My Attribute Points Can Only Be Added to My Sister

The book is okay, the new author is okay. Although there are many shortcomings, the main reason is that the sister is too stupid and always gets frustrated, and the portrayal of her is a bit poor. You want to describe the younger sister who is more yandere, but the reversal of the previous story is okay, and the cement heart of the protagonist? How do you look at other people's butts to be obscene? Write more steadily 😁😁😁

It's actually difficult to write a nurturing novel. The main pleasure is training and feedback. It's like playing a game. You are the player and your sister is the character you play. How do you make the character bring positive feedback to the player? At least one thing is very important, which is to reflect the shared honor and disgrace between the two. For example, if the character obtains the best equipment, you get the money converted from the best equipment, and you use the money to improve your own food. This is positive feedback. You improve your sister, and she brings you benefits. This is the most basic thing about this type of book. If you can grasp it well, it can be a masterpiece.

My sister finally got up after lying down for so long...

If you want to write about a harem, just write about it. If you want to accept girls, just accept them. It talks about a single female protagonist without falling in love, but also writes about ambiguous plots where the male protagonist has affairs with several beautiful women, and the author also makes pornographic remarks. If you have this idea, you can say it directly. I feel that it is poisonous to be a single female protagonist.

I really like this setting, but I couldn't explain what the author wrote, so I endured reading a few chapters and gave up.

Let me first talk about why I think it is written too much. In fact, with the added points of the girl as the selling point, the protagonist should avoid fighting in the game. In the future, he can save the girl and explode, but it is redundant in the early stage. Secondly, it is a bit disgusting to kill the protagonist's sister because of the soul bead's betrayal at the beginning. The high-level hunter could have chosen to meet and take half of the gold bead, leave the silver bead to his sister and agree to keep it secret from each other. Moreover, the guide to the fog is confusing. The cave should have multiple strategies. For example, if you find the core and destroy it, the fog horizon will collapse. Or you can defeat the boss to seize control of the core and make it a private secret realm for free entry. To put it simply, killing the mobs can reduce or inhibit the spread of the fog. Next, let's talk about the messy part. Because there is too much nonsense and psychological activities, it seems very strenuous, and the mind jumps too fast. Take revenge for the sister, just do it and it's over, and then tell stories and waffle and then torture slowly. Anyway, there are many similar ones, which is very inconsistent.

I named my sister and then said myself

In the beginning and the first dungeon, my sister's participation was not high and she focused on expanding the world view. Starting from the second dungeon, my sister's sense of presence becomes higher~

Why? No one is reading?

The settings are pretty good, just a little green.

I would like to call this type of chaotic novel. I would definitely not be able to stand it when I was normal. Fortunately, I am not normal now.

The first sofa

3 Points out of 10 A work of necessity to relieve boredom Not trash but has no merit

So pretty! Update soon! ! ! ! !

The settings are good, let's take a look 🙂