A Tale of Youth in the Heisei Conan Detective World

Conan... Sigh. I haven't watched it in ages since Rum messed up again. I guess the balance between the red and black sides is off now. My last hope is to see the black side in fanfiction... Which side is the protagonist on? It's important, but not that important. It depends on what you do.

The dual-soul concept is really inappropriate for yuri (lesbian) stories, and the interaction between the two consciousnesses has been decreasing lately, even though that's supposed to be the highlight of the book.

It's best to mark the inner monologues between the protagonist and the original owner of the body, as they can be confusing at times, and you might need to remember who is speaking. 🤓

It's so confusing. The plot jumps between running for their lives and participating in a case. Also, the dialogue boxes are a bit hard to read. Using quotation marks for dialogue and inner monologues for conversation would make it feel more familiar.

It's all talk and personal feelings, and there are two people in your heart. If you don't use some clear markers to distinguish them, who can tell the difference?

It's too chaotic, and the pacing is weird. Overall, there's nothing wrong with it, but there's also something wrong with it. 😒

This book is quite good, but the characters are confusing, so you really have to carefully read the context to distinguish them.

The protagonist's fake death has been exposed. Is this how we're going to go back to a coming-of-age story? Will he have to fake his death again?

It feels so messy 😵

One thought: Continuous conversations that are too long can easily become confusing. And then... Update soon!