Above the White Night

I always feel that the author's descriptive ability is good and bad, just like an evolved Pokémon slowly degenerating.

There is a price to gain ability. This kind of novel is highly unified. There is no need to pay the price for pig's feet.

How many elements can be included in this esoteric cult simulator? It is best to have a stream-of-consciousness style like the esoteric cult, instead of turning it into a fantasy with a different skin.

It mainly tells the story of an ordinary person who became a esoteric cultist and finally became Si Chen. The world the protagonist lives in is an extremely polarized world, with polarization of mysterious substances, polarization of wealth, and polarization of ideology. The main theme of this article is struggle and redemption. The pace is slowed down in order to pave the way, and there may be a certain sense of fragmentation (this is a response from readers. This is something I did not expect when I wrote it. I originally wanted to express the contrast.) In addition, this book is already a bit overwhelming, but I will finish it even if the results are not good later, but I will streamline the content to the greatest extent.

The novel was okay at first, but things have changed since I went back to prison, and I don't recognize him anymore. And at the beginning, you kept saying that you want to survive and nothing else matters, but in the middle, you suddenly become great, you want to save District 13, and you want to change District 13, and you will not leave even if you die. At first, you are hiding, keeping your identity secret, and slowly developing, suddenly you announced in a high profile that I am the secret cult, and I will take control of District 13. At the beginning, you joined the secret cult for knowledge and freedom, and were ready to run away at any time, but suddenly you are bound to the secret cult, and you will not leave until death. This sense of separation is too strong, there is no slight change in the middle, it feels like I suddenly changed someone to write. And I don't understand why I can't leave District 13. It's because I haven't been robbed since I was a child. Now I still want to contribute to this place. I have always said that I want to see the outside world. For a few reasons To protect the safety of your brothers and sisters, you are leaving, and you are suddenly ready to sacrifice yourself to save District 13, and then you are building a power station and a real estate company. A miner has been in such a dark place within a few years. How can he become so aware and not see any change? Is it true that repaying evil with kindness, living a great life, but also preparing for the freedom of death? Or maybe someone suddenly changed the person to write it, or the outline was not done well and I was forced to change it so I could continue writing. If I couldn't control the grand setting, then I would make the map smaller. It would end at the end and waste my money. It was really...

I couldn't sleep anyway, so I read carefully for half the night, and then I saw the words in the secret book. There were two words "eating people" written all over the book.

I originally wanted to say that the twists and turns in this book are all blunt, but I can't say it's blunt, it just feels like every twist is inexplicable. On the whole, it is very interesting, but the content inside feels inexplicable and logical. I can't understand it. It just adds a lot of hidden content, and then comes out with inexplicable results. There is a lot of content like this in it, and I feel like I can't understand it.

Another thing that really makes me feel speechless is that I don't know how the author wrote about the monetary system here. It makes people at the bottom and the top feel the same way, feeling like they have no money. When I can't afford food, I can earn twenty, thirty, thirty or forty a day. When you get to the top, spending 1,000 yuan can make people feel that a mid-level position is worth it to others. The most outrageous thing is that the protagonist gave that person 500 yuan. Then the author wrote that the person said that with this 500 yuan, he can return to the lighthouse. He went all the way from the lighthouse to the 13th District and worked hard for so long just to earn 500 yuan. He is still a high-paid person in the 13th District. Waiting for the content about currency, I am really speechless.

The protagonist has an awkward personality. After being threatened at first, he still insists on not letting go, in order to compensate. On the one hand, I dare not take risks to take care of my partners in the orphanage. In Chapter 18, he started to express in front of his friends that he could mine to the top 10 and so on. In short, I am cowardly and reckless from time to time Chapter 40, Fragments of Evil Name. . . Okay, the plot looks awkward and strange.

Tags: Aboriginal protagonist, secret sect, fragmented description Characteristics of the protagonist: The reversal of the cost acting on him or the improvement of inferior foreign objects, the nature of the reversal that has not been revealed yet Other cheats: a book that simply explains what happens around him (providing a stage for the author to explain the details) The reversal of the cost is interesting It's unbelievable to go there, but the world of esoteric sects built from scratch is full of unknowns. Knowledge and foreign objects require resources and opportunities to obtain. The reversal of the price is more to allow the protagonist to progress faster and more steadily, and not to become disabled due to poor use of inferior foreign objects Style of this article: 1. Amid various undercurrents of conspiracies, the protagonist moves forward with difficulty. 2. In a polarized world, external conflicts often leave the protagonist with no choice. The protagonist who wants to be confused and wants to further feel his own changes has no time to be confused and no room to be confused. 3. The plot is relatively concise and the plot is compact. 4. The explanation of esoteric knowledge is limited. People who have not understood the relevant background knowledge may be more confused, but they can also think about issues at the same level as the protagonist. Suitable reading groups: 1. People who are struggling in society and have decision-making power. The protagonist is in a fog, and it is difficult to know the truth. The struggle process of guessing and explaining is very empathetic. 2. Tantric enthusiasts. 3. Fans of indigenous protagonists. Advantages: 1. If the protagonist's reversal of cost is considered to be because the protagonist, like the previous sage, is a Mansu creature who does not know that he is a Mansu creature, all the characters in this book follow the rules of society and the world, behave reasonably, and have clear goals or motives. 2. There are many foreshadowings, and the plots are intertwined to lead to the final result. Disadvantages: 1. There are a lot of typos. 2. Various things happened very compactly, but the author wrote very slowly, which caused the readers to take a long time to see the follow-up of an event in reality. It became a problem whether they could remember the previous events when the foreshadowing appeared. PS: The sudden imprisonment of the protagonist really gave me a sense of déjà vu as when I watched geass go berserk in the first season of Lelouch. It was sudden and reasonable, and accidental and inevitable. I think the recently explained source of Inspector Ying's affection for the protagonist should be placed earlier.