My Days as a Teacher at Kassel Academy

Author, why don't you find a school director to be the heroine. For example, Elizabeth Laurent or Charlotte, dragon fans rarely see female protagonists like them. Or Caesar, a girl with blonde hair and big boobs, can also do it.

Evaluation: As of the time of publication, the current number of words is 120,000 words. The overall look and feel is good. There are no major bugs in the plot for the time being. It is worth reading Disadvantages: Let's talk about the shortcomings. It is recommended to add dividing lines where there should be dividing lines. Individual chapters need to be separated when changing scenes/times, otherwise it will cause confusion (for example, the chapter about Lu Mingfei at the station). It is also recommended that the author check the layout of the finished product. I forgot which page it is and saw the disastrous system layout (every sentence is like being divided into paragraphs, and at a glance it looks like typing an enter after typing a sentence) Discussion: If the author of Dragon 3 doesn't mind, he can try to use the serialized version for some of the settings. Anyway, Jiangnan can come up with it as he pleases. It would also be good to pick some interesting settings from the serialized version (for example, Tachibana Masamune is a really good person, Minamoto Naoko's voice spirit, Lu Mingfei is second only to Kazama Ruri, etc.) Reminder (?): I can't see the problem at this stage, but it's best to strictly control the characters' personalities, such as Caesar (arrogant but willing to admit defeat, etc.), Nono (for some reasons in Jiangnan, it is difficult to portray this character well) Suggestion: I hope to give Eri a "complete" life. Ryuzo's Eri is just a child. She has not established a set of "human" values and worldview. It is difficult to treat her as an adult without completing the growth part.

From the beginning of the book until now, I feel that the author's ideas are quite interesting. Although he doesn't reveal them clearly, almost all Dragon Clan fans know what's going on. The seven bronze cities and Rudy's clues have been followed up but not thoroughly written. It should be a hole dug by the author himself. If it is a hole, be sure not to fill it in, otherwise I will be sad after reading it for so long. The fighting is written very clearly and smoothly, although it is not a particularly passionate one, but the atmosphere and anticipation in the chapters of "The End of the Water" really lifted my spirits. The character design is generally stable. The King of Bronze and Fire should be a little deviated due to plot needs. Lu Mingfei has grown, so there are changes. Caesar Nono, Susie Ling, and Chu Zihang all exerted their strength steadily. The portrayal of the protagonist is also good and quite likable, maybe because I also hope that there is a teacher and friend in reality. Now I am most looking forward to the appearance of the Japanese brother and sister and Natsuya, because the few daily stories are very easy to write. I like to read daily novels. The simple Eri and the smart Natsumi should be quite interesting in their daily lives. I am especially looking forward to the interaction between Chu and Xia. But I can't ask you to write too much. After all, if you want to make money, you still have to consider large groups. The writing style is not bad, and the correspondence between the source and the source of the childish girl in the first chapter is a bit interesting. Update steadily and try to update as many updates as possible. It seems that I can catch up with the complete version.

I always feel a bit frustrated, because what I do is very good, but I do it as if I can't see the light of day. You were brought in by the principal himself. If you don't do something big, how will Schneider feel that he trusts you if you keep doing this? You are not an MVP after all your cbs.

It's a refined version of the professor! It came out so suddenly, it's not ready yet, my fingers almost poked out sparks and I didn't catch up with it yesterday. I originally wanted to congratulate it for being put on the shelves, but my painting skills are limited, so I'll just make do with it (ps: I don't know why the professor looks so young in this picture, maybe it's because he's going to Japan to beat children, so he's radiant hhhhh)

Let's talk about the conclusion first. After reading the latest update, it's at least enough food. I read the book when I first started it. I felt that the writing style and characterization were pretty good. It was probably because the pace at the beginning was slow and the results seemed quite poor. There were times when I was worried that the author would stop writing after reading the author's words. Fortunately, the update is stable. In fact, the foreshadowing content is quite interesting if you look closely, and the daily content is quite relaxing. After reading it all the time, I feel that the author is in a stable state. The main plot and branch plots, daily life and fighting are interspersed with each other and the writing is okay. There are no problems. The description of the characters is also three-dimensional, without any obvious OOC (the Norton twins are a little bit, but they are combined to promote the plot). Lu Mingfei's feelings for Nono are currently considered a reasonable sister-sister relationship, and Mingfei has grown. In the book review, I saw someone saying that Lu Mingfei grew up too fast, but in fact it is not fast. After all, what he lacks is ability, confidence and recognition. At this stage, the care and encouragement of the protagonist, Mingfei's growth curve and the self-confidence brought by killing Constantine are reasonable. The author's setting is closer to the original work. The setting of the Seven-Star Bronze City should be filled with some blanks, and no bugs have been found yet.

The Chinese travel group is having a wonderful summer vacation It feels like it will happen: Professor Qin is running around with three students and taking photos

It's not bad at the moment, you can read it, there's nothing wrong with the writing and the plot, and the word count is a lot more than enough. What I personally feel is bad is that some parts are not detailed enough. For example, Lu Mingfei Cassell's life did not unfold very much. He was only allowed to experience the events in the original work and make different choices. However, the direction after that was basically the same, but in fact there is no problem. I will omit what should be omitted without affecting the plot direction of this article. It can be regarded as a relatively good fanfic of the same period.

Harem or stallion? Full order😍

Cheating Professor Qin

Let's have some battle-damaged professor Hey, battle-damaged, hey hey

There is not much difference from the original work, the similarity is 90%

Gold-framed glasses, good

I looked through the recommendations and channels today and found that the more people write their books, the more readers they get. I know very clearly that my collection and subscriptions for this book are getting smaller and smaller, and the subscription ratio has been ridiculously low since it was put on the shelves. Even if we recommend a round of books to be put on the shelves, but now we rely on smart promotion, the collection will not be dwindling. They are really being dropped every day, and the comment area is also a stagnant water. I don't even know if everyone abandoned the book when they saw something hit, or if they kept reading until they gave up. Alas, I am also very confused now. Is there a big problem with the story design or is the writing or rhythm too poor? It felt like there weren't many readers from the beginning to the end. Now that I think about it, I can tell from the book's introduction. There may be later readers who will leave immediately after seeing this post, but I still hope that if you have any suggestions, you can put them forward after reading it. Even if you abandon the book, you can tell me the reasons.

Falling from the fate of death, may the World Tree give you new life

Let's be a little fierce professor Professor: Are you bullying my students? The ashes have been raised for you (:-D)

I came in after seeing the title of Square's book. There was a previous book with a similar title to the author's I'm a Teacher in the Dragon Clan, but the content should be different. After all, the idea of ​​a world tree becoming a spirit is not something that ordinary people can imagine.

It may be a bit presumptuous here, but I still want to ask the author to either have a single heroine or no heroine, and never open a harem. If the author is willing to adopt my opinion, then I would really like to thank you very much. If you open a harem, you will feel a little uncomfortable.

What regrets do you have about "Dragon"? What are your expectations for the follow-up of this book? Which character do you want to see and what ending? You can post them all here. Sorry, let's make up for it together.