
My Cultivation Narrator Is Acting Strange
我的修行旁白有诡异
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- Completed
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- 2.0M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 1y ago
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- Qidian
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A ten-year veteran reader's personal thoughts. Every book gets a long, detailed review discussing its strengths and weaknesses. This list mainly features xianxia and fantasy, with some urban, historical, and other works as well. I recommend both promising new stories and classics. Ratings are based on stars, with six stars as the maximum: ☆☆☆☆☆☆. The ratings place greater weight on the setting. Review criteria: 1. Prose. I don't recommend books with bad writing. Maximum: two stars. ☆☆ 2. Setti
Old Bai's Good Books: Quality Over Quantity
Many good books are buried for various reasons, and I hope this list can help them, as well as those suffering from a reading drought. It includes all kinds of categories, including obscure books and beginner-friendly ones. I do not need everyone to agree with me, so just pick out what you like. I also hope that readers who share my interests can find good books here. By the way, what I dislike most are formulaic plots, so I do not enjoy anything too conventional. If you are tired of the usual f
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It's quite interesting. It's an abnormal system. It always encourages pigs to follow cool writing routines, dress up, and become evil. It just doesn't teach good things. Fortunately, the protagonist has a correct outlook on life. I really hope that such interesting novels will continue to have a positive outlook on things. It's nice to have a kinder protagonist... Don't let temporary pleasure sway your own views.
I think the reason for this rhythm is that Luo Qinghan ate too lightly. For a character like Luo Qinghan, if she wants to be accepted by readers, she must be embarrassed. The harder she talks at the beginning, the more fierce the ridicule, and the harder she is slapped in the face by the protagonist in the end, which can bring satisfaction to readers. But so far, I feel that the direct slap or punishment this character received from the protagonist is relatively too light, and the feedback received by readers cannot meet the author's expected effect Personally, my opinion of this character has declined.
Weirdness can't be eliminated? Mysterious revival, right? ? ?
Even the universe can be destroyed, what else can't be destroyed? Not to mention just weird! ! ! It is said that what cannot be destroyed is just that the power level and dimension are not enough: Can the law of cause and effect weapon destroy the weird? Can the weirdness be eliminated by erasing it from the long river of time? Can weirdness be eliminated by dismantling, tampering with, and plundering the rules formed by weirdness? ! We cannot eliminate weirdness from the material level and energy level, so we must eliminate weirdness from the rule level and conceptual level, and even eliminate weirdness from its origin. I despise the setting that mysterious recovery cannot eliminate ghosts
By chapter 30 or 40, I was completely persuaded to quit. It was too random, smelly, and long, and the protagonist's temperament changed drastically ( ̄ェ ̄;). This way of writing was too toxic for me and I couldn't persist.
Shennong's post, only personal opinions, no spoilers
The fusion is weird, but it doesn't fall into the cliche. The foreshadowing is far-reaching, and every plot conflict has a weird impact. The chaotic description without any pretense is weird. Closed loop of time and logic In the early stage, the protagonist fell into the eyes of a certain big shot and was trained for a reason. Don't quit just because the protagonist is inexplicably helped and trained by a certain big shot. The secret will be revealed at the end of the first big map. Form a closed loop of time and logic. The plot is clever and interesting. It is a rare book of fairy grass. Before reading, please understand some of the poisonous points. If you can accept it, it is worth reading. It is a well-conceived fairy tale. 1 The protagonist is a double-standard dog who joins forces with his master to rob the Taoist door that will help but not harm the protagonist. Then they would pretend to be orderly, chivalrous and righteous, and accuse others of taking advantage of others. Only the state officials were allowed to set fires, but the people were not allowed to light lamps. (Others give money, but the victim cannot keep the medicine, and cannot return to the safe zone alive without being robbed) 2 The author carries private goods, but because of what the protagonist does to enjoy cheats, he still has to escape from others on the moral high ground 3 A little poison in the early stage, the immortal will collapse and go crazy because of the old age and death of the people around him. 4 The author wants to talk about big principles in a didactic way. But it failed to get to the point, and it seemed that the protagonist was untenable. Every major plot has a section.
Who do I match?
After watching eight hours a day, wouldn't he... Not play games for a while?
Some ideas
The chapters about the Lu family were a bit uncomfortable to read and made me have a bad impression of the protagonist. The sudden pursuit of righteousness is very different from the evil protagonist in the previous article. Whether it was the last speech in the Quiet Realm, it was still in the Lu family. It's not that this kind of heroic feeling is not good, but it is not well created and feels very stiff. The protagonist seems to have suddenly changed his personality and become full of justice. Personally, I feel that the author's shortcomings are also in this aspect. Among the characters who appear, whether it is Lu Qingshan or Bai Lu, they don't feel particularly three-dimensional (not like living people but labeled NPCs). In other words, it is very fragmented. The feeling of being divided per capita. What attracts me most about this book is the various settings and stories. But this is just the skeleton. The contradictory three-dimensional image that human nature grows under this situation is the flesh and blood. Only represents my personal opinion. If what I say is wrong, please feel free to comment.
To be honest, it's well written, and it's not as frustrating as others have said. I feel that I enjoyed reading it. I still recommend reading it yourself. It's very well written.
Suddenly I found a book that automatically subscribed, so I came back and took a look. The writing was a bit immature, there was no hard copy, and I guess there was no outline at the end. It was just about letting yourself go. No wonder it's always been level 1.
Ambitious but not much, rather a bit chaotic
This book is okay, but the grades are a bit low now. The number of words is too low to get out of the circle of lv1, but it will probably be difficult for beginners to read. It's a bit contradictory to read. I'm writing about group portraits and having a harem at the same time. I'm talking about general principles at one time and abstraction at the other. It's not like a white text or a divine text. It's a bit awkward to be stuck in the middle. The characters are actually well-established. The reverse and funny elements actually ruin the character. The setting of the protagonist also makes the protagonist unable to stand up. I would say that Master Lu is better at standing up. Master Lu actually handles it very well. There are few clones that can have such a strong setting that does not destroy the character. As for the plot, which is a bit weak, the long and continuous plot is a little better. The subsequent conflicts are quite inexplicable, and the plot also revolves around a strange thing one by one, which feels like an infinite script. There are a bit too many stitches, which is not a joke, but the borrowed parts such as settings are a bit obvious. I can only say that the integration is not good and the price has dropped a bit. Actually, this is a good book for fun, but I still read it with contradictions. I'm not sure about the point of separation. It may be that the fight was bloody and life-threatening, or it may be that the world view seems complex but a bit empty, or it may be that the author's understanding of the small insights mixed in is not deep and unsystematic. But I'm pretty sure I don't really like harems. But the real problem is that this book is probably quite difficult for beginners to read. Actually, it's pretty good. There aren't many good books out there now.