The Biography of the Master of Cultivation

For example, "Isn't it just because you don't want to marry him?" Isn't "mo" better than "mo"?

Qi Xiu, Zhang Shishi, He Yu, Chu Duo, Chu Qinmen, and Hehua Sect are basically all in tune. I can see the author's ingenuity, but if the plot development direction is imitated, it will really fall into a cliché.

Can you please not write about sword cultivation, but also write about sword cultivation in the earth department? I have nothing to say.

I just love to watch local people, and they will cheat a lot at every turn.

The author is a book friend of "The Road to the Master of the Cultivation Sect". The first few chapters were okay, but the following dozens of chapters fell apart. Yu Yang's embarrassment is also written with some sloppiness, like a running account.

I have the impression that this book has not just begun, so why does it end?

It feels average at first, but it gets better and better as it goes on 😁

Guys I am shab. This book is very beautiful and the plot is novel. There is no poison at all, and it feels like number one in the world.

What did you write at the beginning of Chapter 28! So disgusting.

I envy those authors who have great minds and inspiration for writing books. Because every time I want to write, my mind is emptier than Antarctica, and the characters and stories are always unclear. So it can be seen that the author of this book is a little talented - but the characterization is terrible, and he often likes to use words such as "jumping high" and "wow cool wow cool" to adults and even the elderly. It can only be said that it still needs to be refined.

There are also many people in the comment circle. Although it doesn't feel perfect yet, it looks like I'm looking forward to continuing to update it. It can be reduced a little deliberately, and the overall positioning will be okay. The character creation is changing a bit quickly, but it's not impossible. Anyway, I'm looking forward to continuing to update and watch it every day.

The writing is interesting. I don't expect it to be as good as Lao Qi's writing, but I'd like to read it.

Okay, okay, I have collected it and will give you the monthly pass.

I read it in one go, it's really good! At least grain level. Come on, author, it will be a masterpiece once it is finished.

The writing is superb, so good! Come on!

Chapter 26 is too retarded. The future catalog is highly toxic. Flash people.

I don't even have a golden finger, so I'll just write it as your mother.

It's the same rubbish thing again. There are no new tricks.

What is Chapter 28 about? Compared with the previous chapters, there is one heaven and one underground.