secret realms step by step. It feels like the author directly made the body cultivation system into a template like Black Whirlwind Li Kui, including the third senior brother in the sect. And even if you live and die with the sect for many years, you should not show all your secrets (except for the exercise that the senior brother said needs to be kept secret) to the fellow sects who have experienced it together Yes, what I am talking about is that the protagonist gets a bead that can form a world of his own, and shows it to everyone. Later, after the protagonist saves half of the sect with a method that he does not know, the master's wife also knows that there are some secrets that are more dangerous if there are more people who know them, so she does not tell the master directly. I am sure that if the protagonist knows that he has this method and no one asks to keep it secret, he will definitely tell the whole sect to know about it. Even though he has killed several traitors, he is still confident in revealing all the secrets, so he has always thought that the protagonist has Buddhist magical powers. After the sect leader took all the people in the sect to change the map, the protagonist could finally develop on his own, experience and settle alone. He hasn't read it after 400 chapters and doesn't know where it will go, but he may still be an angel investor. When I changed the map and saw the plot where the protagonist presented all the thousand-year-old fruit trees, I already felt that something was wrong The previous experience mentioned that a mature thousand-year elixir was very precious in the initial map. The disciples were practicing in the secret realm of the sect. But the protagonist directly gave away all the sustainable fruit trees, and then the sect leader wanted to have sex for free. This is really the whole sect hugging the protagonist. The resources of the peak in charge of the sect leader may not be one-tenth of the resources given by the protagonist, and then he only got the identity of the big sect on the map, which is still a dangerous state. The sect leader is also very disgusted. He clearly knows that the new map has more dangers and less benefits, but he still takes the sect to the new map As for the skills, the secret realm that the protagonist found already contains the sect's lost items. Good skills In terms of resources, the resources of the entire peak have been emptied by the two major families. The resources are not as abundant as the novice map, so you have to argue on your own Discussing the dangerous novice map is like a level 30 person who has a chance of encountering a level 50 enemy. People, and then the sect leader directly brought the people of the sect to the new map Let level 30 people encounter level 70 enemies directly, just to restore their former glory, and it feels like it is for everyone's good, Why don't you bring the masters to bring the original people to the new map? Come to the novice map to seize back the territory, take a good rest, and take the genius to the new map to practice and grow up secretly. Anyway, new maps will encounter dangers, but there will be dangers 100% or not necessarily. The leader chose to encounter big dangers 100%. The last and most important thing is to read Chapter 400 and Chapter 400 makes me sick of my master Master and master's wife, there is nothing to say. These two embody a good master and a good master's wife in the article. They are the most comfortable people in the master's sect. Except for the male master, the others are all selfish beings like other protagonists of cool novels The two of them and the protagonist are like three licking dogs who only want to give without asking for anything in return, but they are master and mother after all, and the apprentices they accept will get the consequences themselves. Introduction to the disgusting seniors after reading 400 chapters Senior Sister (Second Senior Sister): After all, she is a senior sister, not a senior brother. She is the most normal character. Among the chapters I have read so far, she is the least annoying among the great opportunities given by the protagonist. After the sect was destroyed, he was essentially the acting sect leader. When the sect was breached, the system was abandoned and the disciples' escape routes were taken. After getting the protagonist's resources, he coordinated the resources and strategized. If the sect leader appeared in a few chapters later, he would have restored the sect. The resources given by the protagonist will also be rewarded, such as the gun at the auction, and the elixir for practicing alchemy. Unlike other vampires, at least 100 will be returned in exchange for 20. The following are four green tea bitches. They are in the same class in name. In fact, the four of them and their senior sister are one family. They will protect the reputation of their senior brother but not their master or mother. Third Senior Brother: The plot description is the least, almost only when the protagonist and the disciples stay together, the author will describe the reactions of the five disciples, and there will be scenes. Basically, it describes the irritability and road rage syndrome. In other books, it would be like destroying one person in three chapters and destroying a sect in ten chapters. Fourth Senior Brother: The senior brother who the protagonist has the most contact with. According to the description in the article, the senior brother who has done nothing good but got the most benefits and has eaten the protagonist's tofu again and again. The most disgusting senior brother in the description, robbed the protagonist of all resources from the beginning, and then spent a few chapters to understand the senior brother. After the father was a good master, he forgave his behavior and was happy with it. The protagonist gave him a great opportunity. Now even the alchemists from the new map are amazed by the inheritance. He got a big advantage but also invaded the protagonist's resources time and time again. He is the most common protagonist in other books. He treats other people's things as if he is his own and behaves well. Fifth Senior Brother: Like the Third Senior Brother, there is less description, and also he has not received one of the big opportunities given by the protagonist, but like the Third Senior Brother, he has taken a lot of magic pills. The only reward is to raise two Tiger and Snake give emotional rewards to the protagonist, but the human + pet eats four resources, and then giving only this is almost the same as 0 rewards. If the figure becomes normal later, it will be like the protagonist in other books who picked up the eggs of mythical beasts, but he picked up three. Eldest Brother: The most annoying character in the sect, and the most annoying character in every chapter I have read, bar none. The most typical character of the protagonist in his book, the fourth senior brother is only described as the most annoying, but the actual action in the 400 chapters is the eldest brother. At the end, he just wants to vent his anger; since joining the sect, he has learned that his heart is higher than the sky, but his eyes are high and his hands are low. Without the great opportunity given by the protagonist, he is just a waste. After he gets the opportunity to break through, he works as a Riddler all day long. In other books, he keeps pretending and slaps his face, and his actions are selfish, but the protagonist in the article is described as a good person; From the beginning, he thought he could find his own cultivation system, but he was unable to break through. Master and mother made a breakthrough for him, The resources of the entire peak have been used up and the teacher is heavily in debt. The teacher's wife is seriously injured and cannot advance. The genius master of the previous generation has no resources to break through. When the protagonist chooses a skill, he is unable to make a breakthrough and encourages the protagonist to choose a broken ancient skill. The protagonist has the worst talent at the beginning. If he were not the protagonist, he would never be able to practice anything in his life. Moreover, in the 400 chapters, the protagonist has not been given any guidance on how to practice the skill. In other words, if he is a normal person, he will not be able to practice it. This senior brother will not teach it, and then make people become a useless person like him. If it were not for the great opportunity given by the protagonist, when the sect was attacked, the master and his wife would be depressed and seriously injured and fight, and then all the junior brothers would be at their lowest level and unable to save the master. Maybe they died together in the battle to save the master, and there would be only one person left like Tiangushaxing. As for why Tiangushaxing, I did it myself After the breakthrough, he pretended to be dead in the plot of Water Peak and did not want to be famous. Except for him, all the other juniors had character flaws and could understand others, but the whole peak was implicated by him for so many years. After the breakthrough, he did not repay the master's care. He pretended to be righteous and did not want to bully others, but the master needed reputation. In the subsequent plot, he has been acting as the Riddler. After the sect was destroyed, he did nothing. He relied entirely on his junior sister and the protagonist for support. He pretended to be a master all day long but did not do anything as a master. He did not care about the sect and the master. In the article, he was praised as an unborn genius, not even the sky is in his eyes, but without the opportunity of the protagonist, he is a waste with no arrogance and no confidence. Like the other four senior brothers, there is zero reward. The last and most outrageous thing is that the five senior brothers and sisters know all the details of the protagonist. After all, the protagonist has told everything about what he got, but none of his senior brothers and sisters have told the details. Even the senior sister did not tell the protagonist about the Iron Alliance. Only after it was done did he find out about the senior sister's plan. The protagonist was like the most loyal licking dog licking the five senior brothers and sisters.