Climbing the Sequences in an Infinite-Flow World

I have seen a sequence about the death of my wife before, I wonder if anyone would dare to write it out?

The dialogue with the mastermind behind the scenes was a bit downgraded, but the rest was fine.

I have now read the chapters at the end of the Demon World, Food and Grass. The original world setting is good, especially the demon "Evil Mouth". I like it very much. Overall Food and Grass is on the higher side. Compared with other infinite streams, this one is more kind-hearted. The protagonist wants to help all teammates survive. In the copy, this is nothing. First of all, the relationship between the protagonist and the supporting characters is a drag. To be honest, it doesn't seem to be a drag in the demon dungeon, but at least in my opinion, as long as the strong man maintains the mentality when killing the dust demon at the beginning, there is no big problem in clearing the level with the two protagonists. This shows the role of the other three. Only the Scud girl is more useful. She provides a fire extinguisher and retrieves a broken arm. After the strong man dies, The demons are basically the protagonist breaking the rules, taking risks to set up ambushes, challenging bosses, returning to the team of three who failed to kill the remaining corrosive demons after waiting for a long time, killing and upgrading to obtain key abilities to kill the ape-man demons. On the surface, it seems that the other people are doing something, but except for the Scud Girl who did two more critical things, the other two are almost purely accessories. In terms of character and plot - although the protagonist is kind-hearted, most of their survival depends on the protagonist. So after leaving the dungeon, are a few of them still entangled with each other? In the one or two chapters after the end, several people had completely inconsistent ideas, and some were dissatisfied with the protagonist. Why was I thinking? Without the protagonist, all the demons are dead in the first place. The protagonist is still actively saying that after the next dungeon is over, he will help two hunters with only one real name to obtain them. I was looking at the Demon dungeon. It was unreasonable for the protagonist to want his pendant teammates to eat the food that came from him. However, the author probably felt bad about it later and let the protagonist kill them anyway. I haven't read the later dungeons yet. I just want to know if the protagonist took the two of them there. There is not enough effort to get the hunter Chun Chun. If the protagonist still wants to overflow with the Virgin's Heart, wastes precious space with two pendants, and doesn't even know whether the mission will be the same, then Chun Chun will be the nanny.

Sequences can be promoted. The ones that cannot be promoted are not like sequences, but more like entries.

This last copy feels really weird. In many articles, the winner takes all is a great pleasure. But sometimes it doesn't look so cool. I can't tell the difference, but I feel like this strange feeling came back when I looked at this new copy. I can't explain why, I just felt that the final ending was not that good. The protagonist survived and got a double real name, but it didn't feel satisfying at all. I read the same thing in the book reviews, and I felt like something was wrong. Can it be changed to basically all the teammates surviving? Or at the end of the next chapter, what about teammates who are in the same camp as the protagonist and have no benefits but still survive because of the protagonist's victory? I feel like it would be a better experience if my teammates could survive. If there are other changes to the law, you are welcome to discuss them together. My level is also relatively limited. Another point that makes me uncomfortable is that the author made the main world too stressful. The dungeon had a narrow escape, but when it came out, it still had to struggle for survival, without even a moment of stability. Under such great pressure, it makes me really tired to see everyone scheming and betraying each other.

The author has made a mistake about the audience. Those who hated the protagonist and saved people have already left in the first two stories. Now most of the people left behind are those who like the protagonist to save people. You have another one except the protagonist who is wiped out, offending both sides.

Think about some leaders in the company who direct people to work, but end up taking all the credit without leaving any money for their subordinates. This is pure CS behavior. And that's what the protagonist did, asking his teammates to block the knife and stall for time. In the end, even without his real name, his life was not saved, and he evacuated beautifully. It's not like the protagonist is benefiting from it. The plot arrangement makes it feel like others are benefiting from the protagonist's body, which makes people feel cheating.

The setting and construction capabilities are both good. I suggest the author create more original world views.

Your recommendation on my daily guide is to stay up late and watch the unlimited stream three times but it is still not enough. When I clicked in and saw that there were only 64 chapters, it was a bit overwhelming. Now I can completely believe that I stayed up late and watched it three times. I feel like I can even watch it ten times if I try hard.

The updates in the past two days have been uncomfortable to read, but the latest chapter explains the reason. I thought about it and understood why you are a new author and readers don't trust you. When a plot with a serious poisonous point appears, the first tendency is that you wrote badly, not that you are setting up a plot. It is obvious that you have not gained the trust of readers.