Of Course This Is Entertainment

After reading the free chapter, the advantage is that it opens up new ideas, but it is not big. The shortcoming is a common problem with fantasy writing. After writing the fantasy, it starts to get boring. There is no main line and no one knows what the protagonist is doing. Is it just to summon people, make movies, and interact with them? The same plot is used repeatedly. It's like the author is writing a diary. Write wherever you think. It's better to go back to the old business and wreak havoc on the entertainment industry 🙂. Looking forward to the next one.

I've seen similar ideas before, and they were pretty good. However, this book is full of nonsense words, which is disgusting.

Self-explanatory article, the writing style is average. This is probably my first time writing a web article. From the introduction, I can tell that he is either a top author or just starting out. Come on, author, this book will be better than the next one

The imagination is okay, but the writing is a mess. He was shaking his head with a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west, shaking his head without looking at the main point. A mind-blowing composition for middle school students

I read the latest chapter in one go. In summary, it is quite boring. The plot is that the male protagonist recruits a group of female protagonists from movies and TV shows, and then they talk and talk and talk. When I saw the latest chapter, I either thought it was interesting or interesting, but I just wanted to see what kind of plot a group of people could develop. The result was a lot of dialogue that kept talking and going, and I couldn't read it, and it slipped away.

Tell me some feelings. I'm not very familiar with the celebrities and dramas you mentioned, because I don't have time to follow dramas, so I treat your characters as originals. However, the characters appeared too quickly and too much, and there was no time to digest them. The fourth, fifth and sixth appeared right away, which made the main characters of the whole work insufficiently portrayed. It was unclear who was the center of gravity. The whole work gave people a confusing feeling with no clear theme.

I was initially attracted by Chapter 20 in the group. I think it's amazing and the subject matter is very novel. So I have been following this book since I started reading it. But as I commented last time, after watching it, I felt like I didn't see anything. I abandoned it for a while, came back, picked up a lot, and finished reading it again. No surprise, it's still the same.

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So who is the protagonist of this book? After reading about 30 chapters, five girls appeared, but none of them looked like they wanted to be fucked. Moreover, the comments said that later on it seemed like a girl was fucked by a girl. Will the protagonist's perspective be changed? The comments said it was a big boss' account, but it shouldn't be charged 5,000 for 300,000 words. So this is a book specially customized for Brother Hao's unique taste?

I like the setting very much. It feels like "Paper Man" starting a group to explore reality, with two-dimensional characters interfering with the three-dimensional world. However, there are too many characters, and each time I have to explain the settings and the environment, it's a bit tedious. Wish you good luck with the launch.

There are too many daily routines, the characters are too papery, and recently I have been writing about Shao Kai's harem inexplicably for a long time, which lacks a sense of substitution. It always gives me the feeling of reading Baihe. Save it for another month. If it still looks like this next time, then I can only thank you for not being sensitive.

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A work that relies purely on a sense of belief, I couldn't stand it after reading about ten chapters. There is nothing but imagination. In chapter nine, two girls come. Because they are from different works, they have to be questioned, explained and discussed. What's the highlight? Let me see the warrior behind and introduce it.

Bite the bullet and read Chapter 4, how did you come up with this long and brain-burning setting?

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The author's settings are good, but his writing skills are too poor. Wait until a high-level author writes a novel using your setting!

This setting,,, I felt like I was going to jump in the first chapter. Is the author sure that this setting can be written smoothly? Just one setting requires so many places to fill in. It also needs to have content. It also needs to deal with the conflict between film and television characters and real-life characters. Would it be better if you just write a variety movie? Why is it both a variety movie and entertainment?

The creativity of this book is great, the opening is really amazing, and the interactions between Zou and Liu, Gao and Ye are very interesting. It's a pity that as the number of male protagonists draws more and more, there are more female supporting characters, but they all turn into paper figures. The plot between Shao and Ye is even more speechless. I highly doubt whether the author has an outline and can continue writing afterward.

Let me comment, it was really good when I first watched it, but there were too many characters appearing later on, and there were too many trivial things. The main line of the story was not clear, and it made me tired to watch it. Unlike the previous Infinite Journey, the main line is very clear at the beginning and there are only a few main characters. Although many new characters appear later, they are all mentioned in one stroke. In the end, the interaction between the movie characters and the real world is gradually laid out until the climax of the real world. Moreover, the main text is still concentrated on a few characters. Even if a lot of daily life is inserted, it is not so scattered, so it is very comfortable to watch. The above are some personal opinions, I hope the author will get better and better.

Let me take advantage of this opportunity to come up with a new idea. After all, you are one of my favorite authors. This idea is somewhat similar to your previous book Endless Journey. It is also a story about the protagonist who travels to the movie world for some reason and tries his best to get home. The background of the protagonist can be set as a person with a family and a career (a happy family, a child of eight, nine or ten years old), so he has the motivation or obsession to go back and reunite. It is recommended that coming to the movie world is a time-travel of consciousness, not physical time (race and gender will change when traveling through each movie world, which is more interesting). It is recommended to choose a Star Wars movie first. Such a movie has a relatively high fault tolerance rate. It requires technology and superpowers. On the one hand, it allows the protagonist to obtain superpowers (such as the Force), and on the other hand, it also has the assistance of technology. What I envision is to use the Force to protect one's consciousness, and then use technology to open a time and space door. However, the protagonist will definitely not be able to return to the real world at once (multiple timelines and parallel time and space can be set up later, and the protagonist will not be in each movie world at the end) Different choices will produce a new timeline), and the protagonist is set to be a person who is very persistent in returning to his own world, but there are also protagonists in some timelines who have other choices. For example, some give up and integrate into the movie world, and even help when they meet the protagonists in different timelines. The protagonist's ultimate enemy is his other self. The protagonist relies on the help of various props, plot characters, and even his kind selves in other timelines in the movie world to find his way home. The final enemy is the protagonist in another timeline. His philosophy is exactly opposite to that of the protagonist. He crazily makes himself stronger (whether it is mutation or abnormality). He believes that only by destroying all the movie worlds, he will naturally return to the real world. In the end, the two people and themselves in different timelines become two camps and start a duel to finally return to the real world.

Let me take the liberty of mentioning an idea. The protagonist suddenly has the ability to travel through the movie world. In the movie world, he can obtain abilities and items. When the plot of the movie is destroyed, he will be forced to return to the real world. Except for the items he carries with him, he cannot bring back anything else (including abilities). But if you kill a character in the movie world, you can use his abilities in the real world (for example, if you kill Vader in Star Wars, you can use his power in reality), but the price is that over time you will be replaced by the movie character (borrowing the setting of the mysterious resurrection). Every time the protagonist travels through a movie, it will also establish an anchor between that movie world and reality. The characters in the movie world It will also come to reality, but most movie characters will not come. As long as some failed villains or frustrated characters want to change the environment, after all, the real world is immune or restricted to most magic, fairies and demons. In addition, the first choice for movie characters to come is real actors. The main role of the protagonist in the later period is to solve the problem of the connection between the movie world and reality. The stories and daily life during this period should also be very interesting.

Who is the author of the novel whose main business is scientific research mentioned in Chapter 1429 Xuanzang and the Monkey in the Blockbuster Era? What is the name of this Journey to the West fan?

There are so many formulaic books now that it is rare to have a different one, but just like there are too many characters that the author complains about in the book, the author doesn't seem to want to write some vases, so it feels very scattered. And read later, it says that after 103, it will be written as a girl? ? ? Forget it, I only see the public part, and look forward to the day when the author becomes successful. Ps: Can the Qidian app even have automatic scrolling? After all these years, you still have this virtue? I'm tired of clicking through books that have been on the shelves for a long time.

There are too many bugs in the rules, and readers need to forcefully ignore them before reading further. Others are above the standard.

After reading the third chapter, I can't help but want to ask, will I be able to draw different film and television roles played by the same star if I continue to draw cards later? For example, now I have drawn Zou Yu, and later I have drawn Zhao Ling'er, Xiao Longnu, Wang Yuyan, Bai Xiuzhu, etc... Isn't it a mess if a bunch of people with similar looks and different ages collide? And the drawn characters have their own skills (Zou Yu's genuine lawyer certificate), so does Xiao Longnu have her own ancient tomb sect skills? Zhao Ling'er... It is said that there will be a patch in the back, so that the same actor will not be repeatedly drawn for other film and television roles. For example, after drawing Liu Tianxian's Zou Yu, Zhao Ling'er and others will not be drawn again.

1. Card drawing If card drawing is the core, what problems will be confidential, so the whole team needs its own people cloning, so top-level blending quantity is needed. If a large number of cards cannot be drawn, what is the point of drawing cards? What's more exciting about drawing cards is the moment when you draw them out, so there must be primary and secondary characters in the group portraits (and many of the characters you draw in the card drawing game are not seen only when drawing cards, and are not used at all other times) 2. Entertainment articles If it is an entertainment story, what problems will there be A cesspit, so if you need to escape, you need money and power 404, it seems that the heroine opening a harem is a place outside the law Real, there is no cesspit/404 is not true, it is not an entertainment article, don't ask why, the reality is In this way, reality is more outrageous than fiction, because reality does not need logic, fiction does 3. Author Old readers know, the king of 404, v55v, all books, all 404 Secret Garden King The Best Actor The Controller The Endless Journey The Legend of the Gods The Blockbuster Era Except for the Controller, everything else is finished, well, the Legend of the Gods is not finished, but the other endings are okay The concept of this book can be regarded as a variant of the endless journey

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Here I go again, add more essence to V5

I know it! It turns out you wrote it at the starting point