Infinite Red Moon Game

It's beautiful, and the more I look at it, the more I'm fascinated by it. Although I honestly didn't understand the first copy (it was a bit complicated), when the world view unfolded, I was really fascinated. The more I read, the more excited I was. Thank you so much, author.

The author's first book has a bit of an air-conditioning smell, but it's not refreshing enough. Brain-burning is a brain-burning thing, but it's still a little bit like shit. I can still feel like this. You can see if you can add a little bit of data, such as equipment, skills, etc. Or, for example, if you can have a bit of fighting as cool as possible. Even if you say Red Lotus Karma Fire, one move can kill the enemy instantly, which is better than just running away after decryption. It means that since the author has the strength to write more than 100 chapters, he will sew where he should sew and refer to where he should refer. The core point of the online article is still cool. This is not to criticize the author for not writing well, but the author can write better. Moreover, looking at the current number of investors, I really don't know if the author can persevere. Coding is not easy. Come on, author! Even if it is cut, I can definitely write better next time. When it's time to sew, just sew it so that the reader can feel comfortable.

Come on, author! Lots of updates!

I hope there will be no heroine in Ten Days End because I can't stand it because there is a heroine. Although I am not that repulsive to the heroine, but for this kind of weird and suspenseful unlimited novel, having a heroine dilutes the horror a lot.

It looks good, follow up and update soon. The infinite flow is very appetizing and weird, the atmosphere is well described, the NPC creation is logical, and there is no situation where the character is sacrificed for the so-called fun. There is no situation where the NPC's IQ is lowered and the protagonist is highlighted, which is good. After all, is defeating a fool really good? Puzzle solving is my favorite, but not many can write it fluently. The author has done a great job in this regard. As for the monster-fighting upgrade flow... I always feel that it will fall into the situation of inflated combat power. Poor writing is a deducted item here, and with combat power and props, the weird feeling will be greatly reduced. Therefore, I personally prefer to watch some puzzle dungeons, where everyone works together (probably) to complete the level, or it doesn't matter if they don't cooperate. The readers are just rambling. The author can write whatever he wants. I hope to continue to maintain a comfortable narrative rhythm.

Very nervous. The writing is very good. The first time I saw this title was on Zhihu's "Don't Look at the Moon" essay topic. There are pretty good short stories in it. The author used this title, but the world view in the article is larger. It's a very good book.

The writing is really good. The pace of the same type of book Ten Days End is not as comfortable as this one in comparison.

In the first dungeon, Zhang Chao accidentally knocked down the cabinet and found the way to the rooftop. Personally, I feel that it was a failure. If the theme of the dungeon is puzzle solving, it is best to reduce the luck factor. In ordinary escapes, luck is understandable. Key clues related to survival like this should not be discovered by luck. It is best if the dungeon sets up hidden clues, and then the protagonist discovers them through puzzle solving and reasoning.

It's well written, with a suspenseful style that's been popular recently, as well as the author's own innovations.

Isn't this first dungeon set up more complicated? There are only 9 people in it, and the protagonist is also the leader. Actually, I don't understand why ordinary players, or strangers, trust the protagonist so much in the end of the world (the protagonist can only confirm the true identities of Lin Yu and Zhang Chao, and the others may be ghosts in disguise, so Han Lin later...) Just... How to put it, it feels tiring to read in terms of focus, and the suspense setting is not very attractive. The okay thing is that during the reading process, the chat mode is actually not suitable for situations where there are many people, because there are so many people at first, and it is difficult to remember the people and the house numbers. We also have to remember the plot, the puzzle is quite complicated at first glance.

Ah Yin, do you know? I will die in nineteen days, and a few days before my death, I also want to read your outline.

But there are too few copies There are too many explanations in front The advantage is that the characters and plot are good If you keep writing, you will definitely get a masterpiece.

Frog, this opening setting is so familiar to me! I accidentally saw a novel on Zhihu back then that tempted me to spend 9 yuan to become a member 😭. The text message reminder at the beginning is exactly the same as not to look out the window! 🥺

I don't really read these novels. I read them on the train when I was bored. Damn, it's interesting.

A fast-paced dungeon can't develop many more exciting plots if you just go through it in one go, so I don't support fast-paced writing. It's pretty good to write like this now.

In fact, I feel that not many people read it has something to do with the introduction, and the Riddler did not attract interest. If it were not for this suspense film, I might have missed a good book.

I thought I would read this copy after finishing it, but your copy is too long. It's so long that I almost forgot about your book.

I've been updating every day for the past few days. I'll resume updating when I recover. Please forgive me.

First of all, affirm the author and stick to it! I still want to see it! Secondly, let's talk about the shortcomings. The descriptions when the information is revealed are a bit cumbersome and difficult to understand. For example, when the protagonist of Qishan Apartment is decrypted, some descriptions are convoluted and not clear enough. This does not mean that it should be written in a straightforward manner, but it should be easy to understand. This has been greatly improved in the Rainstorm Hotel. I personally like this type of suspenseful decryption and non-stop copy. The author's writing is also very atmospheric and engaging. I don't know if the author has thought about adding rules and weird stories to the later copies. This is quite interesting. Just a suggestion. Not much to say, just order it and save it, and then come back and read it all in one go when the hospital copy is finished.

Although I read this book and expressed my opinion once, I feel that my writing is better than most starting point authors. However, good and fire do not have the same conceptual meaning, especially for people who are very pursuing and want to write well. Writing complex and layered writing is very labor-intensive at first. Lack of positive feedback, lack of attention, lack of motivation is the same as being locked in a dark room for several months, and people will collapse. There was no shortage of successes at the beginning, such as "Starting from Gu Huo Niao", but how many Gu Huo Niao can there be on any platform? This is a matter of time and momentum. I feel that if you consider your overall strength (patience, character, writing power, etc.), And if it is only at an average level, then you should use an imperfect fragment outline. It doesn't matter if there are conflicts between the front and the back. The key is to write the small chapters in each fragment wonderfully. Like the one you saw about slaying demons and achieving immortality, many authors in my comments have said this many times. This is the current textbook. Even great writers have to learn the sense of rhythm and proportion. If you can learn the skills mentioned in the first 200-300 pages of that book, your business gains will be visible to the naked eye. Write this and then think about the copy.

I've been waiting for the end of the surgical hospital. It's been a long time to read it. My wait is finally over. I took a closer look at Goodfellas. There are more than 70 unread chapters 😵

I have read Chapter 72. Although there are some minor issues, I think the writing is quite good. It would be a pity not to continue writing. Will you start a new book?

I can't keep up the daily updates, so don't run away. What I want to watch is just to finish the hospital copy.

The author's writing is quite good, and I haven't seen any bad points so far.

I just finished reading the first copy, so it's pretty good.

Turtle, I mistook the other book for this one. That one posted an announcement about Eunuch, and I almost thought I had bought a good one. . .

This novel is very good, it's really a pity

I'm starting to wonder about the author's academic qualifications, which should be quite high 😜 The author's problem may be that he is too perfectionistic. In fact, writing novels is almost enough, and most people will not read novels with their brains in mind. As long as the logic can be roughly consistent and there are no major flaws, there is no need to make a story too complicated (see the first story for impressions).

Suspense novels should also reflect a sense of excitement. If the horror is enough but the excitement is not enough, why create such a complicated world view? The writers I have read who write about the world view are all phenomenal writers, the kind of three-scum foxtail. It is too difficult. There are too many pitfalls and I don't want to read it. I feel that there are too many people writing about weird folklore.

I have read various plots in this novel on Zhihu, and I feel that the author just forced different articles together.