I Woke up in a Death Game

The beginning of Turtle Soup attracted me. After all, it was the first time I saw a novel of this type that started with this game. The work is similar to the infinite horror game. The player wakes up and finds himself in a ghost place. He must obtain the game rules from the "masked man" (apostle) to survive. The author claims to have conducted logical deductions before writing. There are some parts in the previous part that seem unreasonable, poisonous, and intellectually destructive. In fact, my first impression is not serious, but I saw some readers' feedback in the chapter. All the doubts I have seen can be answered to a certain extent in chapters 40 to 46. The following is spoiler time. I strongly recommend that you read Chapter 46, otherwise you may lose a lot of fun. Chapter 46 is not much. If you can read it, it will pass in the blink of an eye, right? ————Spoiler dividing line———— First of all, let me praise you. The detail of Haozi waking up and touching her little finger is echoed later in the text. At the same time, it leads to the setting of the protagonist himself - his past as an "autistic child" and the mother of an important figure. This is a good explanation for the fact that in the previous game exchange, some of the protagonists had to go around some of the things that the reader seemed to be able to explain directly. For example, when explaining the technique of the scepter masked man Amomum villosum, he acted as the Riddler for a while and then said "there is no time to explain". The following article also reflects Yang Hao's shortcomings in communicating with others and lacking language skills. This also adds a sense of vividness and intimacy to his almost perfect player character who is knowledgeable and calm-minded. (As for the fact that his knowledge is too extensive, I can only say that he has watched "Border Town" with gusto since he was 4 years old. We can't say anything. At present, he seems to be a person similar to an autistic genius) Then there are the characters of other players, suspected to be HongKong from parallel time and space. Lin Zhengtao can cooperate well with the protagonist, and will suddenly scare the protagonist with scary jokes ("Here is 1 "Floor 4, not Floor 13" Haha, I jumped), increasing the diversity of interactions; Zhao Ye, the scarred man who appears to be a classic brainless and vicious villain at first glance, is actually a gentleman and awe-inspiring, and the character twist makes people's eyes bright; Li Qiaoran, the "working woman" who looks like a villain at the beginning, is actually quite smart, good at first aid skills, and can be a wet nurse, but the panic at the beginning enriches the character image. As for the female student Liu Zihan... She is selfish, stupid and blind. She looks like a villain and is a bit annoying. She has quickly faded out of the scene, giving the plot of a disappearance and laying the groundwork. So far, she has been handled well. (This character actually has quite a lot of similar people in reality, which is consistent with reality, but I hope the novel can deal with it more brilliantly, just like there are actually a lot of brainless villains in the novel in reality, but it would be boring if you write it like this) In addition, the small thriller and touching plot is also very powerful. "Are you okay?" This is a bit scary, especially when Li Qiaoran, who was still communicating normally a second after closing his eyes in the middle of the night, suddenly said this, and the effect was comparable to Titan's silent "hee hee". If I were writing this kind of plot at a lower level, I would have no sense of crisis at all, but the atmosphere of this book is more realistic. As for the memory of four years old, the last sentence "Mom actually cares" can't be said to be very touching, but it does have quite a charm. Sometimes small details are what keep readers reading. Finally, I am looking forward to when the "Don't run away!" On the introduction will appear. ———————— That's about it. This is the first time I write such a long comment, and I doubt whether the author is doing me any favors, but I just have more free time during the holidays + too few people are reading it, so I'm afraid the seedlings will die 🙂

The most controversial female student character at the moment Let me explain it officially I would like to apologize to the book friends who are disgusted by this character. Actually, I didn't want to write something so abstract at first. I am a newbie with no experience. Then I keep reading forums and posts to learn how to write. Then I wrote the role of a female student after being told by online teachers that I wanted to stimulate emotions. Now it seems that the mood has been lifted, but it seems to be a bit too much. I hope you won't give up on the role of a female student. Please give me a little room to make mistakes. There won't be such abstract characters in the future

Catch up on the latest chapter The author's writing method is similar to that of Ten Days End. There is an information gap, not between characters, but between readers and characters. I feel that it is difficult for us readers to solve the puzzles, but I can also accept this because a good intellectual battle is indeed difficult to write, and the three puzzles I have read so far and the protagonist's Solving the puzzles is indeed pretty good, and it feels good. From what I read, I like this work better, because the teammates are not like other novices who always target the protagonist and can't do anything. I prefer this kind of teammates who are smart enough to help the protagonist. I hope the author can work hard and stop being eunuchs. A little personal thought: Whether it is possible to solve the puzzle depends entirely on the protagonist. I think it can be better like the first puzzle. The protagonist also has unexpected points that need to be solved through the prompts and cooperation of teammates. Moreover, I think the heroine does not need to rush to write. After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the author wants to drag the heroine into it. It feels unnecessary

Why did the author write the character of a female student? It makes me sick.

The character of the protagonist is not likable. It can be explained clearly in a few sentences, or there is a better way to explain it, but it feels a bit pretentious

Please read it, book friends. Originally, there were more than 100 chapters a year ago, and 200,000 words could be put on the shelves. After the Chinese New Year, everyone had no time to read novels, and the number of reading dropped to less than 100. Without Bai Zhui, this book would have only reached 300,000 words before it was published. Now that the New Year has passed one after another, I beg you to read the data. Kneel down and beg me not to raise the book. I kneel down and thank you.

That book has been popular for so long, and I only saw a book of the same type on the starting point. At present, this book is still OK. It's no problem to take a look.

After reading the current chapter, many key answers are not generated by reasoning, but by knowledge reserves. The author likes to use the reserve of English vocabulary to solve problems, but is this a battle of wits or a show of cleverness? In other words, is the key information provided off-site, or is it naturally elicited on-site?

The author has gone on a trip and has used up all his manuscripts. It can be understood that he is a eunuch. In the future, I will generate electricity for love and follow the circumstances to update orz

It's very beautiful and follows each step step by step. The only drawback is that the updates are too slow! ? ! ?

I advise the author to write down the annoying female students as soon as possible, otherwise it will be disgusting to read.

Wonderful, really wonderful, I hope the quality can be stable

Damn, the author's writing is really good. Come on, I have to order all of them once they're on the shelves.

I think the writing is quite good, and I also like Alice on the Dying Day very much, but I have a few suggestions. I don't think the male protagonist should be made into an omniscient and omnipotent being. He should have "weaknesses", whether he doesn't know how to contact women or he is impulsive. Moreover, many game knowledge points should not be told from the protagonist's mouth. I feel that the protagonist's ability is too strong, which will lead to blurred features. I am not a professional and cannot describe it. I really like the story you wrote, I hope you will keep up the good work! !

Come on, I've found the investment, hahahaha

I like the author's wife! Let's go back and eat rice rolls (ง˙o˙)ว

Love it. I finally found this kind of witty and logical writing.

Check in and wish everyone a Happy New Year! The following are my personal opinions, which are insignificant. They are just a few suggestions for reference: Up to now, I feel that the author would have better bring up the main line. It is almost a hundred chapters, but there are too few long clues and there are a lot of pitfalls. Concerning how to get out, the relationship between reality and the game, the relationship between Star Coin Masks, or the purpose of the mastermind behind the scenes, whether everyone is dead or alive (after all, it is said that you can be resurrected infinitely outside the dungeon), and what is the situation of other people in the dungeon, this kind of general direction has not been explained. I don't mean that it has to be explained clearly, but I feel that there is not much progress in the three dungeons so far. There are many foreshadowings, but if they are not connected again, I feel that the previous foreshadowings will be forgotten. The plot is mainly driven by triggered events, which feels a bit too passive. For example, the dead man at the table at the beginning was said to be a cosplayer, and Li Qiaoran knew him. After being treated as a red herring clue, it was never mentioned again. Then the next step is to go to the park and meet the weirdos in the park, which triggers the dungeon of Han Wei. The next step is the survival crisis, so it is the dungeon of pirates sharing gold. Next, Lao Lin disappeared, and then he tried to test it with Han Wei. Maybe it's because the time in the dungeon is very short, only what happened in two or three days, so there is insufficient information, and the protagonist is more cautious and passive. However, I still feel that there are too few channels for obtaining information outside of the dungeon, and the pace is a bit slow (the pace of dungeon push is quite fast). Then the NPCs who can tell the key clues are either the same as the Riddler, or they are tight-lipped. Moreover, there is no positive feedback after winning the dungeon. The protagonist does not become stronger. He just gets some new information by accident and gets a life extension (laughs). Even if it is unlimited streaming, it will end after a certain number of times, or set a small goal first. At present, the protagonist is a bit too confused and passive. The goal is to survive. I would like to call it a survival protagonist. Maybe it was because after the dungeon ended, there could have been some relaxation and review of the plot, but then suddenly Lao Lin disappeared, and then he had to fight with his teammates and make calculations. It felt a bit too tight. After all, there are not many acquaintances in the dungeon world, and teammates have to be wary of setting up minefields and ambushes, which is a bit entangled. Personally, I think it's best to explain the matter between Han Wei and Lao Lin clearly, otherwise it would be a bit trivial to apply some pressure and spit out the toothpaste every time. In addition, the information collected every time is too fragmentary. At present, I know that the protagonist's mother is not simple, and the knife in the protagonist's hand is not simple, but the specific connection has become a riddle. There is no overall framework to explain first, and then slowly fill in the world view, it feels a bit rambling. After all, this kind of foreshadowing is a trivial clue. As long as the two copies don't correspond and the protagonist doesn't review it, it will definitely be forgotten. Even if you mention it again, it will feel cumbersome if it does not confirm very important information. Seeing that this is my current feeling, it is just a subjective opinion. If the author has already set an outline in advance and has his own ideas, please don't care about my opinion and just keep writing. I wish Mrs. Rice Roll better and better as she writes more.