Clock In, Go to Work, Then Become a Magical Girl

The premise is good, but spending over 50% of it on the protagonist's affected and pretentious behavior is too unbalanced. To be frank, this book is still a gender-bending story, and interspersing related plots can enhance the enjoyment, but right now, the protagonist's affected and pretentious behavior just feels increasingly awkward and uncomfortable to read.

There's so much negativity; not only the main characters are complaining, but even the background characters are complaining.

I've read five chapters, and about two and a half of them consist of the protagonist complaining.

Based on his dissertation defense, this pathetic protagonist starts off by showing disdain for everything – magical girls, cheat codes, magic itself! Yet, he's a complete coward! Trash! And a poor wretch, struggling to even make ends meet! Where does his confidence come from? Right there in Versailles! It's disgusting!

Over 100 pages, and as I read on, I still don't understand what you're writing. It's like a "loser" story, but not quite; it seems like an "invincible" story, but it's extremely abstract. It's rambling and dragging your feet, putting things off no matter what, even things that could have been resolved from the beginning.

You only read 20 pages in two minutes. The writing is poor, the plot is nonexistent. If you don't have the talent, don't try to become famous by engaging in publicity stunts. You won't survive long enough to clear your name.

Fenglingyueying stated that there is no such trashy health-locking cheat.

In a 2000-word article, only 600-700 words are actually useful content. Repeating a sentence too many times becomes annoying.

No wonder none of the nine books even reached level two... What kind of writing is this? Half of each chapter is just psychological description.

The recent plot hasn't been very good... If you ask me, the protagonist should have leveled up quickly from the start. Instead, he's only half-baked and hasn't leveled up at all. Now, people want to kill him and his sister. Is that all? If you had a cheat code, you could just sweep through...