The Feudal Rebellion

Although most people wouldn't be happy about the main characters, the Revolt of the Three Feudatories is a story that can be written about, since it was the last time the Han Chinese were able to turn the tide. Even though there were various uprisings afterward, none of them could stir up any major waves again.

For serialized novels, the most important elements are the protagonist and the sense of immersion. If the author's writing style and plot are good, please avoid making basic mistakes. Try not to have more than one chapter that deviates from the main character, lest a good book turn into trash.

The first four chapters were so tragic, so why does the next few chapters, after the rebirth, turn into everyday life? The table of contents also suggests it's a slice-of-life story. It seems a bit unexpected. I was just looking forward to facing challenges head-on after my rebirth, but I ended up straining my back. It would have been better if the first few chapters hadn't been written so forcefully.

In my opinion, writing about Wu Sangui's grandson is perfectly acceptable. Even if you wrote about a time-traveling Eight Banners figure, a princess, a prince, a Manchu bannerman, a Manchu slave, or even a Qing emperor rebelling against the Qing Dynasty, it would still be acceptable.

The author's writing of a book about the descendant of a traitor is a gamble, a gamble on this controversial point. But despite all the explanations, this identity remains disgusting. Wu Fang's rebellion at Shanhaiguan marked the beginning of the Han dynasty's loss of power, the start of over two centuries of enslavement and corruption in China, the loss of culture, and the beginning of…

Did the common people of the late Han Dynasty and later admire figures like Liu Bei and Zhuge Liang because they missed the powerful Han Dynasty, a time of four generations of high-ranking officials and the reigns of Emperors Huan and Ling? Did they admire their unwavering commitment to their ideals, unlike other warlords who readily massacred entire cities?

You're still a kid at this! I think I read this book a long time ago. Hurry up the pace! In this fast-paced era, you're always writing about trivial things, and the updates are slow. Go to the front lines and join your grandfather! Wu Sangui is probably nearing his end; go to the front lines and get to know the generals there. I see you've been commenting on the anti-Qing section next door; look how fast they're writing! You should write faster too!

A bunch of heroes rising up? A bunch of humanoid creatures who wouldn't dare to speak up unless they've betrayed someone three times are called "heroes"?

I feel this is a great angle. I've come up with a whole outline: I travel back in time to become Wu Sangui's grandson, born in 1655. I can then save a famous anti-Qing general, like Li Dingguo. In 1670, I raise an army against the Qing. By 1680, I've occupied the area south of the Yangtze River. I first make peace with the Qing, then simultaneously establish a foothold in the Indochina Peninsula.

Isn't the protagonist in this historical novel a bit too unpredictable? He seemed fine before his rebirth, but afterward, he suddenly became such a ridiculous buffoon.