Clock In, Go to Work, Then Become a Magical Girl

The setting is good, but it's too unbalanced to write that the main character is pretentious and over 50 years old. To put it bluntly, this book is still a story about transformation, and interspersing related plots can increase the fun, but now I feel that the protagonist is trying to be a hypocrite, and the more I read, the more awkward and uncomfortable it becomes.

There is so much negative energy. Not only the protagonist is complaining, but also the supporting characters.

I read 5 chapters, and in about two and a half chapters the protagonist is complaining.

Relying on the defense, this bad protagonist, at the beginning, dislikes all kinds of things, dislikes magical girls, dislikes cheating, and dislikes magic! But I am a pure coward! Rubbish! He is still a poor guy, even his life is a problem! Where does the confidence come from? Right there in Versailles! Disgusting as hell! I really want to see his expression when he falls into the abyss and has no way to call for help, falling into despair! Let's see when the time comes, with a perverted look on his face, he is enjoying himself in a desperate situation (but it grossed me out) and takes the initiative to speed up the process! I'm still like a normal person, crying that I can't do anything, feeling regretful and helpless at the same time!

There are more than 100 pictures. I don't even know what you are writing as I read it. It looks like a waste-chai style, but it is not a waste-chai style. It seems like an invincible style, but it is extremely abstract. It is hesitating and dilly-dallying. No matter what you have to put off, you can obviously solve it at the beginning.

I watched 20 pictures in two minutes. I need writing skills but not writing skills. I need plot but not plot. If you don't have the ability, don't try to become famous by trying to get famous. You won't live long enough to clear your name.

Fengling Yueying said that there is no such garbage blood lock.

For a 2,000-word article, the effective content is only six to seven hundred. Repeating a sentence too many times becomes annoying.

No wonder nine books didn't even reach level two. . . What is this writing? Half of the chapter is psychological description.

The recent plot has not been very good... I would say that the protagonist immediately improved quickly at the beginning, did not improve half-heartedly, and now someone is trying to kill him and his sister, that's it? If there is a hook, just push it... Either you can work hard to become stronger and live a normal life pretending to be an ordinary person, or you can kill the enemy and then find a place to live a daily life... But now I am speechless when I am bullied to the point that I have no strength.