From Eerie Painter to God

I wonder if I have read too many books recently. When I read the first few chapters, I always made the protagonist look like a female imp. I always felt that he would be pulled 👏 into a ball of fluff in the next second 🤐

An introduction to this book from a personal point of view: The villain is as innocent as a child, specifically referring to a real person who uses spells to fight back, but the protagonist will not kill innocent people indiscriminately. Goldfinger is a superb evil person and an ability that is suspected to be the highest level (equivalent to the kind with full skill points but only missing blue). My point of view is that it looks good and is refreshing, and I cannot accept the cautious entry of evil people. 🌹🌹🌹

The protagonist's use of combat is poor. A large amount of energy was invested in inefficient material manufacturing and distortion, and it did not play its due role at all. The protagonist is just a big pile of energy that overwhelms the opponent with sheer volume. The protagonist just bullies ordinary people. He has no way to combine the energy to defeat the enemy, resulting in being beaten by the opponent all the time. I hope the author can quickly find a way to improve the combat aspect of the protagonist. I used it poorly, and my blood pressure soared after watching it. To be honest, the total amount of energy in Sovereignty is much higher than that of the opponent. In other words, the protagonist's paper data is completely higher than that of the opponent regardless of skills and energy usage. And then he is always beaten by the opponent. Oh my god.

They are all good, but the title of the book is not very good.

Killing people and fishing are fine, but killing people without any benefit is meaningless. Isn't this a waste? These scumbags' blood sacrifices, brainwashing, and suicide bombs are all excellent materials. If they are killed directly, there will be no profit and they will take risks, which is a bit boring. In other worlds of immortality and magic, villains and murderers all know how to peel off souls, flesh, bones, etc. To make materials, you~

The style of the title tends to be a supernatural or semi-supernatural fast-food article (I even came in as a fan of Mysterious Resurrection), but the content of the book is standard villain, fantasy, Cthulhu style, which needs to be savored carefully. The two audiences are very different. It is recommended to choose a book title with a stronger "fantasy" flavor and an epic color (such as Sword of the Dawn, The Overturned Tower, etc.)

Fast forward to Nanami getting a hypnosis APP to train the male kid hard 🤓

He is already 17 or 18 years old, but he is always called a child. Especially after more than 40 chapters, women started to join the plot. No matter what you do, you can't say he is a child, especially after adding some kissing and ambiguous plots.

His personality is a bit ordinary. He seems very noble for being able to hurt anyone for himself, but in fact, anyone can do it, or has the ability to dominate everything. Anyone can do it. The only difference is the length of time. Compared with Zhenren Gu, it is still far behind. Those masterpieces rely on a Spiritual support can be for eternal life, for family, for the ethnic group. The type can infect people, or it can be an epic myth, or a book about Gu Zhenren's chess game between all living beings. To be honest, when I see the protagonist, the first time I see this protagonist, I am not afraid but want to kill him and take everything away from him. His character and abilities are not much higher than others, but he is just a "lucky person" in the "Gold Finger" system. As a brainless novelist, he can squeeze into three stars in the Hall of Fame, but four or five stars are far from enough. Just like the Lord of Mystery, the protagonist's final outcome is to pay him all the money he spent along the way. Price, I can directly read your article. The protagonist is all kinds of awesome. In the middle, he is a roadside ant but very polite to ordinary people. If he encounters any danger of death along the way, he will have a golden finger to save the danger. In the end, he will crack all the secrets and become the creator who controls everyone. That's probably it.

The gap between you as a mentor and other characters who appear is a bit too big. This made-up person is just like a real person. Even my character is no different from the original one except for the new additions I made, and there is no obvious decline in my thinking ability. Very, very outrageous. What is the hidden world boss in Novice Village?