My Junior Sister Is a Sword Immortal

Stop yelling! Stop yelling! If you keep yelling, the child will become mentally impaired. 😓 Please point out any problems, and the author will revise them. But don't criticize the whole book after reading just two chapters! At least read a bit more, it's too much! 😵

Having read quite a few chapters, I honestly feel it's below average, really quite low. First, the character hierarchy is vague. There's no clear level comparison between the protagonist and his junior sister, and the difference in their levels isn't highlighted. If you say the protagonist is strong, everyone he encounters is at least as high a level as him, and often older.

First of all, I think the protagonist handles himself well; he's good at cooking, making money, and remembers ancient poems, which is a plus. The plot is also smooth, which is great. I've read up to chapter 38 so far, and haven't read the rest yet. I'd like to share my thoughts on this so far.

Poison! Someone wants to kill you. The villain made a bet, and if he lost, he'd lose all his cultivation. And you, instead, you're merciful and spare the villain the punishment. What kind of protagonist are you? You're disgusting!

It breaks my heart. I've read so many comments, mostly criticizing the author. I don't know why, is it really that bad? In my opinion, the book's logic might have some issues in the early stages, and the character development wasn't very good, but it improved later on. Yet many people don't see this and just make baseless comments. What right do you have to judge a book's quality?

They already said that letting a tiger return to the mountain will bring endless trouble. They clearly intended to kill you, and you didn't even flinch, just won and left?

The protagonist seems rather tragic right now. One trip to the Western Regions, and his companions attained Buddhahood in an instant; another trip to the Five Poisons, and his companions attained sainthood in an instant; will the next one be Daozi entering the Dao in an instant? His master, who raised him for many years, only wanted him to become a sword cauldron.

The writing style is decent, but there's a reason it hasn't become popular: the logic is completely nonsensical. They just randomly pick anyone they see and recruit them into their sect, even as junior brothers and sisters, or personal disciples! I've never seen anything so bizarre! The most important point is that, despite being a cheat code user, he still can't catch up with the wild junior sister. I'm speechless.

What rubbish is this daily reading list? I'm speechless.

It's not quite a fantasy novel, but it's also full of mundane details like daily life. It's like someone wanders the martial arts world for a few days and then immediately sets up a sect, locking themselves up completely. It's impossible to tell what you're trying to write. If you're going to write a system novel, just write it; you'll find an audience.