The Beautiful Girl Went to the Wrong Grave, I Climbed Out to Correct It

I tipped 100 points just to write a review. There is no follow-up to Huangya Village. It suddenly stopped. I didn't want to continue reading.

Changing the source novel and plagiarizing the character settings of various mysterious revivals and animations, it always feels familiar.

I just finished reading the free chapter. I was shocked when the heroine found out that she was being followed and was worried that she would be exposed. She even wore a hat and didn't cover her face, even if she was in disguise. She also transferred money to others using her real-name account... Then I was worried that the supernatural bureau would find out that there was something wrong with me, and a person appeared in the supernatural show. A former employee of the Supernatural Bureau at the scene had a huge amount of property from unknown sources in her account after the incident. The female colleague who sent her out went crazy and didn't even change her clothes when she rescued her colleague... Who is the unidentified female expert? It's so hard to guess. The Supernatural Bureau certainly can't guess it 🙂

Author, you are really off track. Most people are attracted by beautiful girls. If you use your body to do this, you are wrong. Normally it would be you who lends your power to the beautiful girl. Lend him a little bit, and then the beautiful girl will become invincible and powerful, and then many people will worship this beautiful girl, and then this aspect will reflect the strength of the protagonist, but the protagonist's strength can always be unfathomable. You can upgrade infinitely to fight monsters, and you can earn at least 1,000 chapters, so why do it yourself? Not only has the level of prowess been reduced, but many cycles of pretentiousness have also been eliminated. To put another restriction, the heroine needs to strengthen herself through the dungeon so that she can control more of your power. She will fight her way through, passers-by will be amazed, sects will win over her, villains will spy on her, relatives and friends will trace her curiously, and various forces will dig into the heroine's life story. Branch lines such as multi-party inquiries, scheming, malicious kidnapping, and treasure grabbing will all be generated continuously. Then the protagonist has been hiding behind the scenes. Every time the heroine gains your power, leaps and bounds to kill monsters, and makes a comeback in desperate situations, every highlight will prove the terror of the backer in disguise. This sense of achievement of increased power, this hidden show-off can be repeated endlessly for 2000 chapters without any problem. Then the heroine occasionally leaks bits and pieces of information related to the protagonist, which can not only pique the readers' curiosity, but also continue to pave the way for long-term foreshadowing. I have thought about the finale for you. The protagonist is the eye of the source of darkness. Wherever you are, there are monsters in the world. The heroine opens the eye. In the end, she seals you with her own hands and you die. It ends with regret. The last two chapters broke the reader's heart with tears. On the last afternoon, the heroine returned to her grandfather's grave. The protagonist's voice suddenly appeared, "Stop crying, if you cry again..." The heroine was stunned suddenly, and her eyes stared at the grave... Perfect ending.

It's okay to talk about it on the Internet, but in reality, who doesn't want to become a beautiful girl and kill ghosts?

Day, Chapter 31 is charged?

…. Has this novel recently been made into an AI animation on a certain website? Very similar😰🙂

The male protagonist and female protagonist feel like Huo Huo and Uncle Tai in Star Railway

From the moment you enter the underground and encounter other body fragments, the plot becomes more and more boring, and the heroine becomes insignificant.

There is a very interesting thing in this kind of book. One is that the invisibility of party organizations is almost non-existent. And who is commanding the guns?

It's quite fun to watch without thinking, but the review is that it's both father-in-law and weird.

Overall it's okay, but it doesn't feel good enough

I personally feel that this book is a bit watery, and Lin Yu's price is too low.

I like it so much. By the way, when will the heroine's combat power be upgraded? And don't abuse Keke. She's so good. Big boost, author.

It's one of the best-written fanfics.

Quick update. Can I update a hundred chapters in one day?

Why do I feel like I have to wait when I see something exciting? I feel like quitting... It's been a long time... The author doesn't know how to cut off the thread, right?

This book is interesting, but the author shouldn't give up.

The author is great. I came to read the novel from the AI ​​short drama. I got into it at first because of Xu Yiyi's cheating, but as the plot progressed, I saw Xu Yiyi as a growing heroine and Lin Yu as a cool cheating hero. I liked both sides very much (I personally like to watch this kind of plot with two protagonists with different routes). After reading your original synopsis, I think it's really good. Isn't the plot in which the female protagonist can upgrade, fight monsters, and grow into a new boss under the guidance of the male protagonist step by step a gender-transformed version of the male channel? Wouldn't it work if the gender was changed to female? I don't think so. Being able to see two protagonists with two different styles and story backgrounds in a book is the best test of the author's skill. Personally, I feel that the heroine's growth rate and promotion of fighting are not detailed enough to give everyone a sense of satisfaction. I have an opinion. It is really important to write the fighting scenes smoothly and fluently in the novel. Of course, this is my personal understanding and small suggestions. I hope that you will not be easily swayed by readers and write your own good works 🙂

Don't read it, everyone. The author can't write anything at all and it will be cut off.

It's a good book, but I really can't understand why the heroine's best friend is given so much space as a supporting character. It's completely unnecessary. I'll be honest, except for some selling lilies, the other functions are completely invisible. I don't know why it's written like this.

I gave up. After reading hundreds of chapters of the invincible stream, the protagonist's performance suddenly dropped sharply, and even the invincible stream was no longer invincible.

Author: Although I know you mainly read on QQ, when you occasionally read Qidian book reviews, don't be disturbed by the settings of these bad reviews.

When will I capture the other half of the ghost law, and the fragment fusion book friend will kick me again, and there will be a bunch of same-level or even high-level fragments inexplicably. What is the meaning of the ghost law that I just held down before and threatened to fish, and after 100 chapters, I can't hold it down and forcefully open it at 55. The ghost law that the whole world wants to snatch has been studied by a roadside scientist before, and the scientist was resurrected when he remembered the B grid? The plot arrangement is also amazing. The Ghost Law was actually not known to be important at first, but then it became clear that it was important. After a while, I stopped studying it. I wanted to seal the fishing, but I just knew the importance of sealing it. I went to get it. When I went to get it, I happened to encounter a supernatural game that could erase the rules. I could suppress it with 0 frames and just didn't hit it hard. Hand... This plot is driven entirely by coincidence. At the same time, the protagonist's B-block combat power is still going crazy. It's really impossible to watch the two-pronged approach What's even more difficult is that I finally got the half of the hand. I eliminated the eye fragments and gave me a fake control. I can't hold it anymore. It feels like rewriting the outline from the ground up.

I feel that it is getting worse in the later period, and the protagonist is not that powerful. Has his combat power been weakened, and it does not look like a cool novel. I hope the author can restore his previous skills, come on 👍👍👍👍👍

The setting at the beginning is pretty good, the protagonist provides combat power, and no one is a loser. The heroine provides emotional intelligence and is responsible for dealing with major forces. Come on, change it

I have no interest in Xu Yiyi. She only needs to be a cheerleader, a war reporter, a mascot, and occasionally play a role. The essence of Invincible is that the protagonist is Invincible. The heroine advances the mission and gives emotional value, and she does not need to be a silly and sweet virgin. I want to see Lin Yu (Po) being invincible and recovering small fragments like a grandfather beating his grandson. The other fragments should not be so powerful. I would rather write a story in which one or more foreign enemies took advantage of him and broke Lin Yu (Po), but Lin Yu (Po) has immortality and scattered small fragments all over the place. After Po collected the fragments, he was invincible and took revenge.

I can't stand it anymore since I turned into pieces 😥

The direction of the story seems to be that Mr. Lin is the Hades, and he should be a very powerful character, but later he may be disintegrated for some reasons, and then each part becomes a soul fragment, and each soul fragment is very powerful. In the end, I think this soul should be put together, and the heroine will become a very powerful character in the end. But can the author not always ask for leave, and then don't always feel a little slow-paced? The detailed description is quite good now, but the plot is too slow.

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