My Junior Sister Is a Sword Immortal

Stop scolding, stop scolding, you will be stupid if you scold the child again😓 If you have any problems, please point it out, the author will correct it But don't complain about the whole book after reading two chapters, at least read more, it's too miserable😵

After reading a lot of chapters, I really feel that it is average and low-level. Hmm, it is very low-level. The first point is that the levels are ambiguous. There is no clear level comparison between the protagonist and the junior sister, and there is no highlight of the gap between levels. You can say that the protagonist is strong. Everyone you meet is not lower than the protagonist, and they are not older than the protagonist. Call him weak, but he can challenge an entire sect alone. And there is almost no depiction of fighting. The second point is that the consciousness is vague. The description of the appearance of the characters and the environment is brief, and it can even be said that there is no more at all. The appearance is stunning, delicate, and handsome, and the environment is either gorgeous or dilapidated. The best one is magnificent. Fighting is just like a card game. I produce a first-grade one, and you produce a second-grade one, oh! I win, I produce a first-grade enchanted sword intent, and you produce a first-grade enchanted sword, oh! Won again. To be honest, I find it awkward 🙄 Third, the positioning is vague. What type of article is this? There are no girls, no adventures, no upgrades, and no pretentious slaps. These are all necessary for a good novel. The pros and cons depend on how you can write it more logically while controlling the plot structure. Daily? There is almost no description of life, and the relevant characters change too frequently. Martial arts group portrait? I feel like the author had this intention but the protagonist was portrayed alone, let alone a group portrait. The fourth is the characterization, which has no characteristics at all. Let's just say the protagonist who has the most characterizations. Let's not talk about the appearance. There is no personality. People have said that you can't let the tiger go back to the mountain. If you want your life, you can still walk away lightly. Admire, admire! The newly recruited junior sister was assassinated. I thought I was going to get a copy of the killer organization, but I didn't even mention it. I didn't look too far ahead to see if there were any arrangements. Also, I have been reading books for so many years. When people accept apprentices, they are just apprentices. This is to accept junior brothers and junior sisters. I don't understand why😣? Alas~, in short, there are still many poisonous points. Logically, even the theme buying points, the relationship between senior brothers and sisters are all very flawed, so I won't list them one by one. I have also written novels, and I know it is not easy to keep them updated every day. But now that I have written it and persisted, I hope the author can write better and better.

First of all, I think the protagonist is good at dealing with people. He can cook, make money, and remember ancient poems. Bonus points. The plot is also smooth. It's pretty good Then I've read Chapter 38 now. I haven't read the rest yet. I'm here to talk about my feelings so far. One is that the protagonist doesn't keep silent when he gets into arguments with others. This point has been debated endlessly by book friends. Some say Bai Lian Flowers, there are also people who say they are good at handling people White Lotus is definitely not that good, but I really don't know how to deal with people. I offended a person with a bright future, and that person left without asking for anything. Will I be afraid of that person's revenge in the future? According to my thinking, I am a villain, and I am definitely afraid. I will either give gifts to eliminate disasters, or I will ask the killer organization in the world to get to know him. But the conflicted person did nothing but lamented, and the protagonist also did nothing but pretended. The protagonist actually let go of the bully that overwhelmed the protagonist's face. What can he say? The protagonist is very open-minded. But, but, open-minded? I'm really speechless. The protagonist is the one who wants to establish a sect. People are so offended. The protagonist doesn't use their resources? Is this the kind of precious rivers and lakes resources that are waiting to be forcibly bought and sold with money? Or when establishing a sect, destroy others and rob the entire sect? Is it possible that he relied on his own opportunities to gather the resources of all the disciples in the sect? To put it bluntly, I want to write about the magnanimous heroic demeanor, but I have not considered the responsibilities that the leader of a group has to bear. What should I do at this time? The answer is the system. Many book friends don't like system texts, not because system texts are necessarily not good-looking, but because the system will forcibly make up for problems that the author has not considered, which makes people look weird The second one is the skills obtained from the system. I don't know if it's because I can't read them at a glance or something. It seems to me that the protagonist directly uses the skills given by the system for actual combat without testing them himself? I was so smart before and suddenly my IQ dropped? Of course, if I missed it, I accept criticism and insults, so I'm sorry in advance The third one is perfume. If it's a modern perfume, it should contain alcohol. If it's an ancient perfume, it's toilet water distilled by alchemists from flowers and plants. Assuming it's a modern perfume, then alcohol should come before perfume. Why can't the protagonist make distilled wine? I'm not very professional and don't understand. I hope you can correct me. If it is the kind of perfume made by alchemists using flowers and plants, the insight of being born as a prince should not be too surprising before the protagonist explains it in detail, but that reaction. . . That's all my opinion. In fact, there is also a blunt and foreshadowing plot in Daozi, which is a bit uncomfortable but harmless. I stopped reading this book after reading Chapter 38, and there is no book poisoning. If you forcefully ignore this awkward feeling and stop thinking, it is good to read and pass the time. It is food and grass, but it is too far away from good grass. I hope the author will write better in the next book. I will slip away first and give you 3 recommendation votes before I leave. I hope I won't offend you

Poison, others have the intention to kill you. The villain made a bet and lost and dispersed to cultivate. It's better for you. You have become merciful and exempted the villain from the bet punishment. What kind of protagonist? It's disgusting.

I feel bad. After reading so many comments, many of them criticize the author. I don't know why. Is it so bad? In my opinion, there may be some logic problems in the early stage of this book. The character description is not very good, but in the later stage it is okay. However, many people cannot see this and just make blind comments. What qualifications do you have to comment on the quality of a book? Now that I have seen the climax, I have read everything the author has updated. After waiting for seven days, the author will update a chapter. The thousands of words in my mind have no explanation. I only have one request, that I hope it will be updated soon. If others don't like it, it doesn't mean I don't like it. I hope the author can read my comments and comfort me.

People say that if you let the tiger go back to the mountain, there will be endless troubles. I made it clear that I was going to kill you, and then you didn't say anything and just left after winning?

I feel that the protagonist is quite miserable now. Once he goes to the Western Regions, his friends will become Buddhas in one thought; if he goes to the Five Poisons once, his friends will become saints in one thought; next time he will be a Taoist disciple and become a Taoist in one thought. The master who raised him for many years just wanted to make him a sword cauldron.

The writing style is still good, but there is a reason why it is not popular, and the logic is completely clueless If you just see someone and accept him into the sect, you should accept him as a junior fellow apprentice, a direct disciple! ! ! I have never seen such a weird thing The most important point is that as a cheater, he has never been able to catch up with the wild junior sister. I am convinced.

The daily guide is full of crap, I'm done with it

It's nothing like a fairy bar, but it's a martial arts bar where you make rice, salt, sauce, vinegar and tea every day. After a few days in the world, you quickly build a sect to tie yourself tightly. It's impossible to see what you want to write. If you want to write about a system, just write about it. There will also be some audiences. Those who don't like the system have already given up on the system when it appears. Those who like the system are angry when they see you not bubbling at all. . . I really admire you for being able to offend people on both sides.