Panlong, I Am a Different Kind of Detachment

Everyone in the comment area has not interfered too much with your plot and other content. They just hope that you can change the name of the moves in the introduction. When there is no problem in your novel itself, the name problem has caused many people to give up before jumping into the trap. This is not worth the loss for you.

Why not write about Naruto when he is so deeply poisoned?

Coiling Dragon itself is considered a Western fantasy with a little bit of Eastern fantasy elements added to it. Your moves are all names from Japanese comics. . . Except for self-pleasure, who can understand the meaning of the name.

To put it bluntly, in my eyes, this book is a pseudo-Panlong fanfic full of various secondary settings. I added a lot of settings that are not necessary, and there are even some settings that conflict with the original work. I just mentioned a few of them at random. It is set that the Lord God only has five will power. There is no need to explain this clearly in the original work. How much will power the Lord God has specifically, but it is certain that it must be far beyond five, because according to this setting, in theory, the lower Lord God is only more powerful than five. Dzogchen is 10,000 times stronger, which is only ten to a hundred times stronger than Lin Lei in the Okaron plane. However, according to performance, Lin Lei can only move in front of him in the turbulence of space, and the main god, even the lower main god, can move faster than Lin Lei in the material plane. This is just a simple example, and there are various supporting evidences. For example, the main god of Zero Fusion cannot defeat Dzogchen. It is obviously impossible that in the original work, the difference between the main god and the divine level is already two dimensions. It is just like the god and the holy realm. If your holy realm is awesome, even if You are the deity of the Holy Realm of Dzogchen. If you don't have divine power and divine realm, you will be crushed to death by the lower gods using their divine realm. The gap between the main god and the god level is also so big. The main god is the administrator of the Panlong Universe. How can you allow the god level to leapfrog at will? Second, it is the so-called alternative detachment. The protagonist attempts to follow the laws of space in the Panlong Universe. I can only say that I am convinced. It's not like the protagonist has never read the original work. Do you want me to post a screenshot of Hongmeng's last words? For the sake of the stability of the affiliated universe, people have eliminated the possibility of the affiliated universe realizing the laws of space and time. How come the protagonist is more powerful than Hongmeng and can realize the laws of space without Hongmeng's intervention? This point seriously conflicts with the original work. In the end, you try to achieve the so-called fusion of time and space and achieve transcendence. So what if you understand the laws of time and space? After all, it's just Tianzun. It's not completely destroyed by the dissolution of Hongmeng's spiritual energy. Tell me why you think you can transcend the so-called laws of time and space? Are all those deities fools? . The third author is still a waste of names. He uses the so-called "Thousand-mile Palm" from beginning to end. This trick neither sounds good nor explains it in detail. He uses it repeatedly, which makes me feel embarrassed for the protagonist.

Water law is not good at soul attack

I read part of this book at the beginning, and I felt very embarrassed. Then I read in the comment section that the moves were made by Naruto, so I haven't read a lot of them. In fact, this book is quite remarkable. I actually didn't see any of Naruto's moves. For someone like me who has never read Naruto, but has read many Naruto fans, it doesn't matter at all. Besides, as for the other two designs of Coiling Dragon, I can't see Coiling Dragon. It must have been 134 years, and the time I watched it actually didn't have any impact, because I don't remember the setting at all. In fact, for a bookworm like me, as long as the setting is reasonable and the plot development is reasonable, I can watch it. You have to work hard, author, just don't use eunuchs. In the future, you can also write about traveling to other worlds. If you travel to the swallowing starry sky, it will also be very good.

Are you kidding me by using illusions to deceive the world into thinking your soul has mutated? Why don't you deceive the heaven and the earth that you have the variation of earth, wind, water, and fire? Why don't you deceive the world that you are the main god and have a three-piece set of supreme artifacts? Why don't you deceive heaven and earth that you are the supreme God? The more I write, the funnier it becomes

In fact, there are only two ways to transcendence, either copy Lin Lei or copy Qin Yu. Any other detachment is a forced addition of a second setting and subverts the original worldview. 😳😳😳😳

The introduction has been changed, let me just say, a water type can change the world, which makes me not in the mood. It's just a bit confusing to write about someone else becoming the main god

I read the introduction and I don't want to read a universe that doesn't allow you to comprehend, but you use the laws of water to leverage it. There is no space for comprehension. You insist on changing it. Can you turn soil into gold? Author, you made the protagonist more awesome than Hongmeng.

After reading a few chapters, I didn't see any powerful cheats for the protagonist! How to understand the laws of space and time without powerful plug-ins? ? Panlong Universe is an affiliated universe! Such awesome people are not allowed to exist at all! Time and space both exist in the form of innate supernatural powers! It can be used with research essence and blood! But it is only allowed to be used and not understood!

Playing with the laws of space in the auxiliary universe, the author really wants to complain. Let alone space, so what if you also understand the laws of time. If you understand the laws of space, you can become a god king at most, and if you understand the laws of time, you can become a god. Even Tianzun, although he can tear apart the barrier of the attached universe, will only be assimilated into Hongmeng spiritual energy when facing the endless Hongmeng spiritual energy. It can be seen that in the world of Panlong, there is no future for playing with time and space in the world of stars. If you want to truly stand at the top, you can only work hard on strengthening your body, either to achieve the Hongmeng body or the Xuanhuang immortal body. In other words, either find a way to mutate the souls of the four series, or find a way to create the universe.

The soul illusion is strong enough to defeat the main god, but in the end, it still cannot die and become a holy realm? 😰

Instead of wasting so much time on the laws of time and space, it would be more practical to use divergent thinking to create a technique similar to the transformation of stars.

I almost fell asleep when I saw the Saint Realm. It doesn't have any special features, not even a golden finger. It's okay to have a soul mutation. It's just a water element.

Where did you see that it took Hongmeng so long to open up this universe, and you also messed up the settings. In the original work, Hongmeng had opened countless universes before opening this universe, but this one main and four assistants are the most stable. All other universes have lifespans, and only this universe can last forever. Why do you think that the universe you opened is better than Hongmeng's, and the other two settings before are just that.

The soul attainments are so high. He can rub soul defense artifacts with his hands, can also use illusions to mutate the soul, and integrate the rules of fate and the laws of water elements. With one illusion, he can kill a star demon in seconds. How come he has not become a god by the "rule of death" after staying in the underworld for two million years? Or does the author plan to rub the soul defense main artifact with his hands and then use the "rule of death" to become a god? Or is there simply no "rule of death" option to become a god?

After Chapter 200, it's just pure money fraud! It is recommended to abandon the trap early. In vain

My evaluation: Just like chicken breast, it's woody and tasteless. If you're not interested in reading, check it out, but that's all.

What I can't help but think about is that the so-called unity of nature and man in the Holy Realm does not appear once in the original text of Panlong, which means that Tomato has never used the word harmony of nature and man at all 😄

The mid to early stages are okay. But after the protagonist is basically invincible, the plot has almost no new ideas, and the word count is too large. So far, there is almost nothing to read. The most important thing in a novel is the plot and characters, not the expository text.

When I wrote Chapter 506 of the Supreme Rules, I felt that I should write about the Infinite Chaotic Source Space later.

There are too many private items and it's too verbose!

Write quickly, author

Don't be a eunuch, please update as soon as possible

Mo Si is a third-line soul mutation? Have you read the original work?

The content is pretty good, don't mind the bad comments, keep up the good work

Author, please update, stop being a eunuch! !

To be honest, this book is actually very well written. Has a lot of its own stuff. Worth a look